Poet Of The Month February 2013

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Rahath

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ASSALAMOALAIKUM FRIENDS
ye mainy khud sy kuch likha hai agar pasand na aye
ya koi kami ho tu lazmi bateaga next time or acha likhn ki koshish krunge thakns


******* payaar zindagi hai *********
***payar ragon main lahu ki tarah gardish krta hai ******
***payar dilon k rishty ka naam hai payar wo jazbaat hain*****
****jo kisi dosre k aagy jhuk jaty hain payar na tu be bas hota hai ****
****or na he majboor*******
****ye tu bebs logon main zindagi ly ata hai or khud *****
*****majboor ho k kisi doosre ki majbori door krta hai*****
****pyar wo tarap hai jo khatm nhi hoti ye khushi hai*****
****or iska dukh es sy be meetha hai*****
*****ye kisi dosre ki zaat main fana hony ka naam hai ****
*****ye fareeq k lamhon main paida hota hai*****
*****or wasl main jawan hota hai *****
*****payar arzoo hai zindagi ki tarang hai *****
*****aisa phool hai jis angan main khilta hai******
*****usy gulistan bana deta hai ******
****payar adab hai jism ki rooh hai****
****payar k liy koi umer ki qaid nhe na koi waqt mukrar hai****
*****ye jab chahye jahan chahy ho jata hai****
****payar k moor sy wapsi ka koi raasta nhe hai **** @cutepoison @S_ChiragH @SHAZIE @Silent_tear_hurt @umer847 @DuFFer
 

Jahil

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ASSALAMOALAIKUM FRIENDS
ye mainy khud sy kuch likha hai agar pasand na aye
ya koi kami ho tu lazmi bateaga next time or acha likhn ki koshish krunge thakns


******* payaar zindagi hai *********
***payar ragon main lahu ki tarah gardish krta hai ******
***payar dilon k rishty ka naam hai payar wo jazbaat hain*****
****jo kisi dosre k aagy jhuk jaty hain payar na tu be bas hota hai ****
****or na he majboor*******
****ye tu bebs logon main zindagi ly ata hai or khud *****
*****majboor ho k kisi doosre ki majbori door krta hai*****
****pyar wo tarap hai jo khatm nhi hoti ye khushi hai*****
****or iska dukh es sy be meetha hai*****
*****ye kisi dosre ki zaat main fana hony ka naam hai ****
*****ye fareeq k lamhon main paida hota hai*****
*****or wasl main jawan hota hai *****
*****payar arzoo hai zindagi ki tarang hai *****
*****aisa phool hai jis angan main khilta hai******
*****usy gulistan bana deta hai ******
****payar adab hai jism ki rooh hai****
****payar k liy koi umer ki qaid nhe na koi waqt mukrar hai****
*****ye jab chahye jahan chahy ho jata hai****
****payar k moor sy wapsi ka koi raasta nhe hai **** @cutepoison @S_ChiragH @SHAZIE @Silent_tear_hurt @umer847 @DuFFer
woww mashAllah boht acha likha hai rahath yaqin nhi arha itna rude behave krne wali larki piyaar ke bare main itna kuch janti hai well best of luck and nice sharing
 
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ASSALAMOALAIKUM FRIENDS
ye mainy khud sy kuch likha hai agar pasand na aye
ya koi kami ho tu lazmi bateaga next time or acha likhn ki koshish krunge thakns


******* payaar zindagi hai *********
***payar ragon main lahu ki tarah gardish krta hai ******
***payar dilon k rishty ka naam hai payar wo jazbaat hain*****
****jo kisi dosre k aagy jhuk jaty hain payar na tu be bas hota hai ****
****or na he majboor*******
****ye tu bebs logon main zindagi ly ata hai or khud *****
*****majboor ho k kisi doosre ki majbori door krta hai*****
****pyar wo tarap hai jo khatm nhi hoti ye khushi hai*****
****or iska dukh es sy be meetha hai*****
*****ye kisi dosre ki zaat main fana hony ka naam hai ****
*****ye fareeq k lamhon main paida hota hai*****
*****or wasl main jawan hota hai *****
*****payar arzoo hai zindagi ki tarang hai *****
*****aisa phool hai jis angan main khilta hai******
*****usy gulistan bana deta hai ******
****payar adab hai jism ki rooh hai****
****payar k liy koi umer ki qaid nhe na koi waqt mukrar hai****
*****ye jab chahye jahan chahy ho jata hai****
****payar k moor sy wapsi ka koi raasta nhe hai **** @cutepoison @S_ChiragH @SHAZIE @Silent_tear_hurt @umer847 @DuFFer
Wa'alaikumussalaam MASHA'ALLAH bohot hi umdaah shayari @rahath :-bd
 

Jahil

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Main actually aisa e kch socha tha jysa fari darling ny share kiya ;))
bt fahadd bro & fari donon ki nazam thi so ab main ghazal likh k share kr rhi hun​
achi na lagy toh bataana :| agr apna hashar nashar krwana hy toh /:)
Mujhy lahu pr lahu-luhan sy acha word nii suja :|
Sharm-o-haya ky pardy mein lipti gairat lahu-luhan hy ,
Tery ghar ky kony mein simti pari izzat lahu-luhan hy ,
Kahin nanhe-paudy pr sy hy paed ka saya uth gaya ,
Kahin be-zubaan bachy ki masumiyat lahu-luhan hy ,
Jhoot ko chupany ki mijalen pakar rahin hyn zor ,
Aaj sach kehny ki himmat lahu-luhan hy ,
Kahin daulat ki hawis , Koi bhuka shohrat ka ,
Ae shehr-e-khwahish teri badolat insaniyat lahu-luhan hy ,
Hasad sy chalni hy har kaleja yahan ,
Aaj bhai-chary ki riwayat lahu-luhan hy ,
Khaak-nasheenon mein hy akad chit'tanon ki si ,
Qaum ko sudharny chali hakumat ' lahu-luhan hy ... !
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Guneh-gari mein inteha kr chuka jo ,
Us musalman ki ibadat lahu-luhan hy ... !
woww muje tag nhi kya bt its ook but ur ghazal is very nice i knw ghazl nazm se b mushkil hoti hai bt u ne boht hi achi likhi[DOUBLEPOST=1361452766][/DOUBLEPOST]
Okesh g chiraghu bhaya k kehne pey main b try karing shayron ki roohon ko besakun krne ki :p

Main kis baat par karun matam aey Dunya
Auron ki tara wo bhi bewafa nikla,aur to kuch nhi!
Kio har waqt k giley shikwe Rona Dhona
Bas lahu k Rishton may na rhi Wafa,Aur to Kuch nhi!
Kio Hama Waqt Poochtey rehte ho sabab-e-bezari
Dil ko na rha ab kisi ka aitbaar,aur to kuch nhi!
Dukh nhi us k yun badal jaane ka aey dost
bas usse samjha tha dunya se juda,aur to kuch nhi!
na kar zeya-e-waqt hamdardiyan jataney may
bas yhi na k main aitbara haar betha hun? aur to kuch nhi!
ye na samajh k ik main hi hun bawafa bharri dunya may
bewafayi ka na mil sakka mujey moqa ,aur to kuch nhi!
na daikh yun afsurda si nazron se chehrey ko maire
bas kuch aansu hi to hain zabt-e-gham se mawra, aur to kuch nhi!
wowww hoor niceee ghazal meri to abi hi nazr pari boht achi ghazal likhi hai mashAllah se
 
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Rahath

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woww mashAllah boht acha likha hai rahath yaqin nhi arha itna rude behave krne wali larki piyaar ke bare main itna kuch janti hai well best of luck and nice sharing
kya matlab hai rude hun es ka matalb ye nhe k mujh kisi cheez ka ehsaas nhe kafi galt soch hai aapki change kro
 
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