jee apse to roz apki bachpan ki kahaniya sunte hain aur jab ham bhi pachpan ke hogne jab ham bhi apne choton ko aise hi sunayenge
g g MASHALLAH bohat farmabardaar ho aap
bilkul maire bachpan k tajurbey ki qadar karain aur apne pachpan ko safe karain
summa Aameenaur ALLAH tala aap k dost ko sehat_tandarusti ata farmaayain AAMEEN
INSHAALLAH jaldi theek ho jaayain gaye wo
nasir bhai sare questions k jawab ek sath hi dy diye..
baki sara week kya kren ge yahan..
han g..hume ap ko batana chaheye tha..
to apne sare sawal ek sath puche na
ek ek karke puchna chahiye tha ya batana chahiye tha
koi baat nahi abhi ek ke karke aur bhi kuch puchen ham batayenge inshaAllah
wah..ap k skol boht maze ka tha.. (humare skol me to ese koi mushaire nhi hote the..ek hasrat hi rhi )
Wa Alaykum Assalam Wrwb
1. shayari me to hame school ke dino se dilchaspi thi lekin utna samajh nahi pate the hamare yahan har mahine ya phir do ya teen mahino me ek baar mushaira hua karta tha wahan jate aur khaas kar mazahiya mushairey me bohot maza aata tha, to yahin se shuruat huyi
jee mohtarma jo apka hukmhan g..hume ap ko batana chaheye tha..
chalen koi baat nhi..
abi ap ek week k lye yahan hi hain..
to ap ka interview chalta hi rahe ga..
wah..ap k skol boht maze ka tha.. (humare skol me to ese koi mushaire nhi hote the..ek hasrat hi rhi )
ap ne us dor me kbi mushaire me participate kia..?
Wa Alaykum Assalam Wrwb
2. waise to bohot sher rehte hain lekin aksar jo sher se hame hausla milta hai aur phir se umeed jagti hai wo ye share hai
Dekhne Wale Meri Tooti Huyi Kashti Ko Na Dekh
Hausla Abb Bhi Hai Toofano Se Takrane Kaa
wah..boht khoob..
ise kehte hain shair sirf shair hi nhi hote apne andr zindgi ki umeed liye huve hote hain
3. ye sawal samjhe nahi kya shayari sach bolti hai
ye to shayar ke upar hai ke wo apne ashar me kya kehna chahta hai
haan ham ek baat keh sakte hain jo muqarreer kayi ghante apne taqreer me kahe wo shayar do line me keh sakta hai yane samundar ko surayee me sametna ye shayar karsakta hai
ye baat to ap ne 16 aane sahi kahi..ek jo baat 2,3 pages me ho..shayer use ek shair me sameet k bayan kr dete hain...or yahi shairy ka husan hai..
shairy sach bolti se ye matlb b tha k baz'ukat esa b hota hai shairy me boht mubalgha aarai ki jati hai..ye b thek kaha ap ne ye baat ko shayer pe munhisar hoti hai k woh kya likhta hai or us ka likhne ka andaz kesa hain...
shukran mohtarmaWalaikum salam
bht acha silsila shoro kiya hai mohtarma
hum apke es thread se prasand hue
Warm welcome to Nasir uncle
have a nice stay
Gud luck
MashAllah hame tu shoro se pata tha k baki famous shayer k terha kabhi aapka bhi poetry interview hoga aur abhi belkul poets k jaise aap kalam ferma rahe hain...
Wa Alaykum Assalam Wrwb
1. shayari me to hame school ke dino se dilchaspi thi lekin utna samajh nahi pate the hamare yahan har mahine ya phir do ya teen mahino me ek baar mushaira hua karta tha wahan jate aur khaas kar mazahiya mushairey me bohot maza aata tha, to yahin se shuruat huyi
2. waise to bohot sher rehte hain lekin aksar jo sher se hame hausla milta hai aur phir se umeed jagti hai wo ye share hai
Dekhne Wale Meri Tooti Huyi Kashti Ko Na Dekh
Hausla Abb Bhi Hai Toofano Se Takrane Kaa
3. ye sawal samjhe nahi kya shayari sach bolti hai
ye to shayar ke upar hai ke wo apne ashar me kya kehna chahta hai
haan ham ek baat keh sakte hain jo muqarreer kayi ghante apne taqreer me kahe wo shayar do line me keh sakta hai yane samundar ko surayee me sametna ye shayar karsakta hai
4. jee aise badalte mausam aur aise thar tharati shamen to bada pareshan karti hain
har umar wala apne hisab se aise mausam ka lutf utha ta hai
aise mausam me ham chahte hain ke akele na rahen koi sath ho jisse ye mausam ke maze sath lesaken sath me garma garam chai bhi honi chahiye aur kya wagairah wagairah
5. jee do teen dost hain jo hame yaad hain jinhone us mauqe ke hisab se hamare bare me share kaha
ek hindi shayar hain jo ek ghazal likh rahe the aur uska matla unhone hame dedicate kiya wo is tarah se hai
इक शख्स क्या बतायें कि कैसा दिखाई दे?
जो देख ले, उसी को वो अपना दिखाई दे...
Ek Shaqs Kya Batayen Ke Kaise Dikhayi De?
JO Dekh Le, Ussi Ko Wo Apna Dikhayi De...
aur ek hamare bohot ache dost hain wo bhi shayari karte hain unhone bhi apne alfazon se hame nawaza tha
tareef me teri mein likhun kya naseer???
qalam ki roshnai ke tere sub hain aseer....
shaad rahe abaad rahe tu is hunar ke saath
jaani hai humne duniya padhkar teri tehreer
soncha na tha ek ajnabi ban jaega rafeeq
samjha hamesha dosti ko hum ne sirf zanjeer
Khuda de aur zoq aur hunar-e-shaeri.....
kalaam tera lage subko pyar ki tasweer
***Salaam***
bas ye abhi yaad hain
6. jee haan lekin abhi to yaad nahi hame
7. haan hamne yahin TM par bohot se nazm aur ghazal bhi post kiye hain jinme se hamne sana aur sabah ko dedicate kiye aur ek khud hamne apni ahlia k liye likhe the wo bhi yehin par post kiye aap dekh sakte hain
http://www.tafrehmela.com/tms-contest/130513-your-own-poetry-contest-3.html
http://www.tafrehmela.com/tms-poet/140007-phir-dil-mein-ek-hasrath-si-hone-lagi.html
http://www.tafrehmela.com/tms-poet/137774-khuda-ka-nayaab-tohfa-hai-wo.html
http://www.tafrehmela.com/tms-poet/141396-dedicate-marina.html
http://www.tafrehmela.com/tms-poet/141100-bhula-chuka-hun-main-ab-wo-din-purane.html
http://www.tafrehmela.com/tms-poet/138133-aye-musalmaan-tujhe-kya-ho-gaya-hai.html
http://www.tafrehmela.com/muhabbat-shayari/103482-mere-mehboob.html
http://www.tafrehmela.com/muhabbat-shayari/106924-mujhe-tum-se-mohabbat-hai.html
http://www.tafrehmela.com/religious-shayari/107185-taqdeer-me-likha-barhaq-hai-ye-juz-e-imaan-hai.html
http://www.tafrehmela.com/greeting-congras-sorrow/128275-nazm-dedicating-tm.html
bas itne mile
jo yahan share kiye hosakta ho aur bhi hon
aur bohot se hamne yahan share nahi kiye aur kuch likh bhi rahe hain
8. pasandeeda share ghazl nazm to bohot hain aur khaas kar Allama Iqbal ka likha har kalam hame pasand hai to unhi ki ek nazm jo ke ek dua hai wo sab jante bhi hain wohi share karte hain
Lab pe aati hai dua banke tamanna meri
Zindagi shama ki surat ho khudaya meri
Door duniya ka mere dam andhera no jaaye
Har jagah mere chamakane se ujaala ho jaaye
Ho mere dam se yoon hi mere watan ki zeenat
Jis tarah phool se hoti hai chaman ki zeenat
Zindagi ho meri parwaane ki surat ya rab
Ilm ki shama se ho mujhko mohabbat ya rab
Ho mera kaam garibon ki himaayat karna
Dard-mandon se zaiifon se mohabbat karna
Mere allaah buraai se bachaanaa mujhko
Nek jo raah ho us raah pe chalaanaa mujhko
9. Allama Iqbal
10. jee zaroor
Tumhari Kamiyabi Rahe Hazar Baras
Har Baras Ke Hon Din Pachas Hazar
umeed hai ye sab padh kar aap sab bore nahi huye honge
bohot bohot shukriya ap sab ka aur khaas kar hamari bahen mohtarma Anaaya ka
Jazakallah khair
bahar.yeh bahaar ka dimaag kharab hogia hai.
.yeh bahaar ka dimaag kharab hogia hai.
.yeh bahaar ka dimaag kharab hogia hai.
Yeh msg to contest thread mei bhi 2 baar likha tha.. kia wakiye.yeh bahaar ka dimaag kharab hogia hai.
.yeh bahaar ka dimaag kharab hogia hai.
.yeh bahaar ka dimaag kharab hogia hai.
sath me hame bhi welcome kardeteWalaikum Salam....
Bahut khoob Anaya Ali..jeete raho,khush raho..Umda thread,behtreen peshkash...
walaikum assalam
wow annu, din ba din bare creative n motivated hoti jaa re ho hmmmmm lagta hai mera asar ho gaya
anyways, bohat accha silsila shurooh kiya hai hope it stays alive
n welcum Saviour bhai
waalaikum assalam
MASHAALLAH mohtarma bohat acha silsila shuroo kiya hay aap ne
WELCOME saviou bhaya
MashAllah hame tu shoro se pata tha k baki famous shayer k terha kabhi aapka bhi poetry interview hoga aur abhi belkul poets k jaise aap kalam ferma rahe hain...
read ker acha laga and aapke dosto ne jho apako poems dedicate kiye wakiye mei ache the...