chaiye pine se rang kala ho jata hai miss beauty
chaiye pine se rang kala ho jata hai miss beauty
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa waowwwwwwwwwwwww thank uhuh...
mai apna nashta ly kar aayi hon..sath me apka b
aa jao bhooki aapa
tou agey konsa safaid hai ,,,,,,,,,,,mera rang tou pehley hi sanwla haichaiye pine se rang kala ho jata hai miss beauty
Allah apko sehat dy..Ameenaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa waowwwwwwwwwwwww thank u
uhhhhhhhh haey jab sey bimaar hui hon bhook bohot lgti hai,,,,
AMEEN>........[DOUBLEPOST=1348374745][/DOUBLEPOST]Allah apko sehat dy..Ameen
hahaha safi bhayaaaaaaaaaaa kacchu maasarmai to mistakes he nai karta
Islye meri tehreer in sabke baraber nai hai balke compete he nai kar sakti islye to mera nam yaha nai likha hoor ne kyu ke mere liye alag se thread lagaegi na hoor
koi nae sirf apne pe comment karain baqio pe baqi kar lain gayewalaikum salam
waqai likhne me qawareer ka jawab ny
phir b ek bacha kadi takkar de raha hy buzurgu ku
baki poitns pr no comments
my tu bhul hi giakoi nae sirf apne pe comment karain baqio pe baqi kar lain gaye
meri urdu esi hi hy koshish jari hy k thik hu thuri tuMuslim:Muslim bro nice title ,,very nice theme bohat ache ishaar aur bohat achi tehreer,,Jumlon ki arrangement ka thora dehan rakhain,,aur aap urdu language bhi thori different tara bolte hain us pe bhi thora dehan rakhain jumla complete kiya karain,,is Round may 2nd position par hain with 18 points (4.5+13.5)k saath!COngratulations!
yeah its alri8,,first time may phir bhi aap bohat zabardast kar rhe ho!my tu bhul hi gia
meri urdu esi hi hy koshish jari hy k thik hu thuri tu
but kabi kabi baat karte karte meri aam urdu beech me ajati hy kia karu
shukria[DOUBLEPOST=1348382605][/DOUBLEPOST]yeah its alri8,,first time may phir bhi aap bohat zabardast kar rhe ho!
waarna jo lg first time is tara muqablon may hisssa lain wo tina acha nhi likh paate
ALL the best likhte rhain
mujhey yaqeen nhi hua 17 points daikh kr mera target tha k mujhey 11 sey 13 tak point milney waley hai
kia yaqeen dilaya tha aap neshukria[DOUBLEPOST=1348382605][/DOUBLEPOST]
my ne yaqeen dilaya tha na
pta hay muje apa k dimagh may kia chal rha haysecrete
shukriapta hay muje apa k dimagh may kia chal rha hay
aik general sugestion sab k liye bolungi
BOhattt lamba likh k bohat saari ghaltiyan kar k marks ziada kam hote hain chahey theme achi ho q k marks ghaltio pe kattey hain
magar agar chota likha hay aur ghaltiyan kam hain to marks bhi kam minus hote hain chahey theme common sa hi ho! Ghaltiyan parhne waale k notice may bohat jaldi aati hain jaise teacher k notice may paper ki ghalti jaldi aati hay
agar kisi ko andaza hay k wo bohat acha nhi likh sakte ya unhe pta hay k wo mistakes kar jaate hain to unhe short likhna chahiye ,,jab perfection aa jaaye to jitna marzi lamba likhain parhne walaon ko bhi maza aata hay!
hahahashukria
ab ki bar meri kahani bht short hugi
kitni short maham hamad se milli aur mill kr chali gaishukria
ab ki bar meri kahani bht short hugi
hehe ny g poore situation ane hy bas itni shortthanks khawahish
@hoorain wese tu main last round me bi participate kr rahi hoon even k complete story bi zehan me a chuki hai lkn final round me bi mujhy kuch nae milly ga kya ??????????[DOUBLEPOST=1348385971][/DOUBLEPOST]
kitni short maham hamad se milli aur mill kr chali gai
hum ne choti aur mazah se pur kahani likhne ki koshish ki lekin teacher ji kya kren humara dil o dimagh aj kal boht dukhi hai jo sochte hain inna sanjida aur lamba ho jata haipta hay muje apa k dimagh may kia chal rha hay
aik general sugestion sab k liye bolungi
BOhattt lamba likh k bohat saari ghaltiyan kar k marks ziada kam hote hain chahey theme achi ho q k marks ghaltio pe kattey hain
magar agar chota likha hay aur ghaltiyan kam hain to marks bhi kam minus hote hain chahey theme common sa hi ho! Ghaltiyan parhne waale k notice may bohat jaldi aati hain jaise teacher k notice may paper ki ghalti jaldi aati hay
agar kisi ko andaza hay k wo bohat acha nhi likh sakte ya unhe pta hay k wo mistakes kar jaate hain to unhe short likhna chahiye ,,jab perfection aa jaaye to jitna marzi lamba likhain parhne walaon ko bhi maza aata hay!