Round 2 : Dosti Sadaa Ke Liye : Saviou+Sabah

[saviou]

bohat khoooooooooob MASHALLAH

shukran jiya

 

[New Wolf]

waaah waah bhai...aapne to kumar saanu ki bhi waatt lga di....
apne jb shayri start ki mjhe waha tak hi smjh i...baki kya keh rhe ho pta nhi..

 

[saviou]

waaah waah bhai...aapne to kumar saanu ki bhi waatt lga di....
apne jb shayri start ki mjhe waha tak hi smjh i...baki kya keh rhe ho pta nhi..

shukran janab
matlab apko bhi punjabi nahi aati
waise ye hamd thi jisme hamne Allah ki tareef bayan ki hai
agar chahen to iska tarjuma bhi pesh karden

jazakallah

 

[New Wolf]

shukran janab
matlab apko bhi punjabi nahi aati
waise ye hamd thi jisme hamne Allah ki tareef bayan ki hai
agar chahen to iska tarjuma bhi pesh karden

jazakallah

hmmmm ye theek rhe ga ..tranlat kr dn...
mjhe pnjabi kafi bolni ati he but ye smjh nhi arha ..{(upset)}

 

[saviou]

hmmmm ye theek rhe ga ..tranlat kr dn...
mjhe pnjabi kafi bolni ati he but ye smjh nhi arha ..{(upset)}

jee zaroor ham thori der me ye kardenge insha Allah

 

[saviou]

awal hamad sana Elahi, jo malik har har da
us da nam chitaran wala kise medan na harda..

rehmat da mi pa Khudaya,ty baag suka kr harya..
buta aas umeed meri da kar dy mewe bharya..

adal kren te thar thar kamban uchiyan shana wale..
fazal kre ty bakhshe jawan mai warge muh kale..

je wekhan main amlan walle ty kuj nai mere palle..
je wekhan teri rehmat walle,balle balle balle..


sb se pehli Allah ki hamad-o-sana ki,jo har cheez ka malik hai
us ka zikar krne wala kise b medan me harta nhi


ya Allah rehmat ki barish kro,or ujhre huve baag ko sarsabz kro
meri aas or umeed k pode ko mewon(phal) se bhar do


Allah agr tu insaf krne ye aaye to unchi shan wale log ko teri taqat se kanp jaye.
agr tu apna fazal kre to mere jese kale muh k log yani gunahgaron ki b bakhshish ho jaye..


agr main apne amal ki tarf dekho to mere pas kuch nhi..
lekin agr main tumhari rehmat ki tarf dekho to phr kya hi baat hai..




bukal gham di maar k beithe aa (gham ki chadar orh k baithey hain)
sari khushiyan haar k beithe aa (saari khushiyan haar k baithey hain)
ujaad k dil di nagri noo aape (dil ki nagri ujaar kar)
teri duniya sanwaar k beithe aa (teri dunya sawar k baithey hain)
ishq day chad de dariya de vich (ishq k charhtey darya may)
assi beidi apni taar k beithe aa (hum apni naao(kashti) taar k baithey hain)
lagi ishq di na jane duniya aise layi (dunya na jaane k ishaq ki laggi kesi laggi)
roop faqeeran da dhaar k beithe aa (faqeeron ka roop dhaar k baithey hain)
toon puchiya na haal kadi saada (tum ne kabhi hmara haal na pocha)
dil apna tere toun waar k beithe aa (hum to apna dil tum pe waar k baithey hain)

 

[New Wolf]

boht hi umdaa bhai..jazaak allah..

ye lafz to mjhe boht hi psand aaye..
thnks for sharing nd thnks k apne translte kiya..

agr main apne aemaal ki tarf dekhon to mere pas kuch nhi..
lekin agr main tumhaari rehmat ki taraf dekhon to phir to kya hi baat hai..

 

[*Maryam*]

hmmm well done Saviou
n graceful voice

 

[saviou]

boht hi umdaa bhai..jazaak allah..

ye lafz to mjhe boht hi psand aaye..
thnks for sharing nd thnks k apne translte kiya..

agr main apne aemaal ki tarf dekhon to mere pas kuch nhi..
lekin agr main tumhaari rehmat ki taraf dekhon to phir to kya hi baat hai..

Allahi barik feek
bohot shukriya janab

 

[saviou]

hmmm well done Saviou
n graceful voice

shukran mohtarma

 

[Hannia]

AADAAABBB

ALLAM PNAHHHHHH...............

agr jan ki amman paon tu erz kya h............



kya AALAAA KAALM h jeee


TOSIII TEEE PANJABIIII DI ROOOH DI LAAATNNN PNNN DETIYN NEEEEEEEEEEE

 

[lavina]

Saviou ji aapki awaaz bahot hi achi hai aur pehle to mujhe bi nahi samajh aayi punjabi aati hai par itni nahi
lekin aapki translation read ki to achi lagi bahot very nice work ji {(yahoo12)}
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[saviou]

AADAAABBB

ALLAM PNAHHHHHH...............

agr jan ki amman paon tu erz kya h............



kya AALAAA KAALM h jeee


TOSIII TEEE PANJABIIII DI ROOOH DI LAAATNNN PNNN DETIYN NEEEEEEEEEEE

Aadaab mohtarma
aur bohot shukriya
waise ye last line me kya likha hai apne punjabi me

 

[saviou]

Saviou ji aapki awaaz bahot hi achi hai aur pehle to mujhe bi nahi samajh aayi punjabi aati hai par itni nahi
lekin aapki translation read ki to achi lagi bahot very nice work ji {(yahoo12)}
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bohot bohot shukriya mohtarma

 

[Prince-Farry]

wah...mashAllah bht ache se hamd parhi hai...Allah swt apko hamesha khush rakhein..

 

[Prince-Farry]

ap ko sun kar hamein junaid jamshed ki yaad agae...

 

[saviou]

wah...mashAllah bht ache se hamd parhi hai...Allah swt apko hamesha khush rakhein..

Aameen
shukriya bro

 

[Prince-Farry]

sume ameen

 

[saviou]

ap ko sun kar hamein junaid jamshed ki yaad agae...

ye sahab ko to ab hame sunna hi padega

 

[Atif-adi]

mashallah bht hi achi awaz hai ap ki jese apka andaz hai wese hi apki awaz hai bhai n nazm bih bht umda pari ap ne hanla k hume punjabi nai ati phir bhi pori suni humne JAZAK ALLAH KHER bhai