Wohi Sawan Hai Wohi Angan Hai Par Tu Nahi

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saviou

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Assalamu Alaykum Wrwb :)
doston ham phir se hazir hain toote phote kalaam ke sath
ye poetry hamne contest k liye likhe hian umeed karte hain apko pasand aayegi inshaAllah


Wohi Sawan Hai Wohi Angan Hai Par Tu Nahi



Wohi Sawan Hai Wohi Angan Hai Par Tu Nahi
Wohi Mausam Hai Wohi Main Hun Par Tu Nahi

Kitna Pyara Kitna Haseen Hai Ye Samaa Dekho
Thandi Hawayen Mehki Fizayen hain Par Tu Nahi

Ghani Sham Hai Chirion Ki Gungnaht Bhi Hai
Sarrd Raat Ki Alaamat Hai Isme Par Tu Nahi

Taras Rahi Hain Meri Ankhen Na Jaane Kyun
Tujhe Dekhne Ki Aarzoo Hai Shayad Par Tu Nahi

Dil Keh Raha Hai Baraste Pani Ko Dekh Kar
Main Nachun Main Jhumun Main Gaaun Par Tu Nahi

Bheeg Jaata Main Khoob Aaj Is Barsaat Mein
Kho Jaata Is Chamann Mein Kahin Par Tu Nahi

Pani Ki Har Boond Mere Dard Badha Rahi Hai
Aye Kash Ke Tujhko Ho Iski Khabar Par Tu Nahi

Qatra Qatra Mere Dil Me Pyas Badha Raha Hai
Dil Ki Pyaas Bujhaalun Main Abhi Par Tu Nahi

Bataaun Kaise Usko Kitna Bechain Hun Main Yahan
Wo Bhi Soch Rahi Hogi Sunaun Ye Baat Par Tu Nahi

Barish Bhi Ruk Gayi Savera Bhi Hone Ko Hai Nasir
Thak Gaya Hun Main Ab Ye Kehte Kehte Par Tu Nahi
 

Sabah

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Walaikum salam Wrwb
MashAllah Poem tu buhut ache hai as always I Like it but design bhi thora ache hain, and text tu buhut ache se dekh rahe hain MashAllah... /:)
keep it up :)
 
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saviou

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Walaikum salam Wrwb
MashAllah Poem tu buhut ache hai as always I Like it but design bhi thora ache hain, and text tu buhut ache se dekh rahe hain MashAllah... /:)
keep it up :)
shukran mohtarma :)
dusra bhi post kar rahe hain agar uska text nahi dikha to phir khair nahi /:)
 

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shukran mohtarma :)
dusra bhi post kar rahe hain agar uska text nahi dikha to phir khair nahi /:)
Photoshop mei yeh koi role nahin bana k images ko forum mei post kerni se unke Text unclear dekhegi haa buss kuch logu ki nazre thori se sahi se dekhe tu... /:)
 

saviou

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Photoshop mei yeh koi role nahin bana k images ko forum mei post kerni se unke Text unclear dekhegi haa buss kuch logu ki nazre thori se sahi se dekhe tu... /:)
haan kuch din me ye photoshop ko bhi dekhlenge aur sikhane walon ko bhi /:)
 

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bOhat KhoOb...!

Bohat udas sawan Tanhae aur HijEr ki tamam soghatain liye huye.

shair related to yOur pOetry..!

Aaj Sawan mEri AankhOn main utEr aaya hay..!
Aaj Lagta hay Baray zOr Ki barish hO ge.....!

keep writin...! :)
 

saviou

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bOhat KhoOb...!

Bohat udas sawan Tanhae aur HijEr ki tamam soghatain liye huye.

shair related to yOur pOetry..!

Aaj Sawan mEri AankhOn main utEr aaya hay..!
Aaj Lagta hay Baray zOr Ki barish hO ge.....!

keep writin...! :)

shukran mohtarma :)
aur waah kya baat hai
dekha hamne kaha tha na aap shayara hain
 

MSC

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Jheel se ankho mei...
MashALLAH
zabardast poetry
bas ek cheez parhne mei Notice kiya mein ne
k agar har line k last mein <hain> add karte toh shayad parhne mein
aur acha lagta aur maza bhi ata....
like:

wohi sawan hain wohi angan hai par tu nahi hain
wohi mausam hain wohi main hun par tu nahi hain
 
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saviou

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MashALLAH
zabardast poetry
bas ek cheez parhne mei Notice kiya mein ne
k agar har line k last mein <hain> add karte toh shayad parhne mein
aur acha lagta aur maza bhi ata....
like:

wohi sawan hain wohi angan hai par tu nahi hain
wohi mausam hain wohi main hun par tu nahi hain
shukran mohtarma :)
thora taweel hojata isliye aage kuch add nahi kiye
 
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