moja haket me tum sa koi lafez kehan tha

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moja haket me tum sa koi lafez kehan tha
mager me scoohta ho ios ka nageem kia ho ga
bhoot sa dil tote ha is donya me
mager me scooh ta ho ab hemra kai ho ga​
 
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Precious

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Mujhay haqeequt main tum say koi lufz kahna tha
Magar main sochta hoon uska Unjaam kia ho ga
Bohat say dil tootay hain is dunia main
Magar main sochta hoon ub hamara kia ho ga.


Sahi samjhi na.

Good work.
 

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Emo buchchay aap apni wali delete kar kay yay hum nain jo sahi kar kay likh dia hai yay laga lain to parhnay main samjh aay gi aur maza bhi.
 

payal

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Bahut khoob......
Aaj tak qayam hai uske laut aane ki umeed
Aaj tak thairi hai zindagi apni jagah
laakh yeh chaha k usko bhool jaaun faraz
hausle apni jagah,bebasi apni jagah
 

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میرا خدا ہر روز مجھے نئی خوشیاں دیتا ہے
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boht khoob likha ap ne..
lekin plz ap sahi tarha likha kia kren...smjhana mushkil ho jata hai alfaz ko..
apki shayri boht umdah hai
 
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