"Farishte se Behtar Hai Insan Ban'na,(my 2nd afsana)

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Farishte se Behtar Hai Insan Ban'na,
Magar Is main Lagati Hai Mehnat Ziada"





sitara or sara kehnay ko to sage behnay te....
lakin adato or kayalat may ake dosray ka b bilkul ulat te....
1 mashriq...to dosre magrib....

sitara jo apnay nam ki manind he chamkte damkte te....or har chamkte cheez ko sona samaj kar usk peechay lapakte te...ye janay bagir
k jis tara 1 parwana apnay shoq or beqarae may jaltay howay agg may khood kar kud ko fana kar layta hay...
ise tara apnay nafsani or munh zoor khowahishat k peechay b insan kud ko tabah or barbad kar dayta....
or usay pata tab chalta hay...jub waqt sar say guzar choka ho....

jub k sara,nimaz rozay ki paband honay k sat sat apnay jazbat,apni lahisla khowahishat par b band bandhnay ki salahiyat rakte te...
go k insan fitratan 1 kamzoor zee nafs hay...lakin Allah SWT nay insan ko ase taqat or khobiya b ata farmaye hay...
jo Allah nay kise dosre makhlooq ko nae ata farmaye...

sitara ki zindage ka maqsad siraf rupay pasay ki dhr may agay nikalna,or zindage k har posheda raz say parda uthana ta....
ise lie apni taleem k bad usnay 1 malti nationl compney may job kar li...
jahan uski zehni salahiyoto ko kum or uski jismani salahiyato ko ziada pazeraye de jate te...
jis k nateejay may roz ba roz sitara nat naye disgine k kapray,jwelry or nae nae fashion k peechay halkan hote rehte te...

ake din sara,apni behan sitara ko nail polish lagatay howay dek rahe te...nazro k mosalsal irteqaz ko mehsos kar k sitara nay sara say pocha k...
sitara; asay kia dek raho sara?
mare skin damak rahe hay na?
kal he fresh fashol karwaya hay.....
sara; sitara tumay nae laghta k jis rah ki tum mosafir bannay chali ho,us rah ki apni koe manzil nae....
sirata; gussay say,kia matlab tumhare is bat ka?
sara; matlab to tum bht ache tara jante ho siatara..k may kia keh rahe ho...
na tum bacchi hom,na may....

sitara; deko maray pas ziada time nae hay,mujy apna dress b abe press krna hay...u know k aj hamare copmney k M.D nay greand parte rakki hay nae project milnay ki khsuhe may...s mujy abe tiyare b karne hay...
so kindly jo kehna hay jalde kaho...i hv no time 4 u sweet sister.....(siatara nay shanay beniyaze say apnay baal jataktay howay kaha)

sara; may tumhara ziada time nae longe sitara,bs siraf itna kaho ge...k jis rah par tum chal nikle ho,waha siraf or siraf kantay he hay...donia may b or akhrat may b...
sitara.; oho kia matlab hay tumhara sara,ab may gar may molanii bun k to nae bet sakte na...or wesay b,may insan ho,farishta nae,jo naik or parsa bun k beth jao...huh...

sara; yahe to asal bat hay sitara...k hum farishtay nae...insan hay...
hum pay prisht say ziada Allah pak nay faraiez nazil kiye hay...
farishtay t siraf apnay bananay walay rub ki din rat tasbeeh kartay hay....isk ilawa unhay or kuch pata he nae,
jub k hamaray Allah nay apni sab say behtareen taqleeq yani hum insano ase bht c cheezay de hay,jo farishto may na paid hay...
jisay aqal,shaoour,achay boray ki tameez,sochnay samjjany ki slahiyat wagera wagera.......
is lie hum insano ko ALLAH nay tadabur karnay ka hukam farmaya hay,k hum ye bat sochay k kuda nay hamay q peda kia?hamara maqsaday hayat kia hay?....

sitara; come 2 the point sara...ye itne moti moti batay mare smajh sy bala tar hay...
may siraf ye jante h k may apni mehnat k bal botay par job hasil ki hay...din rat mehnat kar k pasay kamate ho...ab manay zra sa apnay boss,jo k maray abbo ki umar k hay,unsay tora hanse mazaq kar lia,to kia galat hay ismay.?
or tum jante ho,k itne bae compny may jaha donia jahan ki creem ate hay...may kasay waha tip top say na raho?
ye sab maray job ki dimand hay sara...warna tum jante ho may galat larki to nae...

sara; Allah tumay har galat rastay say bacahye mare behan..may tumhare behan honay k sat sat dst b ho..tumay samjhana mera farz hay...
or ha mehram k ilawa hamara koe b kud sakta rishta hamara saga mehramnae bun skata...paraye larkay ko,bhai,abbo,wagera kehna ye sab b ginah hy sitara....ye mut samjna k koe mard tumharay baap ki jagha hay to wo tumay tumaharay apnay sagay baap ki nazar say dekay ga...

sitara;(1 dum gussay may); stop it sara plz..mare bardash ko or na azmao....
shame on u sara...tumhare soch is qadar choti or behoda hay,may soch b nae skate...
sait amjid maray lie maray baba ki tara hay....wo insan nae,sach may farishta hay warna tum kud he kaho k maray pas siwaye gheese pitte digree k or kia ta?
unhay muj may apni bete dikte hay,ise lie unka ahsan hay jo unho nay mujy itne ache job de...
or tum unko asa bol rahe ho....
che....taff hay tumhare is gattya soch pay....


ye keh kar sitarakamray say bahir nikal jate hay....
jub k sara ye soch k heran hote hay...k sitara ko sait amjid k ahsanat to yad hay...lakin Allah SWT nay jo bay shumar ahsanat hum pay kiye hay,kia w b isnay kabe yad karnay ki koshesh ki hay?????????



hall ka ander ka manzir bht pur khaif ta...inte zabardast lighting or decoration te haal ki k,sitara ki ankhay tore diar k lie band c hogaye...wo mabhoot c haal k darwazay par kare te k sait amjid ki nazar us k sabih chaharay pay par gye...jo aj apnay tamam lawazmat k sat,apni tamam ranayo k sat jalwa afroz te....

sait amjid; aray aoo aoo sitara bete,darwazay pay q karae ho....
sitara 2 qadam agay barh k sait amjid k pas ja k karahe hotehay...

sait amjid apnay tamam dosto say siatara ka taruff kar watay hay,or iski un tamam salahyato ka izhar farmatay hay sab k samnay jo kud sitara b sun k heran te k kia waqe wo itne qabil or eham hay apnay idaray k lie......

pur taqaloof dinner k bad jub sitara gar janay k lie par tolnay lage,q k isay mojoda hal say molhiqa dosray hall may shor sharabay or behangum music ki awazay arahe te...
ye to itnay arsay may wo b samaj choki te,k in bare logo ki parte may kia kia hota hay...
magar deknay ka itefaq aj pehli bar horaha ta...
jis say sitara kafe confuse hogaye te...
go k beshak usnay apnay ap par uppar class ki sare lawazmat dal diye tay...
lakin khameer to uska shareef mah bap kkhoon say he utha ta...

so wo dheeray dheery yaha say kasknay lage te k sait amjid nay usay hat say pakar kar ander andorni hall ki janib lay janay lagay...

jab k sitara 1 dum say bokhla c gaye te...tab he uski boklahat or hichkichahat ko dekttay howay sait amjid nay kaha...

'aray beta kia howa?aray bhai manay nae chata k hamarebete itne jalde hum say juda ho..may to tumay apni wife say b milana chata ta...
siatara; barpoor heran hotay howay...kia sir yaha apki wife b hay?kamal hay itne dair say mujy kise nay milwaya he nae..kud apnay b...

sait amjid;aray beta unhay darasal ye sab parteys pasand nae hay na..so wo hotal k oper walay room may hay...usay manay jub say
tumharay baray may bataya hay k sitara bete bilkul hamare pinky ki tara hay,tab say wo bht bechain hay tum say milnay k lie....

aoo may tumay un say milwata ho,pir beshak mera driver tumay chor day ga.....
siatara motmaeen c ho k sair amjid k sat oper k room may jate hay,jaha baqool sait amjid k unki wife nay mojood hona hay...

lakin kamray may pohanch kar sait amjid kamray ka darwaza lock kar daytay hay,
sitara kamray may charo taraf nazray dorate hay k mrs. sait amjid kaha hay...

lakin dil he dil may usay kuch galat honay ka ahsas horaha ta...kia ?ye usay kud b nae pata ta...

sitara nay dartay dartay sait amjid ki janib deka...to aj unki ankho may wo rang ta...jo 1 urat andhehnay k bawajood b pehchan sakte hay...

najanay urtto ko kuda nay ye kase salahiyat de hay.....k wokaye meel bethay mard ki ankho may b dek kar ye bata sakte hay...k is mard ki ankho may urat k lie kon sajazba,posheeda hay....

sitara 1 dum apni jagah say uthe or darwazay ki taraf barhnay lage...k sait amjid nay usay 1 hat say pakar kar bed par gira diya....

sitara hawas bakta c ho kar sait amjid ko deknay lage....uska zehan ye manny ko ab b inkare ta k jis insan ko kal tak farishtay k roop may deka ta..aj wo shetan k rop may kasay agiya hay.....

sitara; sir ap ap maray sat asa kuch b nae kar saktay...plz plz sir mujy janay day apko Allah rasool ka wasta plz sir....(rotay or atkatay howay usnay kaha)
sait amjid; apni kabasat bare hanse hansty howay; q bhai q nae karsaktay...akhir itney mahini asay he to pesa barbad nae kia na tum pay.....hahahahaha.....

is moqay ki kub say talash te mujy....aj jub wo moqa mila hay...to tumharay kayal may mujy pagal kuttay nay kata hay jo tumay janay do......hahahaha.....

sitara ko apna dimagh sun say honay laga ta....sait amjid k barhtay howay qadam iska hosla past say past karahay tay....
lakin asay may jub insan charo taraf andhery may doob jata hay...to roshni ki 1 kiran yani Allah SWT say madad ki ommed,us par barosa,beshumar nafarmanio k bawajood us say rehmat ki ommed ka dar abe b kola hota hay hum insano k lie....

chonachay sitara nay sadqay dil say YA ALLAH MADAD pokara....or apni sendal ki nokeeli noke say sait amjid k us par joktay howay jisam ko zoor say dikka day kar peechay gira diya...or 1 he jast may bed palangh kar darwazay ki janib door laga de....

pagaloki tara dortay hoay kitnay logo nay usay herani or preshani say deka..usay koe parwa nae te...bs gar ja kar apnay kamray may phoot phoot kar ronay lage....

sara k kamray may atay he sitara us say lapat pare.....or rotay rotay is bat ka etaraf kia,k waqe farishta bannana to asan hay...lkin asal kam asal mehnat or riyazat 1 acha ,naik,pakiza insan bannay may hay....

sait amjid ko wo farishta samjte te usk chand ahsanat ki bina par....lakin wo kia niklay,ye usay aj maloom howa....

jub k sara,1 amm c grelo tyep kilarki te,jis nay sait amjid ki tara na donia deki te...na he umar ka 1 bara hissa gozara ta...
lakin aj Allah k batye howay rastay par chal kar...hozoor pak SAW ki sonnato ka itebah kar k aj wo waqe is mqam par te...
k sitara ko 1 dum say barso porana shair yad agiya...jiska mafhoom aj wo asal zindage may dek kar i te....


"Farishte se Behtar Hai Insan Ban'na,
Magar Is main Lagati Hai Mehnat Ziada"


katam shud
 

Toobi

dhondo gy molko molko milnay k nae,nayab hum..
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apnay parha?ya just nice lik k jan chora di?
writer b may ho iski...koe shak apk?
 
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~Bahaar~

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Tooba sissssssssssss...waqei me apke andar jo jazbaat hai...jo sha'ur hai siss i must say awesome...
likhte to sab hi hain but inme dilki gehrayi na ho to khubsurat alfaaz bhi maanay nhi rakhte aur apne simple words me hi bht kuch likhdiya
very nice sharing sissoo...keep sharing........{(dancing)}
 

Toobi

dhondo gy molko molko milnay k nae,nayab hum..
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Tooba sissssssssssss...waqei me apke andar jo jazbaat hai...jo sha'ur hai siss i must say awesome...
likhte to sab hi hain but inme dilki gehrayi na ho to khubsurat alfaaz bhi maanay nhi rakhte aur apne simple words me hi bht kuch likhdiya
very nice sharing sissoo...keep sharing........{(dancing)}

oho itne tareef b na karo k mujy sharam anay lagay...
bs yar kuch itna kass to nae likka...
bs tora bht liknay ki try ki hay...

itne hosla afzaye k lie thx a lot yar...
 
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