Thanks AnnayamashaAllah..
zee boht khoob..
lekin udas c...
chalen boht khushi huvi..humare poets me ek naya izafa..
likhte rahen..
Thanks Desi Aap bhi khush rahenGood one
bht umdah...
bht achi poetry likhi hai zee.... reallly nice....
Khush Rahien
acha..main ne dekhi nhi shyd..
Thanks Annayaaur ye naya izafa
maine pehle bhi kafi share ki hain apni poetries
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hmmHan Sonu Thanks .. Bus kya karen![]()
Haan coz main share buhat kam karta hon sub seacha..main ne dekhi nhi shyd..
Thankssss ammie .. u toe janti he ho akhir apne dost konice poetry Zee...bohat hi dardnak & hearttouching hai...![]()
ji maroash acha nahi lagta ke sub ko apni udassi se udas karon saif bro ki farmaish thi toe bus,,her kisi se share kerna acha nae na lagta es liye
bht kam share krty ho
I m right???????????????????
Thankssss ammie .. u toe janti he ho akhir apne dost ko![]()
Thanks for appreciate my feelings .. and yap jis line ko aap sub se zyada toucy keh rahi hain woh he asal line hai is pori poetry main isi ke gird ghomti hai pori poetryMashAllah aapne tu buhut he acha likha hain, I didnt know that k aapko bhi poetry athe hain TM pe tu MashAllah ek se berh ker ek Poet hain.
buhut he zaberdast lines likhe aapne Really Apreciate your Poetry
I think you Should Keep it up and Hope to Read more poetries of yours
infact this line is more touchy
Kal Thi Naveed-e-Eid Mere Shehar Main Rasm-e-Duniya Hum Ne Bhi Nibhai
Pehna Tha Naya Jora hum ne ub Rooh pe Orha Kafan Kaise Dikhayen Tum Ko