but thori mistakes hain wesy bht achi haiAssalam -0- AlaiukmTm, yeh rahi hmari sharing Umeed hy pasand aegi yeh meny khud likhi hy Rim Jhim Rim Jhim Barsi BarishHalki Halki Qatra Qatra December ki lambi Tanha raten Dil jalaenHalki Halki Qatra QatraSham Sehar me Zardi chalkiHalki Halki Qatra QatraZalim December me likhi judayiAnkhon me pani boonden ayiHalki Halki Qatra QatraPairhon py ek koyal kookibaaghon me bhi chiriya chehkiMast hawa me raag lagayeHalki Halki Qatra QatraNandiya kinary me aaj bhi rooyiDecember aya tu na ayayaad teri Q phir sy ayiHalki Halki Qatra QatraZalim December tera yeh aalam
Kaly badal behta jharna Hawa ka jhonkAhar zarry me teri khushbooHalki Halki Qatra QatraWritten By Me ( poetess Chaya )
hmmm aapko jo mistake laging btaden well dil k jazbaat henbut thori mistakes hain wesy bht achi hai
hmm thank uwah wah wah chaya kyaa baat hai zabardast likhi hai well done
dil k jazbaat hain tu usy dil mai hi na rakhyn zuban pr lane ki koshish karen tb ja kr apko khud apni mistakes ka pta chal jaygahmmm aapko jo mistake laging btaden well dil k jazbaat hen
aap bata den Q k mujhy nhi lgta ghalti hy agar hy to aap koi nazam bna dendil k jazbaat hain tu usy dil mai hi na rakhyn zuban pr lane ki koshish karen tb ja kr apko khud apni mistakes ka pta chal jayga
chalo bna dyngeaap bata den Q k mujhy nhi lgta ghalti hy agar hy to aap koi nazam bna den