nice poetry anaaya.khaabil e taareef.
aapne kaha k islah keliye waise aapne ye kaafi bahetreen likhi isme bahot kum hi gumjaayesh hai islah keliye laikinchund ek jo mujhe nazar aayi qaamiyan usey main yahan note kardeta hon.plz dont mind.
main doondhon tera akas chandni me larazte paani me
to anaya paani larazta nahi balke aap yahan chandni k jhilmilate likhte to bahot mauzu rahta
milte hain mujhe zindagi k asar teri har nishani me
yahan mujhe lagta hai k mujhe k agar is band ko is tarha likhtin to baheter hota
milte hain zindagi k asar teri har nishani me
is tarha band me wazan paida hoga
jaisa k allama iqbal (r) k is sher me hai k
haram e paak bhi اك ايك aik k bajaye ek hi likha taake band ka wazan badhe.khair once again nice sharing anaaya.
Wa Alaykum Assalam WrwbASSALAM O ALAIKUM
ma ne 1 or choti c ghazal likhi hai..
socha ap sb se share kr lon..
ap baten kese hai..meri islah b zarur kijiye ga..
jitni tarif ki jay kam hai really great quality hai
milthai thai jab hum kahtai thai, dil ka sukoon tum hi toh ho, rasta kathin hai manzil nahi, phir bhi mai rukta kio nahi :.