to phir sardion ka mosam tha log saray garon mian soya hoay thay.. veerani hi veerani thi.. Hawalai se pehlay aik Christian Qabristan tha.. Hawali mian ponchanay kay lie uss se ho kar jana parta tha.... Main raat ko akela 1200 bajay kay qareeb qabristaan se guzar raha tha... kay achanak kisi cheez kay meray peechay chalnay ki awaz ayi..aaaaaaaaaaa btao agey kya hua
main ne peecha dekha to aik khoofnaak qisam ki cheez meray peechay a rahi thi.. meri nazar uss kay poan pe pari.. us kay poan ultay thay.. koi churail thi.. main ne bagana shuru kar dia.. sath main aik muslimaano ka qabiristan main bagtay bagtay aik kisi muslimaan ki qabar kay peechay chup gaya... or woh cheez ghaib ho gi... muje bohat tez bukhar start ho gaya.. Lekan abhi to main ne hawali mian bhi jana hai.. wahan pe kia howa ab sochophir kya hua
sachi main detective ap wahan pe kia kar rahi thi.. or muje pata woh ap hi thian.. ap ne meri jasoosi kisi jaga bhi nahi choriheeheh phir tum bhagtey huey ander gaey samney kuch seriyan thi ....seriyon sey kisi ko tum ney uper jatey daikha tum n uska peecha krney k liye uper gaey aur wo cheez gaib ho gai ......
sachi main ufff ap ko to sari kahani pata hai.. dekho sab ko to na bataon mian kitna buzdul hun.. please detective ..wahan bohot sey room they pr aik room sey lock opn honey ki awaz ai tum us room ki traf barhey aur room ko opn kia k itni sari chimkaderon n tum pr hamla kia aur tumko zakhmi kia tum bhagney lgey bhagtey bhagtey tum kisi cheez sey takraey aur neechey gir gaey
waalikumsalamasalam o alaikum
jaise kai tum nae likha rubi kai ghalti ignore karein tu mai kuch nahe kahunga
baqi bohat acha likha hai and bech mai jo green lines likhe hai wo bhe bohat ache hain
poetry tu achi karte hi the tum aj story bhe dehk liya welldone [DOUBLEPOST=1342099347][/DOUBLEPOST]Rubi
aapko kiya hua??
u r welcome keep it upwaalikumsalam
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kuch nhi bus hansi a rhi haiwaalikumsalam
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