Assalam o ALaikum
2nd Round "KOn Hay acha Jasus" tawaqqa se ziada acha rha sab ne bohat maze ki jasusi ki aur bohat mehnat se task complete kiya,,,
aur Results bhi aik dam se change ho gaye,,competition itna close hay k har ROund k saath results mukammal tor pe badal sakte hain q k final result grand total kar k announce kiya jaayega so har ROund may mazeed mehnat se aap kisi ko bhi beat kar k 1st position le sakte hain
Results kuch is tara hain..
Points arrangement:
Total: 20
Remarks:
Qawareer:
Information jo aap ne collect ki wo authentic thi parhne may bhi interesting thi but ziada ache se arrange ki ja sakti thi ,,aap ne jaise likha it was more like an article or summary ,,hala k format pe thi magar arrangement better ho sakti thi!
Bela:
Aap ne jo biography share ki wo zabardast tareeqe se na sirf format ko follow kar rhi thi balkey parhne may bhi interesting thi parhtey huye acha bhi lag rha tha theek se samajh bhi aa rhi thi points bhi ache se arrange kiye aur boriyat bhi nhi hui! Congratulations is Round may aap 2nd position par hain with 18 points!
Khwahish:
Sweet khwahish ,,bohat sweet style tha biography ka,,start bhi bohat nice tha information bhi sab bilkul theek thi ,,magar SOnu ki personality ko aap mazeed define kar sakti thi Jahan aapko btana tha k inki shohrat ki waja kia hay,,Shohrat ki reasons may kaafi members ne un k threads btaye hain hala k aapko Unki shohrat ki waja may unki personality attribute may se kuch btana tha jo unique hay aur jiski waja se wo jaaney jaate hain ,,to sirf is waja se aur title ki wja se aap k 2 points kam huye!
Muslim:
AApki Biography ka to kia hi kehna parh k lag nhi rha tha k kisi bandey ne first time biography likhi hay,,is se pehle likhi kabhi aap ne?
biography ki start se end tak arrangement,,personality ko jis tara define kiya unki shohrat ki waja aur un ki accomplishments and achievements ko bohat khubsurti se btaya it was almost perfect,,Sirf aik cheez jo point out karungi koi bhi artilce,biography etc likhtey huye sources ko har paragraph k neeche nhi diya jaata Balkey page k end may diya jaata hay wahan aap likhte SOurces aur us k neeche saare links paste kar daite!Congratulations aap is Round ko lead kar rhe hain with 19 points!
Detective:
Detective bohat achi jasusi ki aap ne,Information bhi bilkul theek thi Overall bohat achi thi magar arrangement mazeed behtar ho sakti thi thori sa points aage peeche aur pic last may rehti to 1 point mazeed milta q k information complete thi! aap 3rd Position par hain with 17 Points Congratulations!
TOoba khan:
Tooba khan aapko bhi detective waali baat kehni chahungi arrangement thora change ho sakta tha hala k aap k paas sab se ziada information thi usko mazeed behtar tareeqe se tarteeb deti to wo perfect lagta,,do cheezain point out karungi biography shuroo karte huye Shakhsiyat k naam k neeche aik pic lgayain aur us k baad jitni bhi pics hain yaadgar tasweerain ya awards win karne ki pics unko page k last may PIctutre gallery likh k Attachment may Attach kar deti ya wahan aik saath post karti,,uski waja ye hay k aap ki biography may picss diakhtey huye Parhne walai lines miss ho rhi thi to koi bhi artcile waghaira likhtey huye khaas kar biography ye khayal rakhna chahiye k readers smoothly parh sakkain! aap bhi is Round ki 3rd position par hain Congratulations!
Result ya ROund k muttaliq koi bhi baat ya confusion ho feel free to discuss with me
@Qawareer
@Detective
@*Muslim*
@redrose
@Khwahish
@Bela
2nd Round "KOn Hay acha Jasus" tawaqqa se ziada acha rha sab ne bohat maze ki jasusi ki aur bohat mehnat se task complete kiya,,,
aur Results bhi aik dam se change ho gaye,,competition itna close hay k har ROund k saath results mukammal tor pe badal sakte hain q k final result grand total kar k announce kiya jaayega so har ROund may mazeed mehnat se aap kisi ko bhi beat kar k 1st position le sakte hain
Results kuch is tara hain..
Points arrangement:
Total: 20
Remarks:
Qawareer:
Information jo aap ne collect ki wo authentic thi parhne may bhi interesting thi but ziada ache se arrange ki ja sakti thi ,,aap ne jaise likha it was more like an article or summary ,,hala k format pe thi magar arrangement better ho sakti thi!
Bela:
Aap ne jo biography share ki wo zabardast tareeqe se na sirf format ko follow kar rhi thi balkey parhne may bhi interesting thi parhtey huye acha bhi lag rha tha theek se samajh bhi aa rhi thi points bhi ache se arrange kiye aur boriyat bhi nhi hui! Congratulations is Round may aap 2nd position par hain with 18 points!
Khwahish:
Sweet khwahish ,,bohat sweet style tha biography ka,,start bhi bohat nice tha information bhi sab bilkul theek thi ,,magar SOnu ki personality ko aap mazeed define kar sakti thi Jahan aapko btana tha k inki shohrat ki waja kia hay,,Shohrat ki reasons may kaafi members ne un k threads btaye hain hala k aapko Unki shohrat ki waja may unki personality attribute may se kuch btana tha jo unique hay aur jiski waja se wo jaaney jaate hain ,,to sirf is waja se aur title ki wja se aap k 2 points kam huye!
Muslim:
AApki Biography ka to kia hi kehna parh k lag nhi rha tha k kisi bandey ne first time biography likhi hay,,is se pehle likhi kabhi aap ne?
biography ki start se end tak arrangement,,personality ko jis tara define kiya unki shohrat ki waja aur un ki accomplishments and achievements ko bohat khubsurti se btaya it was almost perfect,,Sirf aik cheez jo point out karungi koi bhi artilce,biography etc likhtey huye sources ko har paragraph k neeche nhi diya jaata Balkey page k end may diya jaata hay wahan aap likhte SOurces aur us k neeche saare links paste kar daite!Congratulations aap is Round ko lead kar rhe hain with 19 points!
Detective:
Detective bohat achi jasusi ki aap ne,Information bhi bilkul theek thi Overall bohat achi thi magar arrangement mazeed behtar ho sakti thi thori sa points aage peeche aur pic last may rehti to 1 point mazeed milta q k information complete thi! aap 3rd Position par hain with 17 Points Congratulations!
TOoba khan:
Tooba khan aapko bhi detective waali baat kehni chahungi arrangement thora change ho sakta tha hala k aap k paas sab se ziada information thi usko mazeed behtar tareeqe se tarteeb deti to wo perfect lagta,,do cheezain point out karungi biography shuroo karte huye Shakhsiyat k naam k neeche aik pic lgayain aur us k baad jitni bhi pics hain yaadgar tasweerain ya awards win karne ki pics unko page k last may PIctutre gallery likh k Attachment may Attach kar deti ya wahan aik saath post karti,,uski waja ye hay k aap ki biography may picss diakhtey huye Parhne walai lines miss ho rhi thi to koi bhi artcile waghaira likhtey huye khaas kar biography ye khayal rakhna chahiye k readers smoothly parh sakkain! aap bhi is Round ki 3rd position par hain Congratulations!
Result ya ROund k muttaliq koi bhi baat ya confusion ho feel free to discuss with me
and GUD LUCk for next ROunds 
@Tooba Khan@Qawareer
@Detective
@*Muslim*
@redrose
@Khwahish
@Bela
