koi badi baat nahin ishar likhna

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

lolzzz..im not a teacher
bas jo ghalt laga keh diya..& no shukryaa..ok..?

ok no thanks aur aaj ke baad aapko teacher bhi nahin kahunga


teacher

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

zabardast yaar choti c umar men itna sb

Shukria shukria achha andaaz hai commentry ka

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Walaikum assalam saif
main samajhta hon aapki umda tahreeron me ek aur izafa kia aapne
hamesha ki tarha is baar bhi bahot umda likha mashaAllah
aur jo ghaltiya mujhe yahan lagi thin uski bahaar ne islaah kardi.

Bohot obhot shukria bhai jan
hmmmm chalein agli baar agar kisi aur
ne na theek kiye hon to aap
bhi mistakes point out kijiyega ok

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Bohot bohot shukria Zee bhai

Asma baji thankyou so much

aur Sajid bhai aapki housla afzaiy saath rahi to

mein insha'ALLAH likhta rahoonga​

 

[HuriYa]

Wah wah Wah Zaberdast..!

Bhae Bohat khOob likha hay..! well Is Ghazal main Bohat Improvement nazer aaie hay mujhay as compate to previous poetries..! Appreciated..!

keep it up.

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Thankyou very very much Hoor sis
insha'ALLAH aur bhi improvement aayegi

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

bohot bohot shukria HoOr sis

insha'ALLAH aage aur bhi imrovement aayegi

 

[Wasif Safi]

WalekumAssalam Saif..

Muaafi mujhe thori si der hogai reply dene me Bro...

Lekin aapke ashaar rehte hi itne khoobsurat hai ke baghair use sarhae yaha se jaa hi nahi sakta koi bhi....

Bohot Umda Bro, aise hi apni achi achi poetry share karte rahen aur ek book likh daalen apni poetry per 100% gurantee Hit hai BOSS........

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Bohot bohot shukria bhai jan aap ne to mujhe speechless kar diye

apne alfaaz se i will just say a big thanks

no more comments on ur this post

 

[RedAngel]

aaalllaaa................wasy yay nazool kb hua ?

 

[Atif-adi]

zabardast yaar choti c umar men itna sb

kyu k inko, choti c umer hai lag gaya rog

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

aaalllaaa................wasy yay nazool kb hua ?

Thanks

taqreeban eik hafta ho gaya hoga isko likhe huwe

 

[Sara Cilli Milli]

ary wah chiragh

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Shukria Sara sis