Mere Rabba Meri Gall Da Jwab Ta De,

[Guriya_Rani]

Mere Rabba Meri Gall Da Jwab Ta De,
Es Tutte Hoye Dil Da Ilaz Ta De,
Sari Beeti Hai Umar Meri Dukhan De Sahare,
Hor Kinne Dukh Likhe Ne Hisaab Ta De ?

 

[ash30]

Mere Rabba Meri Gall Da Jwab Ta De,
Es Tutte Hoye Dil Da Ilaz Ta De,
Sari Beeti Hai Umar Meri Dukhan De Sahare,
Hor Kinne Dukh Likhe Ne Hisaab Ta De ?

poetry me wazan ha agr apni takhleeq ha to appreciate ni to phr b achi bat ha i like it

 

[Guriya_Rani]

poetry me wazan ha agr apni takhleeq ha to appreciate ni to phr b achi bat ha i like it

kya mtlab me smjhi nheeeeee

 

[ash30]

ma ne koi aisi bat ni likhi jo smajh na ay agr kahi se copy kia ha to b mjhe achi lgi post. agr khud create kia phr to aur achi bat hai