Dialogue Mega Contest 2010 Jories & contest.... started NOW

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*SHB* said:
Bohat entertaining hai aur savio aur hoor sath mein ho to yeh to hona he tha ;) aur waise hoor ki service se Allah buchae :eek: mein to just hoor ke cafe mein neaker banayan mein jaoun ga :( =))
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hahahaha shb bhaya chatni girne ka kuch pata thori chalta hay ab khud gir gai is min maira kia kasoor :p
 
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:eek:heyyy mirza bhaya aap ne to storm bhaya wala reply hi copy paste kia hay :p

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Innocent_Fairy said:
hahahhaha
superb nasir bhai n hoor siso......=D>
true said guyz........:-bd
i really enjoy ur dailogue its amazing.......
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bohot bohot shukriya :)

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Amreen said:
kEhne ... savio & Hoorain ... very nice...Kya
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bohot bohot shukriya :)

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*Storm* said:
very nice effort saviou and hooooooooooor....
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bohot bohot shukriya Janab :)

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سرفروش said:
Lolz
ارے ناصر بھائی ہم تو نسواری خان عزت والے ہیں
آپ ہم سے بھی بڑا خان نکلا ، ایک لڑکی کو ویٹر بنادیا۔۔۔ ہاہاہاہاہا
اوظالما تم کو شرافت نہیں آتا۔ ہا ہا ہاہاہاہاہاہاہاہاہاہ
جیب خالی ہے اور لڑکی پر بھرم بازی ہاہاہاہا

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hahaha arre janab ham ne kahan

ab ladki khud hamari mezbani karna chahe to kaise roke

waise shukriya isko padhke apko hassi aayi

isse pehle shayad hi koi dekha ho apko aise haste huye

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TARIQ SAEED said:

heheheh :))
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arre waah kya baat hai janab haha

mashraki.larka said:
>:D<Superb....ahaan Buhat khub bhai and Sisso ..
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bohot bohot shukriya bro

malak said:
Zabartast Hoor nd Savio bro
boht hi acha hai .........

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boht hi umada hai
keep it up
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bohot bohot shukriya malak :)

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*SHB* said:
Bohat entertaining hai aur savio aur hoor sath mein ho to yeh to hona he tha ;) aur waise hoor ki service se Allah buchae :eek: mein to just hoor ke cafe mein neaker banayan mein jaoun ga :( =))
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bohot bohot shukriya janab pasand karneka :)
aap sabke chehre pe muskurahat aayi hame yehi chahiye tha
 
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hoorain said:
hahahaha shb bhaya chatni girne ka kuch pata thori chalta hay ab khud gir gai is min maira kia kasoor :p
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haan isme apka kya kasur :p

mirza37 said:
very nice effort saviou and hooooooooooor
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bohot shukriya janab :)

hoorain said:
:eek:heyyy mirza bhaya aap ne to storm bhaya wala reply hi copy paste kia hay :p

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BTW thanx
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arre waah kya kya gaur karte ho aap :p
 
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Wah g wah Saviou bhai aap nay tO kamal kardia hai :)))
great dear & Best Of luCk

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SarfarOsh bhai Great
kia ZabardaSt Acting ki hai khan Sahib ki :)):)):)):)):)):))
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Marina said:
lolzzzzzzzzzzzzz...Excellent job Saviou n Hoor...:-bd
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bohot bohot shukriya :)

Fa!th said:
hahahaha superb.....
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bohot bohot shukriya :)

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Noor_Afridi said:
Wah g wah Saviou bhai aap nay tO kamal kardia hai :)))
great dear & Best Of luCk

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SarfarOsh bhai Great
kia ZabardaSt Acting ki hai khan Sahib ki :)):)):)):)):)):))
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bohot bohot shukriya Janab :)

Nelli said:
OMG{(confuse)}
aap kinne talented log hain:):)
main kya karungi apni dialogues ka:(:(:(
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nelli aap to hamse zyada talented ho :)
koshish karen
 
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saviou said:
Assalamu Alaykum Wrwb :)

kaise hain doston sab theek honge insha Allah
ye choti si koshish hoorain aur saviou ki taraf se
asal me iska sara credit hoorain ko jaata hai kyun k isme sari mehnat unhi ki hai ham bas unka sath de rahe hain
umeed karte hain aap sab ko pasand aayega​

dialogue between customer & waitress

yahan pe kirdar kuch is tarha se hain
customer : saviou
waitress : hoorain

saviou(customer) ( jinhe harr baat may shair bolnay ki aadat hai) restaurant mai daakhil hote hain half deal k chakkar mai :p


saviou : (seat pe baithtay huay) waitress (hoorain) ko bulate hain.


(waitress (hoorain) musalsal daramma dekhnay mai maghan hai)


saviou: waiter!

Hoorain : (uss pe koi assar nahi)


saviou : zorr se table bajate hain'


hoorain : jaldi jaldi bhaagi aati hai.


Saviou : barri derr karr di mehrubaan aatay aatay ;)


hoorain : (heraangi se dekhtay huay menu card aagay karti hai) Sir order plz.


Saviou : (5 min menu card ko ghurte hain phir waitress ki taraf dekhtay huay bolte hain)

dill tou chahtaa hai harr cheez kharindoon
parr jaib kehti hai bakwaas na karr :D


hoorain : (jallay huay andaaz mai) sir! aap se zyada aqalmand tou aapki jaib hai:|


saviou : (burra sa mou banatay huay) order pass karte hain.


hoorain : counter pe chali jaati hai orr phir se dramma dekhnay mai maghan ho jati hai.




Saviou : pichlay 15 min se dramay k harr scene k saath waitress k mou k badaltay huay zaawion ka jaizaa le rahe hain, orr hanss rahe hani.
Sath me sher keh rahe hain

Ye andaz e nazar, gulistane chaman
Lagta nahi aaj ho payega apna bhojan

(45 min guzarnay k baad)


Saviou : waitress!


hoorain : (apni saheli k saath drama discuss karr rahi hai ) yaar kal ki episode mai parwati ne peoush ko thappar maara.
Saheli : kon paarwati?


Saviou : (jo counter k paas hi kharre sab sunn rahe the kehte hain) paarwati hamari paroosan:p


hoorain : jee sir?


Saviou : jee! pichlay 1 ghantay se maine order diaa hai or ap musalsall starplus mai maghan hain'


hoorain : (masoomiat se) parr sir mai tou sony dekh rahi hu :p


Saviou : OMG' (sarr pe haath maartay huay)

Ye kahan aagaye ham yuhi chalte chalte half deal k chakkar me,
ab kaun bachayega hameeeeeee is musheebat me


hoorain : hay ALLAH sir! aap kia suhana k fan hoo?


Saviou : kon suhana ?


hoorain : sir wo jo aapki parrosan hay na parwati uski bahu aapko nahi pata :p


Saviou : (burra sa mou banatay huay) dobara apni jagha pe aa jate hain.
uktaa k saviou tehlnaa shurru karr dete hain...
aur geet gaane lagte hain chalte chalte ek naseehat yaad rakhna kabhi half deal k chakkar me na padhna


hoorain : dramma chhorr k saviou ki taraf mashkook nazron se dekhnay lagti hai, k jesyay wo hotel k chamach churra k bhaagnay waale hoo:p
waitress baghor unka jaiza leti hai orr paas aa k bolti hai k sir plzz tashreef rakhain'


saviou : mai kia yahan tashreef rakhnay aaya hu...aur kahi kia mujay tashreef rakhni nahi aati thi jo mai yahan aata...


hoorain : nahi sir meraaa matlab.......


saviou : nahi tou kia matlab hai aapka k ab aap batayen gi k mai kab tashreef rakhuu(saari bharras nikal k aakhir kaar saviou tashreef rakh hi lete hain ).
itne may hoorain khana le hi aati hai!


Saviou : (apna mou sawaarte hain )


hoorain : khana serve kartay huay bhi tv ki taraf dehan hay or chatnian saviou k kapron pe girr jaati hain.


Saviou : (bechare ka mou sawara hi reh jata hai:p


hoorain : sorry sir i m really sorry mai abi saaf karr deti hu :( orr tension mai wo tissue uthanay ki bajaye table cover se hi saaf karnay lagti hai-tou baaqi bachi hui chatnian bhi girr jaati hain.


Saviou : what the hell! aapko zarra tameez nahi meri itni qeemti shirt kharaab karr di kahan hai manager aapko naukri pe kis ne rakhaa.


hoorain : (ankho mai aansoo laatay huay kisi taza tareen drama k dialogues bolne lagti hay)
sir plz aap manager sir se mat bolna. maire chote chote behan bhai hain sir, mairi walidain boorhe hain ,sir
main unki ek lauti aulaad hoon ,sir hum sab behan bhai yateem hain(wo shayed kuch ziada hi sentimental ho rhi thi);)
phir apni aankhon se ragar ragar kar wo aansu saaf karne lagi jo nikal hi nhi rhe thay.


Saviou : oh plz ab apni ye notanki band karo, khana serve karte hue bhi tum SOny daikh rhi thi

hoorain : (waitress minmanatte hue)par sir wo sony nhi wo to ZEE tha. :0


saviou : (ghusse may usse manager room ki taraf late hain)pata chalta hay manager sahab subha aayain gay


saviou : theek hay aaj main tumhe maaf karta hoon, par tum ne maira bohat nuqsaan kia hay


hoorain : (burra sa moun banate hue )shukrya sir aap kitne dialoo hain, main aap k ehsanaat tale gaude gaude doob chukki hoon ;)



saviou : aur agar maine ghusse may kuch ziada keh dia ho to ignore kar daina



hoorain : koi baat nhi sir main samajh sakti hoon aap ghusse may thay is lie kuch bhi bakwaas karne lagge its ok :)



saviou : what?



hoorain : haan na sir hota hay insan ghuss may kuch bhi bakwaas kar daita hay maine aap ko maaf kia its ok :)(apni taraf se wo saviou pe ehsaan kar rhi hay);)



(saviou ka moun hayrat se khula hi reh jata hay ):0
uff ok ab main chalta hoon



hoorain : ok sir aate rahie ga ;)



saviou : (mur k muskuraate hue ) bare beaabru ho kar taire kooche se hum nikle



hoorain : (dil me minminate huye chal ab apna raasta naap nikalley)



saviou : (baahir nikalte hue saviou mur k daikhte hain waitress (hoorain) abhi bhi Tv daikh rahi hay par is baar wo ye andaza nhi kar pate k wo star plus daikh rhi thi, SOny, ya zEE):(
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lolzzz
Awesome
very creaive linez
enjoyed reading ittt .....
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Hmmmm tari bhai in sub ke dialogue perh ke to meri tangen kanp rahi hai :((

theek hote he post ker don ga :-bd
 
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