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Jin pay guzarti hay wohi jantay hain............ye durd kia hota hay.........bohat umdagi say likha hay.........excellent write up....keep it up
 

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very beautifully written:) it is sad also aur reality k pass coz aaj kal hamare mulk main halaat hi ese hain k ye sab patah nai kitni larkion, maon, behnon ko face karna parta ho ga k unhain khabar mile un ka bhai, shohar, beta be gunayi main dehshat gardi ki bheent char gaya

keep writing sis, bohat taseer hai aap k alfaz aur andaaz-e-bayaan main
 

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bohat hi udas kar diya is story ne....bohat khoobsoorati se likha hai aapne...Keep it up...:)
 

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bohot acha likha hai apne
aur haqeeqat ke kareeb
Allah hamare halat durst kare Aameen
 

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sub sad sad k rona ro rahay hy, tu itni sad stroy per ker sad honay k kiya fayeda

is liye ma nay faisal kiya hay k ma read ha nakro, bad fir sad rehna paray gay {(wacko)}{(wacko)}{(wacko)}
 

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Jin pay guzarti hay wohi jantay hain............ye durd kia hota hay.........bohat umdagi say likha hay.........excellent write up....keep it up
baja fermaya fehmida sis..jis tan lagy oohii janay..
bht shukiya:)


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thanks for nyc sharing
{(thanz)} sis

KhUsh RoHo :x
Abad rohO amin{(ameen)}


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sub sad sad k rona ro rahay hy, tu itni sad stroy per ker sad honay k kiya fayeda

is liye ma nay faisal kiya hay k ma read ha nakro, bad fir sad rehna paray gay {(wacko)}{(wacko)}{(wacko)}
aap ki amad ka shukria :p
{(thanz)}

KhUsh RoHo
Abad rohO amin{(ameen)}


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bohot acha likha hai apne
aur haqeeqat ke kareeb
Allah hamare halat durst kare Aameen
bht shukria Saviou Bro

ALLAH humary LoGon pr rehm Kry amin



KhUsh RoHien
Abad rohO amin{(ameen)}


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very beautiful return :)
{(thanz)} bro

KhUsh RoHo
Abad rohO amin{(ameen)}


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Nice sharing...Aur buht sad kahani hai ... Waqi is tarha he hu raha hai aaj kal....
{(thanz)}

KhUsh RoHo
Abad rohO amin{(ameen)}


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beautiful sharing anju
:)
{(thanz)}

KhUsh RoHo :x
Abad rohO amin{(ameen)}


bohat hi udas kar diya is story ne....bohat khoobsoorati se likha hai aapne...Keep it up...:)
Mafi chahaTi hon amreen sis aap sad hoi ... Bht shukRiya tym nikalnay k liye.:)

KhUsh RoHo :x
Abad rohO amin{(ameen)}


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main sakoon se parh ke comments donga {(oh0(}
ok bro :)


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Assalam o alaikum

bohot hi badhiya likha hai aap ne siso is hi tarah likhte rahiye
Oh sad story ,, nice sharings
hmm sad story

bohat ache se likha aap ne :)
{(thanz)} so much

KhUsh RoHo :x
Abad rohO amin{(ameen)}


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very beautifully written:) it is sad also aur reality k pass coz aaj kal hamare mulk main halaat hi ese hain k ye sab patah nai kitni larkion, maon, behnon ko face karna parta ho ga k unhain khabar mile un ka bhai, shohar, beta be gunayi main dehshat gardi ki bheent char gaya

keep writing sis, bohat taseer hai aap k alfaz aur andaaz-e-bayaan main
{(thanz)}shoomuch sis

KhUsh RoHo :x
Abad rohO amin{(ameen)}
May ALLAH bless U ...{(amin)}
 

Qawareer

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booooooooooht khoobsorat..
parh kar boht maza aaya..
itne maze ka likha ap ne..
lekin akhir me mar gya woh..:( sad ho gya..:(

tehreer me ap ne halaat ko b waziha kia..ek dhamake se log se ghar ujhar jate hain..boht se apne bichar jate hain..

likhti rahen siso..hume intazar rahe ga..
 
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