Complete the Shair by Adding a " Misra"

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Dear Participents lets we prove ourselves as if we are the best coordinator and reader of the poetry and have a fruitful stuff for others here, by completing the Shair with a line..

here we go..........

Is qadar musalsal theen, shiddatain judai ki...
 
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Is qadar musalsal theen, shiddatain judai ki
Phir bhi dillon mein thein, Khuwahishein Shanasai ki

Woh mugh se door reh kar bhi mere pass rehta tha Aksar
Magar us ke pyar mein thein ulfattein Ruswai Ki.
 
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Is qadar musalsal theen, shiddatain judai ki...
k tum sun na sako ge baat meri tanhai ki
 

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Salam to All of You!

Dear Participents lets we prove ourselves as if we are the best coordinator and reader of the poetry and have a fruitful stuff for others here, by completing the Shair with a line..

here we go..........

Is qadar musalsal theen, shiddatain judai ki...

is qadar musalsal theen shiddatain judayi ki
phir bhi aankhon may thi ramaq shansai ki {(popcorn)}
 

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hmmm nice game chalo yeh shair complete kro

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kia sitam hay k ab tairi surat :s

kia sitam hay k ab tairi surat................
waisi nhi dikhti jaisi fair&lovely lagane se pehle hua karti thi ;))
 

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kia sitam hay k ab tairi surat.
aayne may bhi hamain khud ko dikhne nhi daiti :s


pata nhi aur koi ban nhi rha tha me se fahad bhai ap khud hi bta dain doosra misra {(popcorn)}
 

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itna easy
Dil e Nadan Tujhe Hoa Kya Hai
Akhir Is Dard Ki Dawa Kya Hai
Hum Hain Mushtaq Or Woh Hain Bezaar
ilaahi Yehi Maajra Kya Hai
 
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oh qacha ye tha in fact me ko agli lines yaad nhi aa rhi thi is lie poocha {(popcorn)}

aik misra daina hay aur next memebrs apni marzi se agla misra bna sakte hain ya phir agle wala sahi misra hi dhoondhna hay?


acha ye banayain

phirti hay sar_e_shaam chadar may lipat kar..................
 

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Apni marzi se nhe banana hota balke shair ko usi misre se complet krna hota hai jo real shair hota hai n u ne jo dya wo nhi ata muje
 
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ooooooooooopsh wo shaer abhi tak bna hi nhi to aap ko aayega kaise ;))

fahad bhaya format change kartey hain
koi bhi misra dain aur apni marzi se agla misra bna k shaer complete karte hain

in fact ye misra maine khud hi dia baqi saare to easy thay wo to sab ko aate hon gaye is lie nhi diye


aap issi misre k aage apni marzi se koi misra banayain .......??
 

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yahan aata hi kon hay :s

hmm aise kartey hain k jis ne pehla misra dia hay wo hi bataye ga k ab kon agla misra de ga

shaer poora hone k baad

chalain ab aap agla misra banyain
 

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hmm ye aap ne agla misra bataya hay pichle shaer ka

ya koi misra dia hay next person k lie?
 
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