Assalam o ALaikum
3rd ROund may participants ne khaasi susti ka muzahira kiya ,,,magar last date pe aik saath sharing ki aur bohat ache ROund complete kiya!
sabki koshish bohat achi aur qabil-e-tareef hay!
Points Arrangement:
Total=20(Title=5, story=15)
ye rhi Result Sheet:
REMARKS:
First of all to sab participants @faari ko Welcome karain jo k 3rd ROund se Hamare saath as a guest join kar chukki hain aur 3rd ROund may bohat hi Zbardast tehreer likhi i wish wo 1st ROund se hi hmare satah hti,,Well Done faair
Qawareer:
Title was superb,,story was double superb Bohat neat,,khubsurat words khubsurat theme perfect story ,,well done is ROund may TOp par hain aap with (5+14) points k saath COngratulations!
Neevrap:
Story was simple COllege ki saer karwayi aap ne,,WOrds ache thay aasani se story samajh aa rhi thi,,words mistakes nhi thi jumley ache se tarteeb diye ,,it was a simple interesting story!very nice!
Bela:
As ususal Theme sab se different tha,,Story achi thi but thori ambiguous ho rhi thi kahi kahi se rabt toot rha tha story may to samjhna kahi kahi mushkil tha,,,title was gud story theme very unique,,,3rd Position par hain aap (5+12) points k saath Congratulations!
Khwahish:
Khwahish it was sweet attempt,Thori si mazeed practice karain tan k jumlo ki arrangement aisi ho jo story ko complete bnaye!
Muslim:
Muslim bro nice title ,,very nice theme bohat ache ishaar aur bohat achi tehreer,,Jumlon ki arrangement ka thora dehan rakhain,,aur aap urdu language bhi thori different tara bolte hain us pe bhi thora dehan rakhain jumla complete kiya karain,,is Round may 2nd position par hain with 18 points (4.5+13.5)k saath!COngratulations!
Detective;
Bohat acha likha apa ne muje haqeeqtan aapki story bohat interesting alggi words,,sentencesd sab zabardast thay ,,,story ka end bohat attractive aur perfect tha AAghaz k Saath BOhat Insaaf kiya aap ne 3rd positio par hain aap bhi with 17 points COngratulations!
GUD LUCK FOR final ROund!
@Qawareer
@neevrap
@*Muslim*
@Bela
@Khwahish
@faari