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hoorain said:
gr8 bela
hamesha ki tara aapne munfarid theme liya story k liye,,,aapki tehreer parhtey huye muje hamesha aise lagta hay Jaise Main chracter aap khud h,,ya koi aisa kirdar jo aapki deep observation rha ho,,,,is story may bhi muje lagga k Minha key character may kahi na kahi aap ne apne jazbaat ko bayan kiya hay!
U must keep writing aahista aahista mazeed behtar ho ajyega INSHAALLAH!
baqi k remarks result may :p
GUD LUCK :-bd
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mujhy lagta ha koi bhi agr kuch likhta ha to us me apni life ki kuch batin khud bakhud add ho jati han.......
nme kbhi bhi esa topic nai likh sakti jo mere dil k qareeb na ho.......
huuuuu dara diya you ne ok..... lets see
waitng fr results[DOUBLEPOST=1348243305][/DOUBLEPOST]@Lost Passenger
 
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mashaAllah.......:-bd
mozu ka intikhab boht acha kia, mujhe lga kahani me ap thin..khas'kar yahan Minha k father ka zikar tha..ap k apne jazbaat the..!
behtareen aasatza humesha se humare mashre ki zarurt rahe hain..ek aham masle ki tarf tawaju dilai..khayalat ache the.
likhti rahe humari pur'khalos duaen ap k sath hain@};-
 
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waah
ek se brh kr ek hay yahan :-ss
acha hua main ne part nii liya :p

bahuttttttt bahutttt acha likha aapne b ... :-bd

Gud Luck {}{43r5
 
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Bela buhat hi khobsurat tehreer likhi hey tum ney aur ye baat mai'n banaowty tor per nahi'n keh raha mujhey waqi ye tehreer pasand aai hey, lafzoo'n ka chunao aur unka jumloo'n mai'n istimaal khobsurti sey kia gaya hey aur mozu bhi umdha hey tu phir aisi kisi bhi tehreer ki tareef na kerna jis mai'n ek behtreen tehreer key tamam awamil shamil hoo'n intihai ziyadhti ki baat hogi,mujhey sirf itni shikayet hey keh agr Allah ney tumhai'n likhney ki salahiyet sey nawaza hey tu tum likhti'n kyoo'n nahi'n,tumhari mazeed tehreeroo'n ka intizar rahey ga,Allah tumhai'n hamaisha khush aur salamet rakhey,Ameen
 
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ma sha Allah
bht behtareen lagta hy haqeeqi kahani hy
my ne sucha thura thura kar ke parhun lekin poora hune tak parhta gaya bht dil chasp[DOUBLEPOST=1348338453][/DOUBLEPOST]
Rubi said:
waah
ek se brh kr ek hay yahan :-ss
acha hua main ne part nii liya :p

bahuttttttt bahutttt acha likha aapne b ... :-bd

Gud Luck {}{43r5
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ap part lete tu my pehle round me hi out hu jata :p
 
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Qawareer said:
mashaAllah.......:-bd
mozu ka intikhab boht acha kia, mujhe lga kahani me ap thin..khas'kar yahan Minha k father ka zikar tha..ap k apne jazbaat the..!
behtareen aasatza humesha se humare mashre ki zarurt rahe hain..ek aham masle ki tarf tawaju dilai..khayalat ache the.
likhti rahe humari pur'khalos duaen ap k sath hain@};-
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hye kya bht pata chal raha tha..........
hoor ne bhi note ki yehi bat......:oops:
thank you so much annu [DOUBLEPOST=1348339425][/DOUBLEPOST]
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waah
ek se brh kr ek hay yahan :-ss
acha hua main ne part nii liya :p

bahuttttttt bahutttt acha likha aapne b ... :-bd

Gud Luck {}{43r5
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thank you shonu paru............
you part leti to bht maza atta........
fir hum dono frends mill k is contest ki esi ki test kr dete...........{(554)}[DOUBLEPOST=1348339539][/DOUBLEPOST]
Lost Passenger said:
Bela buhat hi khobsurat tehreer likhi hey tum ney aur ye baat mai'n banaowty tor per nahi'n keh raha mujhey waqi ye tehreer pasand aai hey, lafzoo'n ka chunao aur unka jumloo'n mai'n istimaal khobsurti sey kia gaya hey aur mozu bhi umdha hey tu phir aisi kisi bhi tehreer ki tareef na kerna jis mai'n ek behtreen tehreer key tamam awamil shamil hoo'n intihai ziyadhti ki baat hogi,mujhey sirf itni shikayet hey keh agr Allah ney tumhai'n likhney ki salahiyet sey nawaza hey tu tum likhti'n kyoo'n nahi'n,tumhari mazeed tehreeroo'n ka intizar rahey ga,Allah tumhai'n hamaisha khush aur salamet rakhey,Ameen
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sohail bahai bht time pehly likhti thi bt english language me..........
publish bi ho jata tha college uni k mags me...........

bt shadi k baad nai likha.....
so is contest me part liya.......

bht bht shukriya apne innni dher sari tareef kr di..........[DOUBLEPOST=1348339605][/DOUBLEPOST]
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ma sha Allah
bht behtareen lagta hy haqeeqi kahani hy
my ne sucha thura thura kar ke parhun lekin poora hune tak parhta gaya bht dil chasp[DOUBLEPOST=1348338453][/DOUBLEPOST]

ap part lete tu my pehle round me hi out hu jata :p
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ji haqeeqi hi ha ak tarhan se..............
thanks pori story parhne k lye................:)
 
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Bela said:
hye kya bht pata chal raha tha..........
hoor ne bhi note ki yehi bat......:oops:
thank you so much annu
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hahaha..nhi boht pata b nhi chal raha tha:p
lekin mujhe pehle b pata tha ap k father k bare me to parhte huve bilkul ap hi lgin:)
 
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Zonish said:
Bohat umdha,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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thanks..........
itna time de k parhne k lye[DOUBLEPOST=1348390731][/DOUBLEPOST]
Zonish said:
Bohat umdha,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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thanks..........
itna time de k parhne k lye[DOUBLEPOST=1348390799][/DOUBLEPOST]
Qawareer said:
hahaha..nhi boht pata b nhi chal raha tha:p
lekin mujhe pehle b pata tha ap k father k bare me to parhte huve bilkul ap hi lgin:)
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hmm bht se logon ko esa hi laga..........:)
 
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