Haasil Nahi Aata..
- Thread starter AnadiL
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yeah phr kaha se aya or tashree kaisay ap itni laiq tau nahi hain urdu main..ye hamare Syllabus main nahii tha
good achi koshishUper Post Hue Sher Ki Tashreeh Mere Hisab Se Kuch is tarha hai
@saviou bhia ki farmaish pe
Shayer Apne mehboob Se Mukhatib hai Aur kehta hai. -na main Tujhe (mehboob) ko nazar andaz karsakta hoon. - Na hi shayer ka mehboob shaer k saath aik hone par aamada hai...Aur Shayer Agar Sab kuch bhool kar Apne mehboob ko Baantne ya bhulane ka khayal dil me lata hai..to shayer ko aisa lagta hai goya ab uske paas kuch b Baqi nahi..!!
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abhi ki baat karen
acha phr aik soorat main yaqeen karon ga ap ne khud tashreee ki mian aik sher doon ga us ki tashree karon phr... yaqeen aye ga...Mujhe aaty hai udru..ache se Wo bhi
Koi qaaida, koi kuliyaa,
Na laagu tujh pe ho paaye,
Zarab tujh ko agar doon to ,
Hisabon mein khallal aaye,
Ikaayi ko, dahaayi par,
Mein doon nisbat to kaise doon?
Na qaalib ki tarha tum ho,
Na al-jabra se lagte ho,
Umer ye katt gayi meri,
Tujhe humdam samjhne mein,
Jo hall tera agar nikle,
To sab kuch hi ulajh jaye,
Sifar thi ibtidaa teri,
Sifar hi ab talak tum ho,
Sifar zarb-e-sifar ho tum,
Na jis se kuch faraq aaye…
وحشتِ بے ربطیِ پیچ و خمِ ہستی نہ پوچھok..
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ننگِ بالیدن ہیں جوں موۓ سرِ دیوانہ ہم
kisi se help b leni tau le lain... hoorain ko batian...
