Yeh Dard K Tukray Hain Ashaar Nahi Saghar (contest)

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Aslaam O Allaykum
palkeiN nam rehne lageiN, dil wehshatoN se bhara ho, jaise bisaat-e-jaaN pe azaab se utar aaey hoN. Beqarari chalknay ko beqarar ho to dil chahta hai k kisi bhi tarah iss meiN bhari ghutan baahir niklay.
Kuch log aisay meiN maar DhaaRh par bhi utar aatay haiN lakin baa-zouq log inn baatoN se duur bhagtay haiN aur woh apnay jazbaat ko sirf aur sirf alfaaz ki soorat biyaan kartay haiN. Rooh ki gehraiyoN se niklay yeh alfaaz suchay motiyoN ki tarah aik laRi meiN piroay jaayeN to beqarari k yeh jazbaat sher ki soorat dhal jatay haiN. jaisa k SAAGAR SADIQUI baray karb se keh gay haiN

yeh dard k Tukray haiN , ashaar nahi SAGAR
Hum kaanch k dhaagay meiN zakhmoN ko pirotay haiN

Khush naseeb hotay haiN woh log jo apnay jazbaat, ehsasaat, seene meiN shor machatay junoon ko alfaaz meiN dhaal lete haiN to dard kuch kam ho jata hai ya yooN kahiay k uski shiddat ka ehsaas kuch had tak kam ho jata hai. SHAKEEB JALALI kehtay haiN

Ek hashar sa bapa tha mere dil mein ay SHAKEEB
kholi jo khiRkiyaN to zara shor ghaT gaya

Iss thread mein karna yeh hai k hum rozana aik
kaifiyat ya halat dein gay jis par aap ne zyada se zyada ashaar post karne haiN. Yeh kaifiyat ya halat kisi khaas lafz ki soorat bhi ho sakti hai .. to aap k ashaar mein woh alfaaz aanay zaroori haiN.

Har kaifiyat ya lafz par aik sher likhna ho ga... sab se pehle sher likhne walay member ko 5 number.... us k baad 4 . phir 3 . phir 2 aur phir 1 number diya jaaey ga.
Aaj ki kaifiyat ya halat hai

masrofiyat
iss lafz ka sher mein aana zaroori nahi hai.

braaey mehrbani agar aap kisi ko TAG kareN to lambi si list laganay ki zarorat nahi hai. Sirf dilchaspi lene walay chand members ko hi tag kijiay.
Award kisay milay ga..... is ka faisla aakhir mein ho ga. 30 November tak yeh Thread chalay ga.
 
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Hoorain

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A n3st!
creative thread
bohat acha silsila shuroo kiya hay mohtarma :-bd

Masrofiyat Sy Khud Ko Rehai Diya Karo'
Tum Shehar Mein Raho To Dikhai Diya Karo
 

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creative thread
bohat acha silsila shuroo kiya hay mohtarma :-bd

Masrofiyat Sy Khud Ko Rehai Diya Karo'
Tum Shehar Mein Raho To Dikhai Diya Karo
Thank u siso....
yeh silsala jeet kar aap apnay showcase main aik adad AWARD ka izafa kar sakti haiN.
aur next word kal diya jaaey ga. tab tak aap jitnay zyada ashaar aaj wali MASROFIAYT par share kareN gi, number barhtay jaayeN gay.
 
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مصروف وہاں انجمن آرائی میں کوئی
تڑپے ہے یہاں گوشہٴِ تنہائی میں کوئی
سب ساتھ چلیں رسمِ زمانہ ہے یہ مانا
پر ساتھ نبھاتا نہیں رسوائی میں کوئی

 

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Unhain hum yaad aaty hain fursat ke lamhaat main
magar yeh bhi sach hai unhain fursat nahi milti

(i miss you kefiat kuch tight ight lag rahi hai apni)
 

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Khud Ko Masroof Samjhte Ho Zara Ek Baat B Sun Lo,
Jis Din Hum Hue Masroof Tumhe Shikwa Bahut Hoga,
 

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Masrofiyat Sy Khud Ko Rehai Diya Karo'
Tum Shehar Mein Raho To Dikhai Diya Karo

Karta Rahy Talaash Tumein Darbadar Koi
Bas Tum To Ranj E Aabla Pai Diya Karo
 

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Masroofiyat Mein Aati Hai Be’Had Tumhari Yaad..
Fursat Mein Teri Yaad Se Fursat Nahi Mujhy
 

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Wo apni zindagi main hua masroof itna
wo kis kis ko bhool gia usay yeh bhi yaad nahi
 

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Apni masroofiyat se fursat pa jao to batana,
Jab tanha chorh key koi chala jaye to batana.
Tune jahan chorha tha main ab bhi wahi hoon,
Kabhi koi rasta na samajh aaye to batana!!!
 

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har raste pe tum khade ho
har rasta tum tak jata hai
hum kaise fursat payen tumse
k har jagah tum hi mil jate ho
 

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saza ye thi aankhon se cheen li neende,,
Qusur ye tha unhe aankhen padhne ki fursat na thi!!
 

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Aankhon main intezaar ke lamhaat sonpkar,!
Neende bhi koi le gaya apne safar ke sath!!
 
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