Mega Urdu Contest 2nd Rund Result!
- Thread starter Hoorain
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ap idear duge b tu my my lungamain q dun,,,cheating hogi ye to
fair tareeqe se khailain
try karke dekhlu
nvm...anaaya dadi...sorry bhool gaya tha...izzat se bula len to yeh aur baat hai
wese to ap b mere buzurg hi hain
izzat dena mera farz hai...kuch zyda hi izzat nai ho gai
apki dadi nhi hon
anaaya dadoooo
Assalam o ALaikum
2nd Round "KOn Hay acha Jasus" tawaqqa se ziada acha rha sab ne bohat maze ki jasusi ki aur bohat mehnat se task complete kiya,,,
aur Results bhi aik dam se change ho gaye,,competition itna close hay k har ROund k saath results mukammal tor pe badal sakte hain q k final result grand total kar k announce kiya jaayega so har ROund may mazeed mehnat se aap kisi ko bhi beat kar k 1st position le sakte hain
Results kuch is tara hain..
Points arrangement:
Total: 20
Remarks:
Qawareer:
Information jo aap ne collect ki wo authentic thi parhne may bhi interesting thi but ziada ache se arrange ki ja sakti thi ,,aap ne jaise likha it was more like an article or summary ,,hala k format pe thi magar arrangement better ho sakti thi!
Bela:
Aap ne jo biography share ki wo zabardast tareeqe se na sirf format ko follow kar rhi thi balkey parhne may bhi interesting thi parhtey huye acha bhi lag rha tha theek se samajh bhi aa rhi thi points bhi ache se arrange kiye aur boriyat bhi nhi hui! Congratulations is Round may aap 2nd position par hain with 18 points!
Khwahish:
Sweet khwahish ,,bohat sweet style tha biography ka,,start bhi bohat nice tha information bhi sab bilkul theek thi ,,magar SOnu ki personality ko aap mazeed define kar sakti thi Jahan aapko btana tha k inki shohrat ki waja kia hay,,Shohrat ki reasons may kaafi members ne un k threads btaye hain hala k aapko Unki shohrat ki waja may unki personality attribute may se kuch btana tha jo unique hay aur jiski waja se wo jaaney jaate hain ,,to sirf is waja se aur title ki wja se aap k 2 points kam huye!
Muslim:
AApki Biography ka to kia hi kehna parh k lag nhi rha tha k kisi bandey ne first time biography likhi hay,,is se pehle likhi kabhi aap ne?
biography ki start se end tak arrangement,,personality ko jis tara define kiya unki shohrat ki waja aur un ki accomplishments and achievements ko bohat khubsurti se btaya it was almost perfect,,Sirf aik cheez jo point out karungi koi bhi artilce,biography etc likhtey huye sources ko har paragraph k neeche nhi diya jaata Balkey page k end may diya jaata hay wahan aap likhte SOurces aur us k neeche saare links paste kar daite!Congratulations aap is Round ko lead kar rhe hain with 19 points!
Detective:
Detective bohat achi jasusi ki aap ne,Information bhi bilkul theek thi Overall bohat achi thi magar arrangement mazeed behtar ho sakti thi thori sa points aage peeche aur pic last may rehti to 1 point mazeed milta q k information complete thi! aap 3rd Position par hain with 17 Points Congratulations!
TOoba khan:
Tooba khan aapko bhi detective waali baat kehni chahungi arrangement thora change ho sakta tha hala k aap k paas sab se ziada information thi usko mazeed behtar tareeqe se tarteeb deti to wo perfect lagta,,do cheezain point out karungi biography shuroo karte huye Shakhsiyat k naam k neeche aik pic lgayain aur us k baad jitni bhi pics hain yaadgar tasweerain ya awards win karne ki pics unko page k last may PIctutre gallery likh k Attachment may Attach kar deti ya wahan aik saath post karti,,uski waja ye hay k aap ki biography may picss diakhtey huye Parhne walai lines miss ho rhi thi to koi bhi artcile waghaira likhtey huye khaas kar biography ye khayal rakhna chahiye k readers smoothly parh sakkain! aap bhi is Round ki 3rd position par hain Congratulations!
Result ya ROund k muttaliq koi bhi baat ya confusion ho feel free to discuss with me
and GUD LUCk for next ROunds@Tooba Khan
@Qawareer
@Detective
@*Muslim*
@redrose
@Khwahish
@Bela
Walaikum Salam Wrwb,
well mai sabke tu nai kah sakte per jenhune bhi mujhay Tag kia unke BioGraphy work mai ne dekha it was pretty good haa per Tooba khan k thread mei, mai comment nai kersake but mai ne unke biography padhe tu maze ka tha and it was really nice, sabhe biography with the images enhue define kiya so she presented really well.
2nd Muslim k jho biography tha usay passand kerne k kafi wajah hain ek tu k enhune ek buhut he passandeeda shaksiat k bare mei likha tha aur dusre yeh k unhone her ek baat and paragraph k saath source and link share kiye jesse mazeed yeh andaza lagaya jasakta k enke bataye hue information kitna authentic or accurate hain, @hoorain muslim k biography work mei source k bare mei jho aap ne kaha k us mei de gaye hue links ek article ya biography mei hamisha bottom of the page hota hain then let me share my point in this k I think jes terha muslim ne share kiya, vohi source set hote hain aur aapka bhi manna sahi hain k kessi article mei source hamisha page k end mei hota hain but voh source ka link complete article ko define kerta hain and serf 1 ya 2 link hota hain, to describe the originality source of that writer or information, news etc tu uske source end of the page log share kerte hain lekin jub koi just one by one paragraphs ko define kare then unke multiple links bottom of the page share nai kerte balke individualy at the bottom of each paragraph share kerte hain, to show them as a reference, thats it.
so muslim did it well . that's how I know
baki Congratulation to Muslim. good luck for the rest.
yeah as far as this contest is concerned ,,aapki abat sahi hayWalaikum Salam Wrwb,
well mai sabke tu nai kah sakte per jenhune bhi mujhay Tag kia unke BioGraphy work mai ne dekha it was pretty good haa per Tooba khan k thread mei, mai comment nai kersake but mai ne unke biography padhe tu maze ka tha and it was really nice, sabhe biography with the images enhue define kiya so she presented really well.
2nd Muslim k jho biography tha usay passand kerne k kafi wajah hain ek tu k enhune ek buhut he passandeeda shaksiat k bare mei likha tha aur dusre yeh k unhone her ek baat and paragraph k saath source and link share kiye jesse mazeed yeh andaza lagaya jasakta k enke bataye hue information kitna authentic or accurate hain, @hoorain muslim k biography work mei source k bare mei jho aap ne kaha k us mei de gaye hue links ek article ya biography mei hamisha bottom of the page hota hain then let me share my point in this k I think jes terha muslim ne share kiya, vohi source set hote hain aur aapka bhi manna sahi hain k kessi article mei source hamisha page k end mei hota hain but voh source ka link complete article ko define kerta hain and serf 1 ya 2 link hota hain, to describe the originality source of that writer or information, news etc tu uske source end of the page log share kerte hain lekin jub koi just one by one paragraphs ko define kare then unke multiple links bottom of the page share nai kerte balke individualy at the bottom of each paragraph share kerte hain, to show them as a reference, thats it.
so muslim did it well . that's how I know
baki Congratulation to Muslim. good luck for the rest.
but jitna acha unho ne likha mazeed perfection aati q k professionaly at the end hi share hote hain picture galley bhi aur sources bhi in a BIography!
but its f9 in thsi contest us k points nhi kaate maine just next time k liye suggestion di
thanx for ur concern
nai, mai generally bol rahe the not in his favoryeah as far as this contest is concerned ,,aapki abat sahi hay
but jitna acha unho ne likha mazeed perfection aati q k professionaly at the end hi share hote hain picture galley bhi aur sources bhi in a BIography!
but its f9 in thsi contest us k points nhi kaate maine just next time k liye suggestion di
thanx for ur concern
k paragraph mei source ki rulling vaise huti hain. baki points and contest k rulling k tu aap khud behter samajhte ho nawazishhahaha hyeee kachu maasar
nhi main nhi karti try
muje yaqeen hay aap apni baat k pakkey ho
thx 4 ur coments sabah..Walaikum Salam Wrwb,
well mai sabke tu nai kah sakte per jenhune bhi mujhay Tag kia unke BioGraphy work mai ne dekha it was pretty good haa per Tooba khan k thread mei, mai comment nai kersake but mai ne unke biography padhe tu maze ka tha and it was really nice, sabhe biography with the images enhue define kiya so she presented really well.
2nd Muslim k jho biography tha usay passand kerne k kafi wajah hain ek tu k enhune ek buhut he passandeeda shaksiat k bare mei likha tha aur dusre yeh k unhone her ek baat and paragraph k saath source and link share kiye jesse mazeed yeh andaza lagaya jasakta k enke bataye hue information kitna authentic or accurate hain, @hoorain muslim k biography work mei source k bare mei jho aap ne kaha k us mei de gaye hue links ek article ya biography mei hamisha bottom of the page hota hain then let me share my point in this k I think jes terha muslim ne share kiya, vohi source set hote hain aur aapka bhi manna sahi hain k kessi article mei source hamisha page k end mei hota hain but voh source ka link complete article ko define kerta hain and serf 1 ya 2 link hota hain, to describe the originality source of that writer or information, news etc tu uske source end of the page log share kerte hain lekin jub koi just one by one paragraphs ko define kare then unke multiple links bottom of the page share nai kerte balke individualy at the bottom of each paragraph share kerte hain, to show them as a reference, thats it.
so muslim did it well . that's how I know
baki Congratulation to Muslim. good luck for the rest.
u ko may is lie tag nae karte k u ko proper urdu samaj nae ate...nd aksar yaha log kehtay hay k may hard urdu use karte ho..so thts y....ise lie apko story may b tag nae kia..q k siwaye 2,4 membaro k koe b read nae karta dehan say...jinko urdu ate hay wo b nae...
oopsh no i m not saying k aap favor may honai, mai generally bol rahe the not in his favor
i was just explaining points criteria,,that point was not included,,,that was just a suggestion jab AIk hi TOpic pe saara article chalna ho SPecially Biography to koshish ye ki jaati hay SOurces ENd may diye jayain aur aik do ki bjaye sab pictures bhi ENd may picture gallery may di jayain ,,the reason is only to make the article smooth to read! after that rreaders can visit sources and pictures which really looks beautiful and neat
idher kya ho rha hai...................Oh acha but I do read it, kuch samajh na aye tu pochte zaroor hu so aap tag kersakte ho es mei ko dekat na hainthx 4 ur coments sabah..
u ko may is lie tag nae karte k u ko proper urdu samaj nae ate...nd aksar yaha log kehtay hay k may hard urdu use karte ho..so thts y....ise lie apko story may b tag nae kia..q k siwaye 2,4 membaro k koe b read nae karta dehan say...jinko urdu ate hay wo b nae...
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hmmm oh okoopsh no i m not saying k aap favor may ho
i was just explaining points criteria,,that point was not included,,,that was just a suggestion jab AIk hi TOpic pe saara article chalna ho SPecially Biography to koshish ye ki jaati hay SOurces ENd may diye jayain aur aik do ki bjaye sab pictures bhi ENd may picture gallery may di jayain ,,the reason is only to make the article smooth to read! after that rreaders can visit sources and pictures which really looks beautiful and neat