aapka Manzar ,aapki kahani!! 3 march-2012 to 10-march 2012
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ASSALAM WALIEKUM FRDSSS...lijye hum b agye apni tarf se kuch kehne k liye wese urdu me itne tez to nahi k wrter kaha jye hmen ..bas kuch tasur rkhne wle khaylat hum b rkhte hian
zindagi k rang
aaj b hazaron sochen un yadon se takra jati hian,(me ASMA) ,jahan zindgi k mele to nahi the magr kuch to alag andaz tha jeena ka..apne ami abu bhai k sath me apne goan me raha kerti thi,yaadein jo aaj me mujhe un lamhon me lejati hian jahan mene kuch sapne dekhe the ,ye kahani nahi aik mazmoon b hy zindgi ka aur sachyi hy meri zindgi ki,gareeb gharane se hone k bawajood mere maa baap ne mujhe achi perwarish aur meri her zarurat ko poora krne ki koshish ki..mere abu jo aik kisan the,mehnat mazoori se ghar ka khrch chalte the ..ami unka hath batya kerti thi,ye us zamane ki baat hy jab mere gaon me koi sarkari school nahi tha ...phr b dil me umang thi ,lagan thi parhne ki agye barhne ki,
naam se aik beti hoon me ,jazba betey ka tha mera ,yehi soch ker raat ko sitaron ko dekhte hue me muskuraya kerti thi k aik din me agey brhngi ..taleem se apne maa baap k liye kuch karongi ,unki kabhi ksi chez ki kami nahi hone dongi,wo jazba wo umeed jo mene kuch kerni ki thani thi ,her subha sooraj k sath mere ankhon ki chmak me meri ami dekha kerti thi,gaon me sirf aik teacher tha ..sir abdul kareem ,jo sheher se parh likh ker goan me aye the aur sham k waqt apne ghar k pas aik barye medan me unhon ne chota sa school lagya tha ,me roz wahan jati aur apna her kaam baqadgi se ker k unko dikhati,abu k kheiton ka kaam ab ahista ahista kam hone laga ,amdni ghatne lagi,ahista ahista hmare ghar me khane peene me kami ane lagi,wo din aaj b yaad hy jab ami abu k me akle me bat kerte hue suna k abhi waqt hy beti k liye kuch aktha kerden ,wrna kal ko kcuh nahi bachega..aese hi waqt guzarta raha hum bhai behen bade hogye ,,,gaon me naya sarkaro schol qyen hogya magr mere maa baap k pas pese nahi the mujhe prhane k liye ..mene ghar k sara kaam kaj sekh liya tha ,,magr dil me wohi arzoo ab b baki thi ,me parhongi ,me kcuh karongi,,
sapne to sapne the ankh khulte hi door hojte hian,wese hi zindgi palak jhpak ker guzar jati hy,,kuch dinu me meri shadi kerdi gyi .nyi zindgi me qdam rkha mene,,magr dil m udasi thi k me apne sapno ko pankh na de payi .ab kuch nahi hoga ye soch ker mene ami abu k kehne per han kerdi ,,sayed esliye k yehi sahi hy ..me agr kuch ban ker to kuch na ker payi ..dulhan banker am abu ki hasart poori ker payi me ,,ese umeed per khush hoon me aaj k mene ami abu k liye ziyada na sahi magr kuch to kiya hy ..jo her beti ka farz hota hy ,,aankh ab b bhari hui hy ,magr pata nahi kun jab jab me kisi larki ko job kerta dekhti hoon to mere ander aik hosila jaag uthata hy ..aik din ALLAH meri arzoo zarur poori karega aameen..
bas itna hi likhna tha mujhe ,ye story meri real story se kch kch milti hy ,frdss i hope jitna likha hy wo ksi na ksi k dil ki baat zarur hogi..
THANXX
apki apni ASMA24
waalaikum assalam
Ahaaan beautiful Asma sis
GUD LUCK!
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Wa Alaykum Assalam Wrwb
masha Allah bohot khoob mohtarma
aap to acha khasa likh lete ho
aur Allah se dua hai ke apki tamaam jayez khwahishat ko poora kare Aameen
shukriya janab bht bht ..hum qabile tareef of urdu k hain to nahi mgr phr b apka srahna acha laga janab mohtram
thankuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu chigooo bhaiya ..urdu pasand to bht hy likhne me b maza ata hy ,,bas koshish ki hy apne tarf se kuch kuch .thanxx alot
aweeeeee thatsss so sweeet of u for comments dear hooria sisoo thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx alot dear
Very well written..! Bohat achee stOry likhi hay aap nay bhi sis..! Gaon K sada MahOol aur Logo ki Sada mager achee Zindgai aur sOch ki aakasi kerti hue..!
Gud Luck..!
may Allah increase you writing will
thanxxxxxxxxxxxx alot ML ..THATS so nice of u
waalaikum assalam
Ahaaan beautiful Asma sis
GUD LUCK!
aweeeee thankuuuuuuuuu so much hoorian sisooo ..u ne jab kaha tb se stories soch soch ker stories banyi magr phr jab likhne bethi to khud b khud likhte gyi
jab dil ki baat share kerni hoti hy to lafz khud hi honton per ajte hian ..
aweeee thankuuuuuu sweeeet sisoo faari
all the best to u to ..but me ko u ne link nahi bheja tha apni story ka
hmmm thankuuuuuuuuuuu sweeeet jiyaWALYKUMASLAM
beautiful asma
bohat achi story likhi hay
hmmm ye to achi baat hy apni poetry se msg pohchana...
mashoor to nahi bas ban gaye samjhen
waise mohtarma aap sab ke pyar ki jagah award kabhi nahi lesakta na ham ne kabhi award ke liye kuch kiye hain bas shayari bhi ki to usme logon ko msg dena maqsad hota hai Alhamdulillah
wese meri poetry me b meri koshish hoti hy reall bayan kerna ..chlen yunhi ilkhte rehne..good luckehem ehme i mean mohtarm senior
aj suba pehly dinoo se kuch ziyada garmi ki tapish jism ko jala rahi thi amma,baba jo din bhar k kaam se thaak jaati thi aj kiran aur amir ne un k kaam me madad ka socha aj un ko school se chuti bi thi amir aur kiran ne soraj ki pehli kiran se amma aur baba ki mada shoro ki baba jo dosri taraf beloon ki madad se kowein se paani nikal rahe thy us paani se kiran aur , amir ne baba k sath khitoon ko siraab krne jana tha kareem chacha jo muweshiyoon ko chara daal rahe thy pass hi kuch bakriyaan bi suba ke nashty ka maza ly rahi thi hari hari ghas kha kr chehchahati chiriyaan suba suba jese choo choo kr k hamdo sana me mashgool thi aur paani ka piyala jo pass hi eik peyr k nechy para tha pi kr jese shukar kr rahi hoon jese is garmi me un ko paani milna kisi mujzy se kaam nae tha murgiyaan apna dana dunka chnne me mashgool thi amma chara ly kr aa gai kiran bi usi peyr k necy ata goondh rahi thi kuta jo k paani ki piyaas se apne piyase hone ka bata raha tha amir jo k bachry ke galy me bahoon ko daly kiran se parantha k sath aj lassi pene ki arzoo zahir kr raha tha
sooooooooooooooo beautifull sweeet sisoo faari bht pyara likha hy u ne
all the best- Status