wa'alaikumusalaam wrwb
bhabhi yaad aing?
is par to mera sharmana banta hi heywowww... that was much much better sharing than the previous one..
SUPERBBBB!!! zabardast.. is main sher o shairi ky aksar adaab ka poora poora khiyal rakha gia hy ;-)
khas ker.. waqfa boht zabardast use karty ho aap like in "chorh dunya ky jhamailon ko... amal karty hein" jesy last three words ko last misra ki bajaay first misra sy connect kia.. mazydaar!!!
way to go
sachi baat hy aap ny jo pehl ghazal likhi thi mujhy afsos hoa tha ky KION likhi thi
mager yeh ghazal dekh ker ehsaas hoa ky banda ghaltion sy he tu seekhta hy hehehe
ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm acha ji
thanx for liking comments and keep poetic
haha..nice nice....isi liye aise mei poetry likh diyaad.. wo bhoolti kab hen.. bhoolna chaho b to 5 min baad call aa jati he..
haha..nice nice....isi liye aise mei poetry likh di
ap kehte hein to theek haiab kuch baaten posheeda bi rehny do bhai
bahut shukriyaa for kind words..ap kehte hein to theek hai
btw very well written....
...socha apko pher se kuch dedicate kardoon..par abhi neend mei hon to pher kabhi
inshaAllah...bahut shukriyaa for kind words..
koi bata nahi.. my doors r always open feel free to step in anytime u want
hme iski zrurt ni padti ha ghalib log wqt k sth khdi smj jatey ha