tum taqalluf ko bhi ikhlas samajhte ho

[waqas naseer]

tum taqalluf ko bhi ikhlas samajhte ho amjid
dost hote nahi her hath milane wale

 

[Zaheer-ul-abideen]

Hay yeh tumhari poetry nahi hay ok is tarah mat kia karo... or yeh jo tum nay she'ar post kia hay yeh bhi ghalat hay ok sahee kuch is tarha hay.

Tum tikalluf ko bhi khuloos samajhtay ho Faraz.
Dost hota nahi her hath milanay wala.

agar aap khud likh nahi saktay tao kam az kam doosroon ki poetry tao mat churao na.

 

[a$m]

yyyaaaa ye to janab Faraz ka sher hai

 

[yoursks]

good job done waqas bhai

 

[Tooba Alvi]

nice one........

 

[saviou]

isko yahan TM poet se shayari section me move karen

 

[Tariq Saeed]

moved ...

 

[DevilJin]

nice poetry..................

 

[waqas naseer]

yyyaaaa ye to janab Faraz ka sher hai

Hay yeh tumhari poetry nahi hay ok is tarah mat kia karo... or yeh jo tum nay she'ar post kia hay yeh bhi ghalat hay ok sahee kuch is tarha hay.

Tum tikalluf ko bhi khuloos samajhtay ho Faraz.
Dost hota nahi her hath milanay wala.

agar aap khud likh nahi saktay tao kam az kam doosroon ki poetry tao mat churao na.

janab maine koi copy nahi ki ye to faraz ka hi shair suna raha tha mager ghalat ho gaya.

 

[Zee Leo]

Hmmmmm

 

[DevilJin]

haan ye be hay..........

 

[waqas naseer]

ye hi hai janab.