shukrya mohtarma .. well zaroori nahi har ghazal ko qafiye ke qoze main band kar ke pesh kya jaye buhat si ghazlen baghair hum kafiye ke bhi hoti hain aur ye un main se aik haiwssalam u alaikum..
aala..khayalat umdah hain..lekin qafia nhi hai ghazal me..
best of luck..
shukar hai u ko pasand agai thankssssYe Kaisi Kismat Pai Maine Aur Ya Kaisa Roog Mujhe Laga Hai Zeeshan
Woh Jo Qadam Qadam Pe Sath Tha Ub Kahan Dhondo usey Barsat Main
umdaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
keep it uppp
Thankssssss saraaaa{(dancing)} aur kaun sa gamevery nyc zee
is ko parh kar mjhy aik bachpan ki game yaad a gyi
walaikumsaalam...
nyc poetry zeee...
shukrya bhaya .. baqi ki baqi main nabohit hi umda sharing shani baba ,,
pic abhi baqi hay dost ,,,,
baqi bhi likhooooooo {(dancing)}
shukryaaaaaaa jiW/salam
bht khoobsurat sharing ki hai dear
GOOD LUCK
Thanks nawab bhai {(dancing)}nice sharing zee leo
keep shraing*{(dancing)}
Assalam Walaikum here is My Sharing on Barsaat well abhi recently half hours pehle likhi Hai
Barsaat Main
Kuch Qisey Puraney Yaad Aye,Ye Ankhain Num Huwin Barsaat Main
Meri Hasrat Bhari Nazrein Aaj Usey Dhondti Rahien is Barsaat Main
Har Garaj Par Ye Mera Dil Tarpa, Har Karak Par ye Mera Dil Tarsa Hai
Jo Yaad Aya mujhe Uska Seham Kar Mujhse Lipat Jana In Barsaat Main
Ye Kaisi Aag Lagi Hai Mere Dil Main Ke Dhuwa Dhuwa Sa Hai Badan
Jab Se Totey Us Se Rishtey Natey Phr Na Mili Koi Khushi Barsaat Main
Har Shay Ko Nikhaar Agaya, Aur Bujhi Hai ub Pyas In Sehraon ki Bhi
Kab Khiley Gi Kali Mere Dil Main Ye Kis Se Pochon ub Barsaat Main
Ye Kaisi Kismat Pai Maine Aur Ya Kaisa Roog Mujhe Laga Hai Zeeshan
Woh Jo Qadam Qadam Pe Sath Tha Ub Kahan Dhondo usey Barsat Main
Chupa Hai Jo Soraj Badaloon Main Woh Bhi Youn He Ojhal Hai Mujhse
Shayad Dikh Jaye Phr Ik Jhalak ye Soch Ke Nikla Phr Aaj Barsaat Main
shukrya janabmashaAllah bahot khoob likha aapne bhai aur sirf half hour me itni acchi ghazal
laikin ek cheez hai isme wo ye k aap jo bund likhte hain wo kuch ziada taweel hota hai.isse thoda sa shot karne ki koshish karen warna poetry ka maza qatam hojata hai.
walaikum assalam
wese b aaj kal barsaat ka mausam hai so kya chun k poetry likhi hai zee
its really very nice