Tm Birthday Poetry Dedication Contest 2015 !!

[silent_heart]

Assalam O Aalaikun

TM !!

Jesy k ap sb janty hain k TM birthday aa rahi hai or usi sisily kain different contest ho rahy hain ta k is birthday ko yaadgaar bnaya ja sakhy or hum sb mil kr TM ki is khushi main enjoy kr sakhain to TM staff ki tarf se Aap sb k liye aik poetry contest shuru ki ja raha hai !!


Contest boht simple hai ap ko krna ye hai k khud ki likhi hi ko poetry TM ko dedicate krni hai but poerty khud ki likhi honi chhaiye, Poetry Ghazal, Nazam, Ashaar kuch b ho sakti hi jo ap ne khud likha ho ..

Winner TM Staff decide karenga or jo win krega usko TM Birthday pr Specail Award Diya Jayega


RULES :


Poetry Khud ki likhi honi chahiye copy paste not allowed
Poetry isi thread main share keni hai or sb ko tag krna hai
Poetry main Tafreehmella ko mention krna hai


Is Contest ki Last Date 21 May se 22 May Raat 12 AM tak ka time hai ..


Friendz aap sb koshsh karin k zaroor part lein coz TM ki birthday hai or TM hum sb ka ghar hai ..







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@Shiraz-Khan @shailina @whiteros @soul_of_silence @Fahad_Awan_Huh @NamaL @Hoorain @saviou @Prince-Farry @*Sarlaa* @S_ChiragH @minaahil @Dua_ @Mahen @Wafa_Khan @Naila_Rubab @p3arl @Blue_Sky @Syeda-Hilya @ZarOon @Seap @Guriya_Rani @Barkat_ @isra_ @Madii @Raat ki Rani @junaid_ak47 @Armaghankhan @Island_Jewel @Manxil
@Sweeta @Azeyy @Zaryaab @STAR24 @Ziddi_anGel @Just_Like_Roze @Flower_Flora @Umm-e-ahmad @Parisa_ @dur-e-shawar @Hoorain
@Rashk-E-Hina @Mano_Doll @Rahath @Danee @Princess_E @Huree @lovely_eyes @ShyPrincess @kaskar @Pari_Qrakh @Nadaan_Shazie @Ocean-of-love @Arz0o @Angel_A @wajahat_ahmad @SharieMalik @Sabeen_27 @Umeed_Ki_Kiran @genuine @mishahaider @Meekaeel @Ahmad-Hasan @raaz the secret @Duffer @Marah @chai-mein-biscuit @farhat-siddiqa @Fizaali @Ocean-of-love @AnadiL
@Amaanali @Shampak_ShooOO @silent_heart @ujalaa @seemab_khan @saviou @marib @Asheer @Fantasy @DevilsAdvocat @shining_galaxy @Panchii @Daredevil @HWJ @Cheeky @Yuxra @Stylo_Princess @Twinkle Queen @Arzoo-E-Dil @1AnGeL1

hmmmmm very nice

 

[Shiraz-Khan]

Assalaamo-3laekum wrwb

Aaj pathan bhai ney b demagh chala hi lia.... sub parhen poori. shaeri etc mey tu kher bilkul bekaar hun bt choti c koshish hey... pehle tu mera idea @Fantasy wala pattern jesa likhne ka tha bt wo Fantasy k naam hogaya so is liye mene is tarah divide ker k likhdi... bt Sub ko zehn mey rakh ker Dilsey likkhi hey... Baki jeetna sheetna naseeb ki baat hey...

Ye rae meri Dedication...... ​

Friends Version

Izzat ki bahar hey ye mela
or Pekar-e-Muhabbat

Aangan mey ghar k sub hen
chand dost khoobsorat

Heery hen wo chamaktey
anmol jin ki qeemat

Tafreeh melay mey dost hi
Hey sabab-e-fakher qismat

Hey dam sey in hi key
Mastiyaan sir pey Mosallat

chehr chaar mey na bachen wo
Jin sey inho ne ki mohabbat

Tafreeh sub hey insey
Ye b hen Khuda ki naimat

In k lagao sey barh ker
Shaed hi rishta ho koi musallat

Mili hen ye Tafreeh'yaan
Tafreeh Mela ki badoolat

Sisters Version

Izzat ki bahar hey ye Mela
or Pekar-e-Muhabbat

Aangan mey ghar k sub hein
Chand phol Khoobsorat

Motiyaan hein wo chamakti
Anmol jin ki qeemat

Tafreeh Melay mey behne hi
Hey bey misaal Qismat

Hey sirf bus un hi key
Daaman mey bhari muhabbat

Wo phooljariyaan hen aisi
Jinse Her haal mey hey raahat

Khushiyan sub he in sey
Ye hein Khuda ki naimat

In ki dua sey barh ker
Shaed hey koi doulat

Mili hey ye Piari khushiyaan
Tafreeh Mela ki badolat

​

@Don @RedRose64 @saviou @Pari @Seap @STAR24 @Shiraz-Khan @ZarOon @AnadiL @Rashk-E-Hina @Parisa_ @Huree @Guriya_Rani
@Abidi @Ahmad-Hasan @Aayat @aishagull @Akaaaash @Afsaan @Arzoo-E-Dil @Armaghankhan @Angel_A @Amaanali @amazingcreator
@amerzish_malik @Arz0o @Arzoomehak @Aqsh_Arch @Asheer @attiya @Atif-adi @Awadiya @Aaylaaaaa @Ayesha-Ali @Barkat_ @Babar-Azam
@Blue_Sky @Blue-Black @Bela @Baarish @Binte_Hawwa @babarnadeem996 @bilal_ishaq_786 @Chief @chai-mein-biscuit @CuTe_HiNa
@Cheeky @Charming_Deep @colgatepak @Danee @Dard-e-Dil @Dua001 @DevilJin @Dua_ @Dreamy Boy @dur-e-shawar @diya.
@errorsss @Fahad_Awan_Huh @Faiz4lyf @Flower_Flora @Fizaali @genuine @gullubat @Gul-e-lala @isra_ @gulfishan @huny @H0mer
@Hoorain @Hoorainn @HWJ @hariya @Haider_Mk @Iceage-TM @i love sahabah @italianVirus @illusionist @Island_Jewel
@junaid_ak47 @Jahanger @Just_Like_Roze @jimmyz @lovely_eyes @LaDDan @Lost Passenger @Lightman @Mano_Doll @Mahen
@maanu115 @Mantasha_Zawaar @Manxil @Marah @Mas00m-DeVil @marib @Menaz @minaahil @Mehar_G786 @Meekaeel @MSC
@Minal @mrX @MukarramRana @MumS @Muhammad_Rehman_Sabir @Nadaan_Shazie @Naila_Rubab @namaal @NamaL
@Nikka_Raja @nighatnaseem21 @Noor_Afridi @Noorjee @nizamuddin @Ocean-of-love @onemanarmy @p3arl @Panchii @Pari_Qrakh
@Poetry_Lover @Prince-Farry @Princess_Nisa @Princess_E @pyaridua @Rashk-E-Hina @Raat ki Rani @raaz the secret @Rahath
@raji35 @Ramiz @RaPuNzLe @reality @Rubi @REHAN_UK @*Sarlaa* @seemab_khan @Sameer_Khan @Syeda-Hilya @S_ChiragH
@SharieMalik @sweet-c-chori @ShehrYaar @shailina @Shahzii_1 @Shoaib_Nasir @shineday11 @Sabeen_27 @shzd @Shampak_ShooOO
@Silent_tear_hurt @sweet bhoot @sona_monda @silent_heart @SpectativeSchahzaad @soul_of_silence. @Stylo_Princess @Shona619 @SUMAIKA
@soul_snatcher @sweet_lily @sweet_c_kuri @Sweeta @Toobi @Twinkle Queen @Tanha_Dil @Tariq Saeed @ujalaa @UHPF
@Umeed_Ki_Kiran @Umm-e-ahmad @umeedz @unpredictable2 @Vasim @Wafa_Khan @wajahat_ahmad @X_w @yoursks @Yuxra
@Zia_Hayderi @Zaryaab @Ziddi_anGel @zonii @Zach

 

[DiLkash]

Assalaamo-3laekum wrwb

Aaj pathan bhai ney b demagh chala hi lia.... sub parhen poori. shaeri etc mey tu kher bilkul bekaar hun bt choti c koshish hey... pehle tu mera idea @Fantasy wala pattern jesa likhne ka tha bt wo Fantasy k naam hogaya so is liye mene is tarah divide ker k likhdi... bt Sub ko zehn mey rakh ker Dilsey likkhi hey... Baki jeetna sheetna naseeb ki baat hey...

Ye rae meri Dedication...... ​

Friends Version

Izzat ki bahar hey ye mela
or Pekar-e-Muhabbat

Aangan mey ghar k sub hen
chand dost khoobsorat

Heery hen wo chamaktey
anmol jin ki qeemat

Tafreeh melay mey dost hi
Hey sabab-e-fakher qismat

Hey dam sey in hi key
Mastiyaan sir pey Mosallat

chehr chaar mey na bachen wo
Jin sey inho ne ki mohabbat

Tafreeh sub hey insey
Ye b hen Khuda ki naimat

In k lagao sey barh ker
Shaed hi rishta ho koi musallat

Mili hen ye Tafreeh'yaan
Tafreeh mela ki badoolat

Sisters Version

Izzat ki bahar hey ye Mela
or Pekar-e-Muhabbat

Aangan mey ghar k sub hein
Chand phol Khoobsorat

Motiyaan hein wo chamakti
Anmol jin ki qeemat

Tafreeh Melay mey behne hi
Hey bey misaal Qismat

Hey sirf bus un hi key
Daaman mey bhari muhabbat

Wo phooljariyaan hen aisi
Jinse Her haal mey hey raahat

Khushi sub he in sey
Ye hein Khuda ki naimat

In ki dua sey barh ker
Shaed hey koi doulat

Mili hey ye khushiyaan
Tafreeh mela ki badolat

​

@Don @RedRose64 @saviou @Pari @Seap @STAR24 @Shiraz-Khan @ZarOon @AnadiL @Rashk-E-Hina @Parisa_ @Huree @Guriya_Rani
@Abidi @Ahmad-Hasan @Aayat @aishagull @Akaaaash @Afsaan @Arzoo-E-Dil @Armaghankhan @Angel_A @Amaanali @amazingcreator
@amerzish_malik @Arz0o @Arzoomehak @Aqsh_Arch @Asheer @attiya @Atif-adi @Awadiya @Aaylaaaaa @Ayesha-Ali @Barkat_ @Babar-Azam
@Blue_Sky @Blue-Black @Bela @Baarish @Binte_Hawwa @babarnadeem996 @bilal_ishaq_786 @Chief @chai-mein-biscuit @CuTe_HiNa
@Cheeky @Charming_Deep @colgatepak @Danee @Dard-e-Dil @Dua001 @DevilJin @Dua_ @Dreamy Boy @dur-e-shawar @diya.
@errorsss @Fahad_Awan_Huh @Faiz4lyf @Flower_Flora @Fizaali @genuine @gullubat @Gul-e-lala @isra_ @gulfishan @huny @H0mer
@Hoorain @Hoorainn @HWJ @hariya @Haider_Mk @Iceage-TM @i love sahabah @italianVirus @illusionist @Island_Jewel
@junaid_ak47 @Jahanger @Just_Like_Roze @jimmyz @lovely_eyes @LaDDan @Lost Passenger @Lightman @Mano_Doll @Mahen
@maanu115 @Mantasha_Zawaar @Manxil @Marah @Mas00m-DeVil @marib @Menaz @minaahil @Mehar_G786 @Meekaeel @MSC
@Minal @mrX @MukarramRana @MumS @Muhammad_Rehman_Sabir @Nadaan_Shazie @Naila_Rubab @namaal @NamaL
@Nikka_Raja @nighatnaseem21 @Noor_Afridi @Noorjee @nizamuddin @Ocean-of-love @onemanarmy @p3arl @Panchii @Pari_Qrakh
@Poetry_Lover @Prince-Farry @Princess_Nisa @Princess_E @pyaridua @Rashk-E-Hina @Raat ki Rani @raaz the secret @Rahath
@raji35 @Ramiz @RaPuNzLe @reality @Rubi @REHAN_UK @*Sarlaa* @seemab_khan @Sameer_Khan @Syeda-Hilya @S_ChiragH
@SharieMalik @sweet-c-chori @ShehrYaar @shailina @Shahzii_1 @Shoaib_Nasir @shineday11 @Sabeen_27 @shzd @Shampak_ShooOO
@Silent_tear_hurt @sweet bhoot @sona_monda @silent_heart @SpectativeSchahzaad @soul_of_silence. @Stylo_Princess @Shona619 @SUMAIKA
@soul_snatcher @sweet_lily @sweet_c_kuri @Sweeta @Toobi @Twinkle Queen @Tanha_Dil @Tariq Saeed @ujalaa @UHPF
@Umeed_Ki_Kiran @Umm-e-ahmad @umeedz @unpredictable2 @Vasim @Wafa_Khan @wajahat_ahmad @X_w @yoursks @Yuxra
@Zia_Hayderi @Zaryaab @Ziddi_anGel @zonii @Zach

very nice . boht boht boht acha likha zabrdast

 

[Aina_]

Assalaamo-3laekum wrwb

Aaj pathan bhai ney b demagh chala hi lia.... sub parhen poori. shaeri etc mey tu kher bilkul bekaar hun bt choti c koshish hey... pehle tu mera idea @Fantasy wala pattern jesa likhne ka tha bt wo Fantasy k naam hogaya so is liye mene is tarah divide ker k likhdi... bt Sub ko zehn mey rakh ker Dilsey likkhi hey... Baki jeetna sheetna naseeb ki baat hey...

Ye rae meri Dedication...... ​

Friends Version

Izzat ki bahar hey ye mela
or Pekar-e-Muhabbat

Aangan mey ghar k sub hen
chand dost khoobsorat

Heery hen wo chamaktey
anmol jin ki qeemat

Tafreeh melay mey dost hi
Hey sabab-e-fakher qismat

Hey dam sey in hi key
Mastiyaan sir pey Mosallat

chehr chaar mey na bachen wo
Jin sey inho ne ki mohabbat

Tafreeh sub hey insey
Ye b hen Khuda ki naimat

In k lagao sey barh ker
Shaed hi rishta ho koi musallat

Mili hen ye Tafreeh'yaan
Tafreeh mela ki badoolat

Sisters Version

Izzat ki bahar hey ye Mela
or Pekar-e-Muhabbat

Aangan mey ghar k sub hein
Chand phol Khoobsorat

Motiyaan hein wo chamakti
Anmol jin ki qeemat

Tafreeh Melay mey behne hi
Hey bey misaal Qismat

Hey sirf bus un hi key
Daaman mey bhari muhabbat

Wo phooljariyaan hen aisi
Jinse Her haal mey hey raahat

Khushi sub he in sey
Ye hein Khuda ki naimat

In ki dua sey barh ker
Shaed hey koi doulat

Mili hey ye khushiyaan
Tafreeh mela ki badolat

​

@Don @RedRose64 @saviou @Pari @Seap @STAR24 @Shiraz-Khan @ZarOon @AnadiL @Rashk-E-Hina @Parisa_ @Huree @Guriya_Rani
@Abidi @Ahmad-Hasan @Aayat @aishagull @Akaaaash @Afsaan @Arzoo-E-Dil @Armaghankhan @Angel_A @Amaanali @amazingcreator
@amerzish_malik @Arz0o @Arzoomehak @Aqsh_Arch @Asheer @attiya @Atif-adi @Awadiya @Aaylaaaaa @Ayesha-Ali @Barkat_ @Babar-Azam
@Blue_Sky @Blue-Black @Bela @Baarish @Binte_Hawwa @babarnadeem996 @bilal_ishaq_786 @Chief @chai-mein-biscuit @CuTe_HiNa
@Cheeky @Charming_Deep @colgatepak @Danee @Dard-e-Dil @Dua001 @DevilJin @Dua_ @Dreamy Boy @dur-e-shawar @diya.
@errorsss @Fahad_Awan_Huh @Faiz4lyf @Flower_Flora @Fizaali @genuine @gullubat @Gul-e-lala @isra_ @gulfishan @huny @H0mer
@Hoorain @Hoorainn @HWJ @hariya @Haider_Mk @Iceage-TM @i love sahabah @italianVirus @illusionist @Island_Jewel
@junaid_ak47 @Jahanger @Just_Like_Roze @jimmyz @lovely_eyes @LaDDan @Lost Passenger @Lightman @Mano_Doll @Mahen
@maanu115 @Mantasha_Zawaar @Manxil @Marah @Mas00m-DeVil @marib @Menaz @minaahil @Mehar_G786 @Meekaeel @MSC
@Minal @mrX @MukarramRana @MumS @Muhammad_Rehman_Sabir @Nadaan_Shazie @Naila_Rubab @namaal @NamaL
@Nikka_Raja @nighatnaseem21 @Noor_Afridi @Noorjee @nizamuddin @Ocean-of-love @onemanarmy @p3arl @Panchii @Pari_Qrakh
@Poetry_Lover @Prince-Farry @Princess_Nisa @Princess_E @pyaridua @Rashk-E-Hina @Raat ki Rani @raaz the secret @Rahath
@raji35 @Ramiz @RaPuNzLe @reality @Rubi @REHAN_UK @*Sarlaa* @seemab_khan @Sameer_Khan @Syeda-Hilya @S_ChiragH
@SharieMalik @sweet-c-chori @ShehrYaar @shailina @Shahzii_1 @Shoaib_Nasir @shineday11 @Sabeen_27 @shzd @Shampak_ShooOO
@Silent_tear_hurt @sweet bhoot @sona_monda @silent_heart @SpectativeSchahzaad @soul_of_silence. @Stylo_Princess @Shona619 @SUMAIKA
@soul_snatcher @sweet_lily @sweet_c_kuri @Sweeta @Toobi @Twinkle Queen @Tanha_Dil @Tariq Saeed @ujalaa @UHPF
@Umeed_Ki_Kiran @Umm-e-ahmad @umeedz @unpredictable2 @Vasim @Wafa_Khan @wajahat_ahmad @X_w @yoursks @Yuxra
@Zia_Hayderi @Zaryaab @Ziddi_anGel @zonii @Zach

Wsalam bro
Bht zabrdast likha hai ...sweet n simple

 

[minaahil]

Bhot aalaaa

sherry bro ap ne to kmaal kr diya

 

[Bird-Of-Paradise]

Assalaamo-3laekum wrwb

Aaj pathan bhai ney b demagh chala hi lia.... sub parhen poori. shaeri etc mey tu kher bilkul bekaar hun bt choti c koshish hey... pehle tu mera idea @Fantasy wala pattern jesa likhne ka tha bt wo Fantasy k naam hogaya so is liye mene is tarah divide ker k likhdi... bt Sub ko zehn mey rakh ker Dilsey likkhi hey... Baki jeetna sheetna naseeb ki baat hey...

Ye rae meri Dedication...... ​

Friends Version

Izzat ki bahar hey ye mela
or Pekar-e-Muhabbat

Aangan mey ghar k sub hen
chand dost khoobsorat

Heery hen wo chamaktey
anmol jin ki qeemat

Tafreeh melay mey dost hi
Hey sabab-e-fakher qismat

Hey dam sey in hi key
Mastiyaan sir pey Mosallat

chehr chaar mey na bachen wo
Jin sey inho ne ki mohabbat

Tafreeh sub hey insey
Ye b hen Khuda ki naimat

In k lagao sey barh ker
Shaed hi rishta ho koi musallat

Mili hen ye Tafreeh'yaan
Tafreeh Mela ki badoolat

Sisters Version

Izzat ki bahar hey ye Mela
or Pekar-e-Muhabbat

Aangan mey ghar k sub hein
Chand phol Khoobsorat

Motiyaan hein wo chamakti
Anmol jin ki qeemat

Tafreeh Melay mey behne hi
Hey bey misaal Qismat

Hey sirf bus un hi key
Daaman mey bhari muhabbat

Wo phooljariyaan hen aisi
Jinse Her haal mey hey raahat

Khushiyan sub he in sey
Ye hein Khuda ki naimat

In ki dua sey barh ker
Shaed hey koi doulat

Mili hey ye Piari khushiyaan
Tafreeh Mela ki badolat

​

@Don @RedRose64 @saviou @Pari @Seap @STAR24 @Shiraz-Khan @ZarOon @AnadiL @Rashk-E-Hina @Parisa_ @Huree @Guriya_Rani
@Abidi @Ahmad-Hasan @Aayat @aishagull @Akaaaash @Afsaan @Arzoo-E-Dil @Armaghankhan @Angel_A @Amaanali @amazingcreator
@amerzish_malik @Arz0o @Arzoomehak @Aqsh_Arch @Asheer @attiya @Atif-adi @Awadiya @Aaylaaaaa @Ayesha-Ali @Barkat_ @Babar-Azam
@Blue_Sky @Blue-Black @Bela @Baarish @Binte_Hawwa @babarnadeem996 @bilal_ishaq_786 @Chief @chai-mein-biscuit @CuTe_HiNa
@Cheeky @Charming_Deep @colgatepak @Danee @Dard-e-Dil @Dua001 @DevilJin @Dua_ @Dreamy Boy @dur-e-shawar @diya.
@errorsss @Fahad_Awan_Huh @Faiz4lyf @Flower_Flora @Fizaali @genuine @gullubat @Gul-e-lala @isra_ @gulfishan @huny @H0mer
@Hoorain @Hoorainn @HWJ @hariya @Haider_Mk @Iceage-TM @i love sahabah @italianVirus @illusionist @Island_Jewel
@junaid_ak47 @Jahanger @Just_Like_Roze @jimmyz @lovely_eyes @LaDDan @Lost Passenger @Lightman @Mano_Doll @Mahen
@maanu115 @Mantasha_Zawaar @Manxil @Marah @Mas00m-DeVil @marib @Menaz @minaahil @Mehar_G786 @Meekaeel @MSC
@Minal @mrX @MukarramRana @MumS @Muhammad_Rehman_Sabir @Nadaan_Shazie @Naila_Rubab @namaal @NamaL
@Nikka_Raja @nighatnaseem21 @Noor_Afridi @Noorjee @nizamuddin @Ocean-of-love @onemanarmy @p3arl @Panchii @Pari_Qrakh
@Poetry_Lover @Prince-Farry @Princess_Nisa @Princess_E @pyaridua @Rashk-E-Hina @Raat ki Rani @raaz the secret @Rahath
@raji35 @Ramiz @RaPuNzLe @reality @Rubi @REHAN_UK @*Sarlaa* @seemab_khan @Sameer_Khan @Syeda-Hilya @S_ChiragH
@SharieMalik @sweet-c-chori @ShehrYaar @shailina @Shahzii_1 @Shoaib_Nasir @shineday11 @Sabeen_27 @shzd @Shampak_ShooOO
@Silent_tear_hurt @sweet bhoot @sona_monda @silent_heart @SpectativeSchahzaad @soul_of_silence. @Stylo_Princess @Shona619 @SUMAIKA
@soul_snatcher @sweet_lily @sweet_c_kuri @Sweeta @Toobi @Twinkle Queen @Tanha_Dil @Tariq Saeed @ujalaa @UHPF
@Umeed_Ki_Kiran @Umm-e-ahmad @umeedz @unpredictable2 @Vasim @Wafa_Khan @wajahat_ahmad @X_w @yoursks @Yuxra
@Zia_Hayderi @Zaryaab @Ziddi_anGel @zonii @Zach

Awesome bro

 

[Marah]

Baht alllaa

 

[minaahil]

مجھے تفریح میلا میں آئے تقریباً ڈھیڑ سال ہو گیااس عرصے میں جو محبت ملی ہے مجھے اسی محبت سے متاثر ہو کر
میں نے اپنے الفاظ میں تھوڑا بہت
لکھا ہے امید ہے سب پسند کریں گے

@ZarOon bro wah wah ka time

 

[Fantasy]

Assalaamo-3laekum wrwb

Aaj pathan bhai ney b demagh chala hi lia.... sub parhen poori. shaeri etc mey tu kher bilkul bekaar hun bt choti c koshish hey... pehle tu mera idea @Fantasy wala pattern jesa likhne ka tha bt wo Fantasy k naam hogaya so is liye mene is tarah divide ker k likhdi... bt Sub ko zehn mey rakh ker Dilsey likkhi hey... Baki jeetna sheetna naseeb ki baat hey...

Ye rae meri Dedication...... ​

Friends Version

Izzat ki bahar hey ye mela
or Pekar-e-Muhabbat

Aangan mey ghar k sub hen
chand dost khoobsorat

Heery hen wo chamaktey
anmol jin ki qeemat

Tafreeh melay mey dost hi
Hey sabab-e-fakher qismat

Hey dam sey in hi key
Mastiyaan sir pey Mosallat

chehr chaar mey na bachen wo
Jin sey inho ne ki mohabbat

Tafreeh sub hey insey
Ye b hen Khuda ki naimat

In k lagao sey barh ker
Shaed hi rishta ho koi musallat

Mili hen ye Tafreeh'yaan
Tafreeh Mela ki badoolat

Sisters Version

Izzat ki bahar hey ye Mela
or Pekar-e-Muhabbat

Aangan mey ghar k sub hein
Chand phol Khoobsorat

Motiyaan hein wo chamakti
Anmol jin ki qeemat

Tafreeh Melay mey behne hi
Hey bey misaal Qismat

Hey sirf bus un hi key
Daaman mey bhari muhabbat

Wo phooljariyaan hen aisi
Jinse Her haal mey hey raahat

Khushiyan sub he in sey
Ye hein Khuda ki naimat

In ki dua sey barh ker
Shaed hey koi doulat

Mili hey ye Piari khushiyaan
Tafreeh Mela ki badolat

​

@Don @RedRose64 @saviou @Pari @Seap @STAR24 @Shiraz-Khan @ZarOon @AnadiL @Rashk-E-Hina @Parisa_ @Huree @Guriya_Rani
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@Minal @mrX @MukarramRana @MumS @Muhammad_Rehman_Sabir @Nadaan_Shazie @Naila_Rubab @namaal @NamaL
@Nikka_Raja @nighatnaseem21 @Noor_Afridi @Noorjee @nizamuddin @Ocean-of-love @onemanarmy @p3arl @Panchii @Pari_Qrakh
@Poetry_Lover @Prince-Farry @Princess_Nisa @Princess_E @pyaridua @Rashk-E-Hina @Raat ki Rani @raaz the secret @Rahath
@raji35 @Ramiz @RaPuNzLe @reality @Rubi @REHAN_UK @*Sarlaa* @seemab_khan @Sameer_Khan @Syeda-Hilya @S_ChiragH
@SharieMalik @sweet-c-chori @ShehrYaar @shailina @Shahzii_1 @Shoaib_Nasir @shineday11 @Sabeen_27 @shzd @Shampak_ShooOO
@Silent_tear_hurt @sweet bhoot @sona_monda @silent_heart @SpectativeSchahzaad @soul_of_silence. @Stylo_Princess @Shona619 @SUMAIKA
@soul_snatcher @sweet_lily @sweet_c_kuri @Sweeta @Toobi @Twinkle Queen @Tanha_Dil @Tariq Saeed @ujalaa @UHPF
@Umeed_Ki_Kiran @Umm-e-ahmad @umeedz @unpredictable2 @Vasim @Wafa_Khan @wajahat_ahmad @X_w @yoursks @Yuxra
@Zia_Hayderi @Zaryaab @Ziddi_anGel @zonii @Zach

Zaberdast

 

[Fantasy]

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مجھے تفریح میلا میں آئے تقریباً ڈھیڑ سال ہو گیااس عرصے میں جو محبت ملی ہے مجھے اسی محبت سے متاثر ہو کر
میں نے اپنے الفاظ میں تھوڑا بہت
لکھا ہے امید ہے سب پسند کریں گے

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Good one

 

[AnadiL]

Assalaamo-3laekum wrwb

Aaj pathan bhai ney b demagh chala hi lia.... sub parhen poori. shaeri etc mey tu kher bilkul bekaar hun bt choti c koshish hey... pehle tu mera idea @Fantasy wala pattern jesa likhne ka tha bt wo Fantasy k naam hogaya so is liye mene is tarah divide ker k likhdi... bt Sub ko zehn mey rakh ker Dilsey likkhi hey... Baki jeetna sheetna naseeb ki baat hey...

Ye rae meri Dedication...... ​

Friends Version

Izzat ki bahar hey ye mela
or Pekar-e-Muhabbat

Aangan mey ghar k sub hen
chand dost khoobsorat

Heery hen wo chamaktey
anmol jin ki qeemat

Tafreeh melay mey dost hi
Hey sabab-e-fakher qismat

Hey dam sey in hi key
Mastiyaan sir pey Mosallat

chehr chaar mey na bachen wo
Jin sey inho ne ki mohabbat

Tafreeh sub hey insey
Ye b hen Khuda ki naimat

In k lagao sey barh ker
Shaed hi rishta ho koi musallat

Mili hen ye Tafreeh'yaan
Tafreeh Mela ki badoolat

Sisters Version

Izzat ki bahar hey ye Mela
or Pekar-e-Muhabbat

Aangan mey ghar k sub hein
Chand phol Khoobsorat

Motiyaan hein wo chamakti
Anmol jin ki qeemat

Tafreeh Melay mey behne hi
Hey bey misaal Qismat

Hey sirf bus un hi key
Daaman mey bhari muhabbat

Wo phooljariyaan hen aisi
Jinse Her haal mey hey raahat

Khushiyan sub he in sey
Ye hein Khuda ki naimat

In ki dua sey barh ker
Shaed hey koi doulat

Mili hey ye Piari khushiyaan
Tafreeh Mela ki badolat

​

@Don @RedRose64 @saviou @Pari @Seap @STAR24 @Shiraz-Khan @ZarOon @AnadiL @Rashk-E-Hina @Parisa_ @Huree @Guriya_Rani
@Abidi @Ahmad-Hasan @Aayat @aishagull @Akaaaash @Afsaan @Arzoo-E-Dil @Armaghankhan @Angel_A @Amaanali @amazingcreator
@amerzish_malik @Arz0o @Arzoomehak @Aqsh_Arch @Asheer @attiya @Atif-adi @Awadiya @Aaylaaaaa @Ayesha-Ali @Barkat_ @Babar-Azam
@Blue_Sky @Blue-Black @Bela @Baarish @Binte_Hawwa @babarnadeem996 @bilal_ishaq_786 @Chief @chai-mein-biscuit @CuTe_HiNa
@Cheeky @Charming_Deep @colgatepak @Danee @Dard-e-Dil @Dua001 @DevilJin @Dua_ @Dreamy Boy @dur-e-shawar @diya.
@errorsss @Fahad_Awan_Huh @Faiz4lyf @Flower_Flora @Fizaali @genuine @gullubat @Gul-e-lala @isra_ @gulfishan @huny @H0mer
@Hoorain @Hoorainn @HWJ @hariya @Haider_Mk @Iceage-TM @i love sahabah @italianVirus @illusionist @Island_Jewel
@junaid_ak47 @Jahanger @Just_Like_Roze @jimmyz @lovely_eyes @LaDDan @Lost Passenger @Lightman @Mano_Doll @Mahen
@maanu115 @Mantasha_Zawaar @Manxil @Marah @Mas00m-DeVil @marib @Menaz @minaahil @Mehar_G786 @Meekaeel @MSC
@Minal @mrX @MukarramRana @MumS @Muhammad_Rehman_Sabir @Nadaan_Shazie @Naila_Rubab @namaal @NamaL
@Nikka_Raja @nighatnaseem21 @Noor_Afridi @Noorjee @nizamuddin @Ocean-of-love @onemanarmy @p3arl @Panchii @Pari_Qrakh
@Poetry_Lover @Prince-Farry @Princess_Nisa @Princess_E @pyaridua @Rashk-E-Hina @Raat ki Rani @raaz the secret @Rahath
@raji35 @Ramiz @RaPuNzLe @reality @Rubi @REHAN_UK @*Sarlaa* @seemab_khan @Sameer_Khan @Syeda-Hilya @S_ChiragH
@SharieMalik @sweet-c-chori @ShehrYaar @shailina @Shahzii_1 @Shoaib_Nasir @shineday11 @Sabeen_27 @shzd @Shampak_ShooOO
@Silent_tear_hurt @sweet bhoot @sona_monda @silent_heart @SpectativeSchahzaad @soul_of_silence. @Stylo_Princess @Shona619 @SUMAIKA
@soul_snatcher @sweet_lily @sweet_c_kuri @Sweeta @Toobi @Twinkle Queen @Tanha_Dil @Tariq Saeed @ujalaa @UHPF
@Umeed_Ki_Kiran @Umm-e-ahmad @umeedz @unpredictable2 @Vasim @Wafa_Khan @wajahat_ahmad @X_w @yoursks @Yuxra
@Zia_Hayderi @Zaryaab @Ziddi_anGel @zonii @Zach

wahh !
well written
BOhat bohat achaa likhe hyn ,,keep writting..

 

[AnadiL]

Awesome bro

Zabardasssstttt Sigii

 

[Bird-Of-Paradise]

Zabardasssstttt Sigii

shanku

 

[Adeeha_]

Assalaamo-3laekum wrwb

Aaj pathan bhai ney b demagh chala hi lia.... sub parhen poori. shaeri etc mey tu kher bilkul bekaar hun bt choti c koshish hey... pehle tu mera idea @Fantasy wala pattern jesa likhne ka tha bt wo Fantasy k naam hogaya so is liye mene is tarah divide ker k likhdi... bt Sub ko zehn mey rakh ker Dilsey likkhi hey... Baki jeetna sheetna naseeb ki baat hey...

Ye rae meri Dedication...... ​

Friends Version

Izzat ki bahar hey ye mela
or Pekar-e-Muhabbat

Aangan mey ghar k sub hen
chand dost khoobsorat

Heery hen wo chamaktey
anmol jin ki qeemat

Tafreeh melay mey dost hi
Hey sabab-e-fakher qismat

Hey dam sey in hi key
Mastiyaan sir pey Mosallat

chehr chaar mey na bachen wo
Jin sey inho ne ki mohabbat

Tafreeh sub hey insey
Ye b hen Khuda ki naimat

In k lagao sey barh ker
Shaed hi rishta ho koi musallat

Mili hen ye Tafreeh'yaan
Tafreeh Mela ki badoolat

Sisters Version

Izzat ki bahar hey ye Mela
or Pekar-e-Muhabbat

Aangan mey ghar k sub hein
Chand phol Khoobsorat

Motiyaan hein wo chamakti
Anmol jin ki qeemat

Tafreeh Melay mey behne hi
Hey bey misaal Qismat

Hey sirf bus un hi key
Daaman mey bhari muhabbat

Wo phooljariyaan hen aisi
Jinse Her haal mey hey raahat

Khushiyan sub he in sey
Ye hein Khuda ki naimat

In ki dua sey barh ker
Shaed hey koi doulat

Mili hey ye Piari khushiyaan
Tafreeh Mela ki badolat

​

@Don @RedRose64 @saviou @Pari @Seap @STAR24 @Shiraz-Khan @ZarOon @AnadiL @Rashk-E-Hina @Parisa_ @Huree @Guriya_Rani
@Abidi @Ahmad-Hasan @Aayat @aishagull @Akaaaash @Afsaan @Arzoo-E-Dil @Armaghankhan @Angel_A @Amaanali @amazingcreator
@amerzish_malik @Arz0o @Arzoomehak @Aqsh_Arch @Asheer @attiya @Atif-adi @Awadiya @Aaylaaaaa @Ayesha-Ali @Barkat_ @Babar-Azam
@Blue_Sky @Blue-Black @Bela @Baarish @Binte_Hawwa @babarnadeem996 @bilal_ishaq_786 @Chief @chai-mein-biscuit @CuTe_HiNa
@Cheeky @Charming_Deep @colgatepak @Danee @Dard-e-Dil @Dua001 @DevilJin @Dua_ @Dreamy Boy @dur-e-shawar @diya.
@errorsss @Fahad_Awan_Huh @Faiz4lyf @Flower_Flora @Fizaali @genuine @gullubat @Gul-e-lala @isra_ @gulfishan @huny @H0mer
@Hoorain @Hoorainn @HWJ @hariya @Haider_Mk @Iceage-TM @i love sahabah @italianVirus @illusionist @Island_Jewel
@junaid_ak47 @Jahanger @Just_Like_Roze @jimmyz @lovely_eyes @LaDDan @Lost Passenger @Lightman @Mano_Doll @Mahen
@maanu115 @Mantasha_Zawaar @Manxil @Marah @Mas00m-DeVil @marib @Menaz @minaahil @Mehar_G786 @Meekaeel @MSC
@Minal @mrX @MukarramRana @MumS @Muhammad_Rehman_Sabir @Nadaan_Shazie @Naila_Rubab @namaal @NamaL
@Nikka_Raja @nighatnaseem21 @Noor_Afridi @Noorjee @nizamuddin @Ocean-of-love @onemanarmy @p3arl @Panchii @Pari_Qrakh
@Poetry_Lover @Prince-Farry @Princess_Nisa @Princess_E @pyaridua @Rashk-E-Hina @Raat ki Rani @raaz the secret @Rahath
@raji35 @Ramiz @RaPuNzLe @reality @Rubi @REHAN_UK @*Sarlaa* @seemab_khan @Sameer_Khan @Syeda-Hilya @S_ChiragH
@SharieMalik @sweet-c-chori @ShehrYaar @shailina @Shahzii_1 @Shoaib_Nasir @shineday11 @Sabeen_27 @shzd @Shampak_ShooOO
@Silent_tear_hurt @sweet bhoot @sona_monda @silent_heart @SpectativeSchahzaad @soul_of_silence. @Stylo_Princess @Shona619 @SUMAIKA
@soul_snatcher @sweet_lily @sweet_c_kuri @Sweeta @Toobi @Twinkle Queen @Tanha_Dil @Tariq Saeed @ujalaa @UHPF
@Umeed_Ki_Kiran @Umm-e-ahmad @umeedz @unpredictable2 @Vasim @Wafa_Khan @wajahat_ahmad @X_w @yoursks @Yuxra
@Zia_Hayderi @Zaryaab @Ziddi_anGel @zonii @Zach

wah laala Awesome
aray wah mera bhai to poet nikla
Best of luck laala meri dua aap k sath hai

 

[whiteros]

wowwww brilliant sab section ko zabardast tareeqe se shamil kiya

shukran ....apko achhi lagi to bas phir picture hit

 

[Bird-Of-Paradise]

wahhh nicee

thnxx

 

[Aina_]

Khushi se gum ,gum se khushi tak
Meri duniya ghar se TM, TM se ghar tak




kisi darya se behte ho tum
mere zehn o dil main TM

tere sang chalun tere sang bahun
kahin khabar sunwate akhbaar ki ho
kahin tafreeh se dil behlate ho

jab i ho khushi ki koi ghadi
meri jaan greetings se khush kar jate ho

kahin afsurdah ho koi kali
sorrow se dharas bandhate ho

jo udaas se hon kuchh sathi tere
to jock bhi khoob sunate ho

mera dil behlane ki khatir
kia aala shair sunate ho

kuchh zindagi k sabaq sikhane ko
kia kia na iqtebaas padhwate ho

mustaqbil k me'maron ko bhi
tadrees ka dars dete ho

kudiyon k sajne sanwarne ko
ladkon ke fasion tasion k
tareeqe bhi kia kia sikhlate ho

garz k dariya rukta nahin
pal pal he rukh modhte jate ho

suno kuchh tum mere dil ki suno
TM tum se rishta kuchh aesa joda hai
keh kuchh khowab mille mujhe tum se he
aur kuchh taeeren baqi hain
.........
ay TM tu shad rahe
teri raonaq yunhe abaad rahe



​

@ZarOon @Hoorain

​

Very nycc ..

 

[Aina_]

Assalam O Alikum

Na to main poet na poetry ati lakin TM Birthday k liye attempt zaroor kiya hopefully u guyz will like it.....

In case pic clear na ho to:


Hum se zamana zamany se hum hain kahan
Hum jaisa koi duja hai to aye yahan

Unglieon pe sabhi nacahty hain hum
Saath apnay sabhi ko ghoomaty hain hum

Dil k bhoolay nazar main shararat barri
Aisy seedhay ko ulta banaty hain hum

Hum hain hum hain TM k deewany
Hum hain hum hain TM k deewany



Phoolon ki wadi main sapnoon ki nagri k jesa hamara jahan
Charoon taraf rang bikhary huye hain hai sar pe khula asman

Jaagti ankhon se sapny sajaty hain hum
Apnay hi app phir muskaraty hain hum

Hum hain hum hain TM k deewany
Hum hain hum hain TM k deewany

​

@Don @RedRose64 @saviou @Pari @Seap @STAR24 @Shiraz-Khan @ZarOon @AnadiL @Rashk-E-Hina @Parisa_ @Huree @Guriya_Rani @Azeyy @Abidi @Ahmad-Hasan @Aayat @aishagull @Akaaaash @Afsaan @Arzoo-E-Dil @Armaghankhan @Angel_A @Amaanali @amazingcreator @amerzish_malik @Arz0o @Arzoomehak @Aqsh_Arch @Asheer @attiya @AshirFrhan @Atif-adi @Babar-Azam @Blue_Sky @Blue-Black @Bela @Baarish @Binte_Hawwa @babarnadeem996 @bilal_ishaq_786 @Chief @chai-mein-biscuit @CuTe_HiNa @Cheeky @Charming_Deep @colgatepak @crystal_eyez @Aaylaaaaa @Danee @Dard-e-Dil @Dua001 @DevilJin @Dreamy Boy @dur-e-shawar @diya. @errorsss @Fa!th @Fahad_Awan_Huh @Faiz4lyf @Flower_Flora @farhat-siddiqa @Fizaali @genuine @gullubat @Gul-e-lala @isra_ @gulfishan @Hudx @huny @H0mer @Hoorain @HWJ @hariya @Haider_Mk @Iceage-TM @i love sahabah @Barkat_ @italianVirus @illusionist @Island_Jewel @junaid_ak47 @Ayesha-Ali @Jahanger @Just_Like_Roze @jimmyz @lovely_eyes @LaDDan @Lost Passenger @Lightman @Mano_Doll @Mahen @maanu115 @Mantasha_Zawaar @Manxil @Marah @marzish @Mas00m-DeVil @marib @Masoom_girl @Menaz @minaahil @Mehar_G786 @Meekaeel @Miss_Tittli @Dua_ @MSC @mishahaider @mrX @MukarramRana @MumS @Muhammad_Rehman_Sabir @Nadaan_Shazie @Naila_Rubab @namaal @NamaL @Nikka_Raja @nighatnaseem21 @Noor_Afridi @Noorjee @nizamuddin @Ocean-of-love @onemanarmy @p3arl @Panchii @Pari_Qrakh @Poetry_Lover @Prince-Farry @Princess_Nisa @Princess_E @pyaridua @Rashk-E-Hina @Raat ki Rani @raaz the secret @Rahath @raji35 @Ramiz @RaPuNzLe @reality @Rubi @REHAN_UK @*Sarlaa* @seemab_khan @Sameer_Khan @Syeda-Hilya @S_ChiragH @SharieMalik @sweet-c-chori @ShehrYaar @shailina @Shahzii_1 @Shoaib_Nasir @shineday11 @Sabeen_27 @shzd @Shampak_ShooOO @Silent_tear_hurt @sweet bhoot @sona_monda @silent_heart @SpectativeSchahzaad @soul_of_silence. @Stylo_Princess @SUMAIKA @soul_snatcher @sweet_lily @sweet_c_kuri @Sweeta @Toobi @Twinkle Queen @Tanha_Dil @Tariq Saeed @ujalaa @UHPF @Umeed_Ki_Kiran @Umm-e-ahmad @umeedz @unpredictable2 @Vasim @Wafa_Khan @wajahat_ahmad @X_w @yoursks @Yuxra @Zia_Hayderi @Zaryaab @Ziddi_anGel @zonii @Zach

Superb yaar zoi...bht acha likha hai

 

[AnadiL]

Wahhhh veryyy nice well written sis..
Bohat hi ceative likha hy..

Khushi se gum ,gum se khushi tak
Meri duniya ghar se TM, TM se ghar tak




kisi darya se behte ho tum
mere zehn o dil main TM

tere sang chalun tere sang bahun
kahin khabar sunwate akhbaar ki ho
kahin tafreeh se dil behlate ho

jab i ho khushi ki koi ghadi
meri jaan greetings se khush kar jate ho

kahin afsurdah ho koi kali
sorrow se dharas bandhate ho

jo udaas se hon kuchh sathi tere
to jock bhi khoob sunate ho

mera dil behlane ki khatir
kia aala shair sunate ho

kuchh zindagi k sabaq sikhane ko
kia kia na iqtebaas padhwate ho

mustaqbil k me'maron ko bhi
tadrees ka dars dete ho

kudiyon k sajne sanwarne ko
ladkon ke fasion tasion k
tareeqe bhi kia kia sikhlate ho

garz k dariya rukta nahin
pal pal he rukh modhte jate ho

suno kuchh tum mere dil ki suno
TM tum se rishta kuchh aesa joda hai
keh kuchh khowab mille mujhe tum se he
aur kuchh taeeren baqi hain
.........
ay TM tu shad rahe
teri raonaq yunhe abaad rahe



​

@ZarOon @Hoorain

​

 

[Bird-Of-Paradise]

Superb yaar zoi...bht acha likha hai

thnk u