tum taqalluf ko bhi ikhlas samajhte ho

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Hay yeh tumhari poetry nahi hay ok is tarah mat kia karo... or yeh jo tum nay she'ar post kia hay yeh bhi ghalat hay ok sahee kuch is tarha hay.

Tum tikalluf ko bhi khuloos samajhtay ho Faraz.
Dost hota nahi her hath milanay wala.

agar aap khud likh nahi saktay tao kam az kam doosroon ki poetry tao mat churao na.
 
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yyyaaaa ye to janab Faraz ka sher hai{(order)}
Hay yeh tumhari poetry nahi hay ok is tarah mat kia karo... or yeh jo tum nay she'ar post kia hay yeh bhi ghalat hay ok sahee kuch is tarha hay.

Tum tikalluf ko bhi khuloos samajhtay ho Faraz.
Dost hota nahi her hath milanay wala.

agar aap khud likh nahi saktay tao kam az kam doosroon ki poetry tao mat churao na.
janab maine koi copy nahi ki ye to faraz ka hi shair suna raha tha mager ghalat ho gaya.
 
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