Haal-e-Ishq -=-Mr.S-=-

[Mr.S]

This is ma own ghazal or whatever so please can you comment how was it thankyou
S


koi hum se bhi puche
kia haal hua hai iss ishq mein hamara
ke judaaiyan hum ne sahi hain
ke fareek din hum ne dekhe hain
ke zulm hum ne saha hai
hum se koi puche tou sahi
ke hum apne dil ki kitab ka her warq samne rakh dein
ke kahin hain ghum k qisse
tou kahin hain 2 pal ki khushiyan
kahin hain bewaafaiya tou kahin hai udasya
kahin hain sitam garyan
tou kain hai hamdardian...

 

[goodfrndz]

bohat bohat zbrdast

~~~shukriya~~~

hamarey saath share krney k liye. . . . .


umeed krtey hain k aap aisay hi hamrey saath share krte rahain gey . . .. . InshaAllah

 

[**King**]

nice post

 

[piyarpiyarpiyar]

achi dard bahri shairi he{(yahoo12)}

 

[RoOMi]

ke hum apne dil ki kitab ka her warq samne rakh dein
ke kahin hain ghum k qisse
tou kahin hain 2 pal ki khushiyan

Mr.s Ji
Muje Malom Nai Tha K Ap Itne Achy Shair Ho....
Great Poem.....​

 

[Mr.S]

ke hum apne dil ki kitab ka her warq samne rakh dein
ke kahin hain ghum k qisse
tou kahin hain 2 pal ki khushiyan

Mr.s Ji
Muje Malom Nai Tha K Ap Itne Achy Shair Ho....
Great Poem.....​

bas kai karen hhehhehe asiai hi pata nhn kabhi kabhi bethta hon tau bas likh deta hon and wo kabhi kabhi saal me 1 baar hi ata hai ya ata hi nhn hai
S

 

[Cinderella]

 

[HINATA]

{Nice post Tm}​