John Elia's Poetry

[Rubi]

Hoon zad par is teer-e-fanaa ki
Abhi jysy meri baari nhi hy​

 

[فہد]

ay ishq aa ke phir se koi tajurba karen
main bhoolne laga hon purani kahaniyan

 

[Rubi]

Ab kya kahun ... k saara muhalla hy sharamsaar
Main hun azaab myn k mere zakham bhar gaye​

 

[فہد]

tera khayal to hai per tera wajod nahi
tere liye to yeh mehfil sajayi thi maine

 

[فہد]

ab yeh surat hai ke jan e jaan tujhe
bhoolne main meri bhalayi hai

 

[فہد]

yeh jazba e ishq hai ke jazba e rehem
tere aanso mujhe rulwaa rahe hain

 

[فہد]

tum bhi aksar kahin nahi hote
main bhi aksar kahin nahi hota

 

[Rubi]

Mery gussy ka asar kya hoga
Mujhy gussy myn hansi aati hy

@Hoorain @Kit_Kat​

 

[فہد]

tumne ehsaan kya tha jo mujhe chaha tha
ab woh ehsaan jata do to maza ajai

 

[فہد]

falan se ati hai ghazal achi falan ki
falan ke zakham ache the falan se

 

[Hoorain]

Mery gussy ka asar kya hoga
Mujhy gussy myn hansi aati hy

@Hoorain @Kit_Kat​

wah wah

waise rubi u ne note kiya john elia kaafi awazar type shayer lagte hain apni shayri se inhe daikh k muje aik doctor yaad aaying wo b aisi awazari wali batain akrte hain

 

[فہد]

husn pe uske nuqta cheen hi rahe
tha tabiyat main ijtihaad bohot

 

[Rubi]

han awaazaar .. thaka hua .. bechara

wah wah

waise rubi u ne note kiya john elia kaafi awazar type shayer lagte hain apni shayri se inhe daikh k muje aik doctor yaad aaying wo b aisi awazari wali batain akrte hain

 

[فہد]

yeh jo takta hai asmaan ko tu
koi rehta hai asmaan main kya?
yeh mujhe chen kyun nahi parta
ek hi shaks tha jahan main kya?

 

[Rubi]

Aapny theek pehchana mujhko
Sakht bewafa hun main !!​

 

[Hoorain]

han awaazaar .. thaka hua .. bechara

bechara to na kaho bohat hi bharaas nikali hay aksar shaeron may par wo parh k maza aata hy waise is ne kaafi mashoor shayron pe tanqeed b ki hay,,in k khud k kuch ashaar muje kafi ghalat b laggey

 

[فہد]

agar dewaaren zee rooh hoti
to woh apne seene pe likhe hoye
zehreele na'aron ke asar se
halaak hojati

 

[Rubi]

han KHUDA py jo shyari hy ..wo mjhy b thori lagin ..shirkiya type
par style acha hy ..easy n full bharas nikaalny wala

bechara to na kaho bohat hi bharaas nikali hay aksar shaeron may par wo parh k maza aata hy waise is ne kaafi mashoor shayron pe tanqeed b ki hay,,in k khud k kuch ashaar muje kafi ghalat b laggey

 

[Hoorain]

han KHUDA py jo shyari hy ..wo mjhy b thori lagin ..shirkiya type
par style acha hy ..easy n full bharas nikaalny wala

haha haan u k type ka
waise aik faida hy kisi pe bohat ghussa ho to apne alfaz zaya nhi krne parte joan ELia ka koi shaer likh do wohi kaafi hota hay

 

[فہد]

woh tabiyat ka mera tha bhi nahi
or phir main to khud apna bhi nahi