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Kya haal hai sabka?? So here we go......

Talib E Ishq ki second episode share karny ja rahi hun hopefully apko pasand ayegi kindly do give your feedback :)

TALIB E ISHQ


Episode 2


Anum samreen ka hath pakar kar samreen ki tarf moun kar k kehti hai ab tum mujh pe chor do or saad se kehti lambi chori bat se simple yeh hai k samreen tum ko pasand karti hai or woh chahti hai ke sari life tumhare sath rahey islia woh kafi dino se tum ko lay kar perahan hai.. Q k tumhari us se bat nahi ho pa rahi thi


Saad ek dum choonk jata hai or kehta hai kiyaaaaaa.........


Waqaiii


Anum kehti hai zada bache na banu tum ko bhi andaza hoga k yeh aese hi hamesha tumhari side nahi leti .


Saad kehta hai jese tum asad ki leti ho yeh sun kar samreen ke face pe bhi smile ajati hai or saad kehta hai mujhe nahi maloom tha samreen mere barey mai aesa soochti hai mai tu hamesha is ko apna best friend samjhta thaa lakin agar yeh aesa chahti hai ke hum hamesha sath rahey tu is se achi or kiya bat ho sakti hai mai bhi sam k sath hamesha rehna pasand karunga


Yeh sunn kar samreen apne dono hath apne moun per rakh kar tango pe sar rakh leti hai anum ek zor daar awaz mai yesssssssss kehti hai .. Or kehti hai mubarak ho my new love bird samreen khushi se muskura rahi hoti hai. Or ek dum se chup sa mahool ban jata hai. Samreen ka ghar bhi a chuka hota hai samreen dono ko bye kehte hue ghar jati hai


Or muskurate hue door bell bajati hai samreen ki ammi door kholti hai or samreen ko dekh kar pochti hain hogai party samreen jis ke dil mai ek alag hi party chal rahi hoti hai or bhot smily andaz mai kehti hai jeee.


huriya atee hai sab detail poochti hai. Samreen saad wali bat k ilawa sab detail batati hai


Or jald sone ka keh kar bed pe apni new life k barey mai soochna shoro kardeti hai. Ab us ko is bat ka intezar hota hai ke kab subha ho or woh anum se sab discuss karey or yeh soochtey soochtey woh so jati hai .


agley din bhot khushgawar mood k sath uthti hai or khud ko bhot khas khas mehsoos karti hai


Aese hi ghar ke kam wagera karte or dosre kam karte hue sham hojati hai or har telephone ki bell bajne mai ek khushi hoti k shayad anum ki call ho or woh online aney ka kahey per cli pe number dekh kar us ka intezar or taweel hojataa woh khud ko pehle se tayar rakhne k lia online hojati hai


Tu us ko saad online milta hai us ka intezar ek dum khushi mai badal jata hai jab woh saad k offline msg dekhti hai or porey parhne se pehle yahoo pe reply karti hai takey woh kahin offline na ho jaey thori dair bad anum bhi online ajati hai or teeno rat ki party ko lay kar khoob bat karte hain or dosri taraf saad or samreen pvt chat mai alag bat kar rahe hote hain apne relation ko lay kar k ghar mai bata dia jae ya nahi.


Samreen saad se poochti hai ke mai huriya ko bata dun relation ke barey mai saad kehta hai jesa tum ko theek lagey or phr bolta hai us ko abhi kam se jana hai baqi bat bad mai karein gey detail mai samreen bhot sari wishes k sath saad ko bye karti hai or phr apni pori tawaja anum pe dalti hai or us se discuss karti hai k us ko kiya karna chaiyeh or kiya nahi.


Anum kehti hai tum khud huriya ko bata do . Us ko agar kisi or se pata chala tu us ka tu phr maloom hai na or agar woh agree hue tu ghar mai bat karne k lia help karey gi samreen kehti hai anum ko k haan idea tu acha hai mai akele mai us se bat karungi.


samreen moka dekh kar huriya ko sab bata deti hai.


Huriya tu pehle sab sunti hai or pht kehti hai k abhi kisi ko kuch mat batana ghar mai result ane k bad batana warna agar result mai kuch masla hua tu sari wajah isi ko banei gay samreen advice sun kar huriya ko galey laga leti hai or thankss kehti bhot ache andaz mai. Or phr is tarha week mai kafi din saad or samreen ki bat hoti or kafi din nahi ho patee


Or samreen ka result ata hai or woh a grade k sath 10 standrd pass karti hai us ki ammi khush hoti hain or dono se poochti k kiya inam chaiyeh huriya or samreen ammi ko alag kamrey mai ly kar jatey hain bhot requestly andaz mai ek bat batane ko kehte hain or promiss karwate hain ke na gussa karein gi or na kisi ko batein gi or phr saad k barey mai bata deti hain or un ki marzi maloom karti hain.


"samreen or huriya bilkul dosto ki tarha apni ammui ke sath rehti hain , samreen k father zada ter mulk se bahar rehte hein islia 3no bacho ko wohi paalti hain or bhot friendly ho kar un ke sath rehti hain ."


Saad ka bachpan se samreen k ghar ana jana tha .unho ne dekha hua tha saad ko islia zada objection nhi hua samreen ki life mai ek alag hi khushi si agai thi. Sab kuch itni asani se complete ho raha tha jis ka us ko bhi andaza nahi thaa ek taraf tu woh kisi k lia bhot khas banne ja rahi thi or dosra us ki family us ki khushi se razi they.


Ahista ahista sab ko maloom hone laga samreen ki pasand ka saad ko bachpan se janne ki wajah se kisi ko objection nahi hua isi doran saad apne dosto mai bhot zada busy hone lag gaya or phr week mai ek hi din bat hoti thi samreen ki .woh bhi samreen k bhot sarey sawalo ka do teen line ka jawab detaa thaa samreen kafi mahino se us ke aese behave ki wajah se pershan rehne lagi thi.


Or anum us ko samjhti thi ke woh apne new dosto k sath busy hotaa hoga, timming match nahi hopati hongi islia nahi bat ho pati hogi lakin jis ko intezar hota hai woh yeh sab samjhne se qasir hota ha ek din fone pe bat hotey hue samreen anum k samne roo parti hai or kehti hai saad pehle aesa kabhi nahi karta tha per ab bhot hone laga hai agar mujh se koi ghalti hui hai tu mai maufi mangti ho lkin aesa na karey mere sath.


Anum samreen ko is halat mai dekh kar gusse mai ajati hai or asad ko call karti hai or asad ko kehti hai jese bhi ho saad se mere bat karwao lazmi.


do din bad saad asad ke ghar kisi kam se ata hai tu asad saad ki bat anum se karwata hai anum bhot gusse mai saad se poochti hai k tum yeh sab kar k kiya sabit kar rahey ho k tum bhot busy insan ho or baqi sari duniya farigh hai. Woh larki tumhare lia itni pershan hai or tumhare zara sa time nahi k us ko reply kar saku.


Saad kehta hai mai ne nahi kaha us ko wait karne ko or pershan hone ko . Or mai itna farigh nahi ke har time online reh kar bat karun mere apni bhi life hai . Or mujhe apni iife k barey mai soochne ka haq hai.


anum kehti hai or woh jo tumhara roz intezar karti hai us kaa kiyaa ?


saad kehta hai us ko bolo mat kiaa karey mera intezar . Mujh se yeh sab relation nhi rakha jataa . Mujhe life mai bhot kuch karna hai or in chezo k bare mai soochne ka time nahi us ko agar mere sath rehna hai tu as a friend reh sakti hai is se zada ki umeed nahi rakhey mujh se.


" saad ka aesa behave islia hota hai q k woh jin dosto mai ab shamil hua hai woh log kafi rich or well standard log hain. Samreen ek sedhi sadhi larki thi . Or look mai bhi zada modern nahi thi . Or saad jin logo mai ab shamil hua hai waha us ki female friend look mai kafi modern hain.islia saad apne us fesle ko apnane se mukar raha hota hai or future ka bahana kar ke samreen se jaan chutwana chatah takey us ke new dosto ko samreen or us ke affair na pata chal sakey "


Saad anum se kehta hai woh jo kuch hua woh bhool jaye woh jo kuch hua jald bazi mai hua or humara bachpana tha. Achey dost ban kar reh lay agar rehna hai tu anum yeh sun kar gusse mai fone rakh deti hai thori time bad asad ka dobara fone ata hai anum k pas or woh batata hai k saad ki aj kal new or high class logo k sath dosti hogai hai, islia us ko ab samreen us k type ki nahi lagti isi wajah se woh tum logo ko ignore kar raha tha.


Anum gusse mai asad ko bhi batein sunati hai ke tum sab larke ek jese hotey ho .etc etc.... Or fone rakh deti hai or kuch dair khamosh rehne k bad pershan hoti hai ke yeh sab woh samreen ko kese batae gi kuch din woh kuch nahi batati samreen ko phr ek din samreen k ghar ja kar us ko sab batati hai jis pe samreen apne ap ko bura bhala kehti hai ke woh thi hi nahi is kabil.


Iski wajah se us ne dost bhi kho dia.


Lakin us ko yeh andaza nahi tha ke saad ne waqti tor pe us se pyar kiaa or jab us se achi mil gai tu apne future ka bahana bana kar chor dia or phr kuch week isi tarha us ne rotey hue guzar diye isi doran samreen k bhai ne cable net lagwa lia jis ki speed pehle se taiz or full time internet ki saholat lakin samreen k lia yeh sab fazool sa lag raha thaa


Isi doran us ka college shoro hojata hai or woh college jane k bajae pvt admission lay leti hai or ghar mai zada waaqt guzarti hai or un ka group bhi divide hojata hai saad alag dostoo mai chala jata hai asad bhi pak se bahar chala jata hai group mai bas anum huriya or samreen bachtey hain


Is doran huriya ko koi tafreeh meela k chatroom ka batata hai huriya waha visit karti hai tu waha us ko new new contest or bhot si new maloomat ka pata chalta hai or bhot sey new logo se milne ka bhi moqa milta hai yeh us doran aesa chatroom hota jo badtamizi jesi chezo se fully secure hota hai or fake logo k chances na hone k braber hoteu hain ahista ahista huriya bhi contest, post wagera mai part leti hai


Or phr samreen ko bhi help karne k lia apne sath shamil kar leti hai or samreen ko bhi waha as a user enter karwa deti hai samreen jese jese tafreeh meela ki web use karti hai wese wese us ka dehan un porani bataon se hattana shoro hojata ha woh wese tu active part tu nhi leti lakin khamoshi se beth kar logo ki chat parthi hai ya phr user ki post pe rating deti hai or kabhi orkut pe koi poetry pasand ati tu us ko tm per share kardeti hai.




Next episode mai ap parhiye ga.. K kesa woh waqt hai samreen ki life mai jab woh sab pershania bhoool jati hai or kuch chata hota hai us ki life mai.





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Bird-Of-Paradise

 

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Kya haal hai sabka?? So here we go......

Talib E Ishq ki second episode share karny ja rahi hun hopefully apko pasand ayegi kindly do give your feedback :)

TALIB E ISHQ


Episode 2


Anum samreen ka hath pakar kar samreen ki tarf moun kar k kehti hai ab tum mujh pe chor do or saad se kehti lambi chori bat se simple yeh hai k samreen tum ko pasand karti hai or woh chahti hai ke sari life tumhare sath rahey islia woh kafi dino se tum ko lay kar perahan hai.. Q k tumhari us se bat nahi ho pa rahi thi


Saad ek dum choonk jata hai or kehta hai kiyaaaaaa.........


Waqaiii


Anum kehti hai zada bache na banu tum ko bhi andaza hoga k yeh aese hi hamesha tumhari side nahi leti .


Saad kehta hai jese tum asad ki leti ho yeh sun kar samreen ke face pe bhi smile ajati hai or saad kehta hai mujhe nahi maloom tha samreen mere barey mai aesa soochti hai mai tu hamesha is ko apna best friend samjhta thaa lakin agar yeh aesa chahti hai ke hum hamesha sath rahey tu is se achi or kiya bat ho sakti hai mai bhi sam k sath hamesha rehna pasand karunga


Yeh sunn kar samreen apne dono hath apne moun per rakh kar tango pe sar rakh leti hai anum ek zor daar awaz mai yesssssssss kehti hai .. Or kehti hai mubarak ho my new love bird samreen khushi se muskura rahi hoti hai. Or ek dum se chup sa mahool ban jata hai. Samreen ka ghar bhi a chuka hota hai samreen dono ko bye kehte hue ghar jati hai


Or muskurate hue door bell bajati hai samreen ki ammi door kholti hai or samreen ko dekh kar pochti hain hogai party samreen jis ke dil mai ek alag hi party chal rahi hoti hai or bhot smily andaz mai kehti hai jeee.


huriya atee hai sab detail poochti hai. Samreen saad wali bat k ilawa sab detail batati hai


Or jald sone ka keh kar bed pe apni new life k barey mai soochna shoro kardeti hai. Ab us ko is bat ka intezar hota hai ke kab subha ho or woh anum se sab discuss karey or yeh soochtey soochtey woh so jati hai .


agley din bhot khushgawar mood k sath uthti hai or khud ko bhot khas khas mehsoos karti hai


Aese hi ghar ke kam wagera karte or dosre kam karte hue sham hojati hai or har telephone ki bell bajne mai ek khushi hoti k shayad anum ki call ho or woh online aney ka kahey per cli pe number dekh kar us ka intezar or taweel hojataa woh khud ko pehle se tayar rakhne k lia online hojati hai


Tu us ko saad online milta hai us ka intezar ek dum khushi mai badal jata hai jab woh saad k offline msg dekhti hai or porey parhne se pehle yahoo pe reply karti hai takey woh kahin offline na ho jaey thori dair bad anum bhi online ajati hai or teeno rat ki party ko lay kar khoob bat karte hain or dosri taraf saad or samreen pvt chat mai alag bat kar rahe hote hain apne relation ko lay kar k ghar mai bata dia jae ya nahi.


Samreen saad se poochti hai ke mai huriya ko bata dun relation ke barey mai saad kehta hai jesa tum ko theek lagey or phr bolta hai us ko abhi kam se jana hai baqi bat bad mai karein gey detail mai samreen bhot sari wishes k sath saad ko bye karti hai or phr apni pori tawaja anum pe dalti hai or us se discuss karti hai k us ko kiya karna chaiyeh or kiya nahi.


Anum kehti hai tum khud huriya ko bata do . Us ko agar kisi or se pata chala tu us ka tu phr maloom hai na or agar woh agree hue tu ghar mai bat karne k lia help karey gi samreen kehti hai anum ko k haan idea tu acha hai mai akele mai us se bat karungi.


samreen moka dekh kar huriya ko sab bata deti hai.


Huriya tu pehle sab sunti hai or pht kehti hai k abhi kisi ko kuch mat batana ghar mai result ane k bad batana warna agar result mai kuch masla hua tu sari wajah isi ko banei gay samreen advice sun kar huriya ko galey laga leti hai or thankss kehti bhot ache andaz mai. Or phr is tarha week mai kafi din saad or samreen ki bat hoti or kafi din nahi ho patee


Or samreen ka result ata hai or woh a grade k sath 10 standrd pass karti hai us ki ammi khush hoti hain or dono se poochti k kiya inam chaiyeh huriya or samreen ammi ko alag kamrey mai ly kar jatey hain bhot requestly andaz mai ek bat batane ko kehte hain or promiss karwate hain ke na gussa karein gi or na kisi ko batein gi or phr saad k barey mai bata deti hain or un ki marzi maloom karti hain.


"samreen or huriya bilkul dosto ki tarha apni ammui ke sath rehti hain , samreen k father zada ter mulk se bahar rehte hein islia 3no bacho ko wohi paalti hain or bhot friendly ho kar un ke sath rehti hain ."


Saad ka bachpan se samreen k ghar ana jana tha .unho ne dekha hua tha saad ko islia zada objection nhi hua samreen ki life mai ek alag hi khushi si agai thi. Sab kuch itni asani se complete ho raha tha jis ka us ko bhi andaza nahi thaa ek taraf tu woh kisi k lia bhot khas banne ja rahi thi or dosra us ki family us ki khushi se razi they.


Ahista ahista sab ko maloom hone laga samreen ki pasand ka saad ko bachpan se janne ki wajah se kisi ko objection nahi hua isi doran saad apne dosto mai bhot zada busy hone lag gaya or phr week mai ek hi din bat hoti thi samreen ki .woh bhi samreen k bhot sarey sawalo ka do teen line ka jawab detaa thaa samreen kafi mahino se us ke aese behave ki wajah se pershan rehne lagi thi.


Or anum us ko samjhti thi ke woh apne new dosto k sath busy hotaa hoga, timming match nahi hopati hongi islia nahi bat ho pati hogi lakin jis ko intezar hota hai woh yeh sab samjhne se qasir hota ha ek din fone pe bat hotey hue samreen anum k samne roo parti hai or kehti hai saad pehle aesa kabhi nahi karta tha per ab bhot hone laga hai agar mujh se koi ghalti hui hai tu mai maufi mangti ho lkin aesa na karey mere sath.


Anum samreen ko is halat mai dekh kar gusse mai ajati hai or asad ko call karti hai or asad ko kehti hai jese bhi ho saad se mere bat karwao lazmi.


do din bad saad asad ke ghar kisi kam se ata hai tu asad saad ki bat anum se karwata hai anum bhot gusse mai saad se poochti hai k tum yeh sab kar k kiya sabit kar rahey ho k tum bhot busy insan ho or baqi sari duniya farigh hai. Woh larki tumhare lia itni pershan hai or tumhare zara sa time nahi k us ko reply kar saku.


Saad kehta hai mai ne nahi kaha us ko wait karne ko or pershan hone ko . Or mai itna farigh nahi ke har time online reh kar bat karun mere apni bhi life hai . Or mujhe apni iife k barey mai soochne ka haq hai.


anum kehti hai or woh jo tumhara roz intezar karti hai us kaa kiyaa ?


saad kehta hai us ko bolo mat kiaa karey mera intezar . Mujh se yeh sab relation nhi rakha jataa . Mujhe life mai bhot kuch karna hai or in chezo k bare mai soochne ka time nahi us ko agar mere sath rehna hai tu as a friend reh sakti hai is se zada ki umeed nahi rakhey mujh se.


" saad ka aesa behave islia hota hai q k woh jin dosto mai ab shamil hua hai woh log kafi rich or well standard log hain. Samreen ek sedhi sadhi larki thi . Or look mai bhi zada modern nahi thi . Or saad jin logo mai ab shamil hua hai waha us ki female friend look mai kafi modern hain.islia saad apne us fesle ko apnane se mukar raha hota hai or future ka bahana kar ke samreen se jaan chutwana chatah takey us ke new dosto ko samreen or us ke affair na pata chal sakey "


Saad anum se kehta hai woh jo kuch hua woh bhool jaye woh jo kuch hua jald bazi mai hua or humara bachpana tha. Achey dost ban kar reh lay agar rehna hai tu anum yeh sun kar gusse mai fone rakh deti hai thori time bad asad ka dobara fone ata hai anum k pas or woh batata hai k saad ki aj kal new or high class logo k sath dosti hogai hai, islia us ko ab samreen us k type ki nahi lagti isi wajah se woh tum logo ko ignore kar raha tha.


Anum gusse mai asad ko bhi batein sunati hai ke tum sab larke ek jese hotey ho .etc etc.... Or fone rakh deti hai or kuch dair khamosh rehne k bad pershan hoti hai ke yeh sab woh samreen ko kese batae gi kuch din woh kuch nahi batati samreen ko phr ek din samreen k ghar ja kar us ko sab batati hai jis pe samreen apne ap ko bura bhala kehti hai ke woh thi hi nahi is kabil.


Iski wajah se us ne dost bhi kho dia.


Lakin us ko yeh andaza nahi tha ke saad ne waqti tor pe us se pyar kiaa or jab us se achi mil gai tu apne future ka bahana bana kar chor dia or phr kuch week isi tarha us ne rotey hue guzar diye isi doran samreen k bhai ne cable net lagwa lia jis ki speed pehle se taiz or full time internet ki saholat lakin samreen k lia yeh sab fazool sa lag raha thaa


Isi doran us ka college shoro hojata hai or woh college jane k bajae pvt admission lay leti hai or ghar mai zada waaqt guzarti hai or un ka group bhi divide hojata hai saad alag dostoo mai chala jata hai asad bhi pak se bahar chala jata hai group mai bas anum huriya or samreen bachtey hain


Is doran huriya ko koi tafreeh meela k chatroom ka batata hai huriya waha visit karti hai tu waha us ko new new contest or bhot si new maloomat ka pata chalta hai or bhot sey new logo se milne ka bhi moqa milta hai yeh us doran aesa chatroom hota jo badtamizi jesi chezo se fully secure hota hai or fake logo k chances na hone k braber hoteu hain ahista ahista huriya bhi contest, post wagera mai part leti hai


Or phr samreen ko bhi help karne k lia apne sath shamil kar leti hai or samreen ko bhi waha as a user enter karwa deti hai samreen jese jese tafreeh meela ki web use karti hai wese wese us ka dehan un porani bataon se hattana shoro hojata ha woh wese tu active part tu nhi leti lakin khamoshi se beth kar logo ki chat parthi hai ya phr user ki post pe rating deti hai or kabhi orkut pe koi poetry pasand ati tu us ko tm per share kardeti hai.




Next episode mai ap parhiye ga.. K kesa woh waqt hai samreen ki life mai jab woh sab pershania bhoool jati hai or kuch chata hota hai us ki life mai.





Regards
Bird-Of-Paradise

ary wah mein first hun ;)) mojein chalo tang na karna parhny do ;;) :p
 

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Kya haal hai sabka?? So here we go......

Talib E Ishq ki second episode share karny ja rahi hun hopefully apko pasand ayegi kindly do give your feedback :)

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Episode 2


Anum samreen ka hath pakar kar samreen ki tarf moun kar k kehti hai ab tum mujh pe chor do or saad se kehti lambi chori bat se simple yeh hai k samreen tum ko pasand karti hai or woh chahti hai ke sari life tumhare sath rahey islia woh kafi dino se tum ko lay kar perahan hai.. Q k tumhari us se bat nahi ho pa rahi thi


Saad ek dum choonk jata hai or kehta hai kiyaaaaaa.........


Waqaiii


Anum kehti hai zada bache na banu tum ko bhi andaza hoga k yeh aese hi hamesha tumhari side nahi leti .


Saad kehta hai jese tum asad ki leti ho yeh sun kar samreen ke face pe bhi smile ajati hai or saad kehta hai mujhe nahi maloom tha samreen mere barey mai aesa soochti hai mai tu hamesha is ko apna best friend samjhta thaa lakin agar yeh aesa chahti hai ke hum hamesha sath rahey tu is se achi or kiya bat ho sakti hai mai bhi sam k sath hamesha rehna pasand karunga


Yeh sunn kar samreen apne dono hath apne moun per rakh kar tango pe sar rakh leti hai anum ek zor daar awaz mai yesssssssss kehti hai .. Or kehti hai mubarak ho my new love bird samreen khushi se muskura rahi hoti hai. Or ek dum se chup sa mahool ban jata hai. Samreen ka ghar bhi a chuka hota hai samreen dono ko bye kehte hue ghar jati hai


Or muskurate hue door bell bajati hai samreen ki ammi door kholti hai or samreen ko dekh kar pochti hain hogai party samreen jis ke dil mai ek alag hi party chal rahi hoti hai or bhot smily andaz mai kehti hai jeee.


huriya atee hai sab detail poochti hai. Samreen saad wali bat k ilawa sab detail batati hai


Or jald sone ka keh kar bed pe apni new life k barey mai soochna shoro kardeti hai. Ab us ko is bat ka intezar hota hai ke kab subha ho or woh anum se sab discuss karey or yeh soochtey soochtey woh so jati hai .


agley din bhot khushgawar mood k sath uthti hai or khud ko bhot khas khas mehsoos karti hai


Aese hi ghar ke kam wagera karte or dosre kam karte hue sham hojati hai or har telephone ki bell bajne mai ek khushi hoti k shayad anum ki call ho or woh online aney ka kahey per cli pe number dekh kar us ka intezar or taweel hojataa woh khud ko pehle se tayar rakhne k lia online hojati hai


Tu us ko saad online milta hai us ka intezar ek dum khushi mai badal jata hai jab woh saad k offline msg dekhti hai or porey parhne se pehle yahoo pe reply karti hai takey woh kahin offline na ho jaey thori dair bad anum bhi online ajati hai or teeno rat ki party ko lay kar khoob bat karte hain or dosri taraf saad or samreen pvt chat mai alag bat kar rahe hote hain apne relation ko lay kar k ghar mai bata dia jae ya nahi.


Samreen saad se poochti hai ke mai huriya ko bata dun relation ke barey mai saad kehta hai jesa tum ko theek lagey or phr bolta hai us ko abhi kam se jana hai baqi bat bad mai karein gey detail mai samreen bhot sari wishes k sath saad ko bye karti hai or phr apni pori tawaja anum pe dalti hai or us se discuss karti hai k us ko kiya karna chaiyeh or kiya nahi.


Anum kehti hai tum khud huriya ko bata do . Us ko agar kisi or se pata chala tu us ka tu phr maloom hai na or agar woh agree hue tu ghar mai bat karne k lia help karey gi samreen kehti hai anum ko k haan idea tu acha hai mai akele mai us se bat karungi.


samreen moka dekh kar huriya ko sab bata deti hai.


Huriya tu pehle sab sunti hai or pht kehti hai k abhi kisi ko kuch mat batana ghar mai result ane k bad batana warna agar result mai kuch masla hua tu sari wajah isi ko banei gay samreen advice sun kar huriya ko galey laga leti hai or thankss kehti bhot ache andaz mai. Or phr is tarha week mai kafi din saad or samreen ki bat hoti or kafi din nahi ho patee


Or samreen ka result ata hai or woh a grade k sath 10 standrd pass karti hai us ki ammi khush hoti hain or dono se poochti k kiya inam chaiyeh huriya or samreen ammi ko alag kamrey mai ly kar jatey hain bhot requestly andaz mai ek bat batane ko kehte hain or promiss karwate hain ke na gussa karein gi or na kisi ko batein gi or phr saad k barey mai bata deti hain or un ki marzi maloom karti hain.


"samreen or huriya bilkul dosto ki tarha apni ammui ke sath rehti hain , samreen k father zada ter mulk se bahar rehte hein islia 3no bacho ko wohi paalti hain or bhot friendly ho kar un ke sath rehti hain ."


Saad ka bachpan se samreen k ghar ana jana tha .unho ne dekha hua tha saad ko islia zada objection nhi hua samreen ki life mai ek alag hi khushi si agai thi. Sab kuch itni asani se complete ho raha tha jis ka us ko bhi andaza nahi thaa ek taraf tu woh kisi k lia bhot khas banne ja rahi thi or dosra us ki family us ki khushi se razi they.


Ahista ahista sab ko maloom hone laga samreen ki pasand ka saad ko bachpan se janne ki wajah se kisi ko objection nahi hua isi doran saad apne dosto mai bhot zada busy hone lag gaya or phr week mai ek hi din bat hoti thi samreen ki .woh bhi samreen k bhot sarey sawalo ka do teen line ka jawab detaa thaa samreen kafi mahino se us ke aese behave ki wajah se pershan rehne lagi thi.


Or anum us ko samjhti thi ke woh apne new dosto k sath busy hotaa hoga, timming match nahi hopati hongi islia nahi bat ho pati hogi lakin jis ko intezar hota hai woh yeh sab samjhne se qasir hota ha ek din fone pe bat hotey hue samreen anum k samne roo parti hai or kehti hai saad pehle aesa kabhi nahi karta tha per ab bhot hone laga hai agar mujh se koi ghalti hui hai tu mai maufi mangti ho lkin aesa na karey mere sath.


Anum samreen ko is halat mai dekh kar gusse mai ajati hai or asad ko call karti hai or asad ko kehti hai jese bhi ho saad se mere bat karwao lazmi.


do din bad saad asad ke ghar kisi kam se ata hai tu asad saad ki bat anum se karwata hai anum bhot gusse mai saad se poochti hai k tum yeh sab kar k kiya sabit kar rahey ho k tum bhot busy insan ho or baqi sari duniya farigh hai. Woh larki tumhare lia itni pershan hai or tumhare zara sa time nahi k us ko reply kar saku.


Saad kehta hai mai ne nahi kaha us ko wait karne ko or pershan hone ko . Or mai itna farigh nahi ke har time online reh kar bat karun mere apni bhi life hai . Or mujhe apni iife k barey mai soochne ka haq hai.


anum kehti hai or woh jo tumhara roz intezar karti hai us kaa kiyaa ?


saad kehta hai us ko bolo mat kiaa karey mera intezar . Mujh se yeh sab relation nhi rakha jataa . Mujhe life mai bhot kuch karna hai or in chezo k bare mai soochne ka time nahi us ko agar mere sath rehna hai tu as a friend reh sakti hai is se zada ki umeed nahi rakhey mujh se.


" saad ka aesa behave islia hota hai q k woh jin dosto mai ab shamil hua hai woh log kafi rich or well standard log hain. Samreen ek sedhi sadhi larki thi . Or look mai bhi zada modern nahi thi . Or saad jin logo mai ab shamil hua hai waha us ki female friend look mai kafi modern hain.islia saad apne us fesle ko apnane se mukar raha hota hai or future ka bahana kar ke samreen se jaan chutwana chatah takey us ke new dosto ko samreen or us ke affair na pata chal sakey "


Saad anum se kehta hai woh jo kuch hua woh bhool jaye woh jo kuch hua jald bazi mai hua or humara bachpana tha. Achey dost ban kar reh lay agar rehna hai tu anum yeh sun kar gusse mai fone rakh deti hai thori time bad asad ka dobara fone ata hai anum k pas or woh batata hai k saad ki aj kal new or high class logo k sath dosti hogai hai, islia us ko ab samreen us k type ki nahi lagti isi wajah se woh tum logo ko ignore kar raha tha.


Anum gusse mai asad ko bhi batein sunati hai ke tum sab larke ek jese hotey ho .etc etc.... Or fone rakh deti hai or kuch dair khamosh rehne k bad pershan hoti hai ke yeh sab woh samreen ko kese batae gi kuch din woh kuch nahi batati samreen ko phr ek din samreen k ghar ja kar us ko sab batati hai jis pe samreen apne ap ko bura bhala kehti hai ke woh thi hi nahi is kabil.


Iski wajah se us ne dost bhi kho dia.


Lakin us ko yeh andaza nahi tha ke saad ne waqti tor pe us se pyar kiaa or jab us se achi mil gai tu apne future ka bahana bana kar chor dia or phr kuch week isi tarha us ne rotey hue guzar diye isi doran samreen k bhai ne cable net lagwa lia jis ki speed pehle se taiz or full time internet ki saholat lakin samreen k lia yeh sab fazool sa lag raha thaa


Isi doran us ka college shoro hojata hai or woh college jane k bajae pvt admission lay leti hai or ghar mai zada waaqt guzarti hai or un ka group bhi divide hojata hai saad alag dostoo mai chala jata hai asad bhi pak se bahar chala jata hai group mai bas anum huriya or samreen bachtey hain


Is doran huriya ko koi tafreeh meela k chatroom ka batata hai huriya waha visit karti hai tu waha us ko new new contest or bhot si new maloomat ka pata chalta hai or bhot sey new logo se milne ka bhi moqa milta hai yeh us doran aesa chatroom hota jo badtamizi jesi chezo se fully secure hota hai or fake logo k chances na hone k braber hoteu hain ahista ahista huriya bhi contest, post wagera mai part leti hai


Or phr samreen ko bhi help karne k lia apne sath shamil kar leti hai or samreen ko bhi waha as a user enter karwa deti hai samreen jese jese tafreeh meela ki web use karti hai wese wese us ka dehan un porani bataon se hattana shoro hojata ha woh wese tu active part tu nhi leti lakin khamoshi se beth kar logo ki chat parthi hai ya phr user ki post pe rating deti hai or kabhi orkut pe koi poetry pasand ati tu us ko tm per share kardeti hai.




Next episode mai ap parhiye ga.. K kesa woh waqt hai samreen ki life mai jab woh sab pershania bhoool jati hai or kuch chata hota hai us ki life mai.





Regards
Bird-Of-Paradise

Hayeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee saad kitna baghiarat hai /:)
Or huriya to hai hi ashi ;)) :p
han samreen ke agly qadam ka khass w8 hai :s


Awsomee nai awsomesssestttt story hai yarr
next epi apka 2 din bad naw ? /:)
 

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Arre wahhh dilchasp hy zjada khushi ki baat ye hy k ye Copy Paste nhi hy...very gud :-bd
sirf aik do batain kehna chahugi
story may poori tra urdu use krain(kuch dialogues k siwa) alfaz thore aur unique istamal krain kuch chezon ko symbolize b krain n kuch thoughts ko quotes ya verses k sath waziya krain..kahani strong ho jayegi :)

Aik aur baat b puchugi aap is story may Anum ho, Huriya ho ya Samreen?:p[QUOTE="Bird-Of-Paradise, post

Kya haal hai sabka?? So here we go......

Talib E Ishq ki second episode share karny ja rahi hun hopefully apko pasand ayegi kindly do give your feedback :)

TALIB E ISHQ


Episode 2
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Anum samreen ka hath pakar kar samreen ki tarf moun kar k kehti hai ab tum mujh pe chor do or saad se kehti lambi chori bat se simple yeh hai k samreen tum ko pasand karti hai or woh chahti hai ke sari life tumhare sath rahey islia woh kafi dino se tum ko lay kar perahan hai.. Q k tumhari us se bat nahi ho pa rahi thi


Saad ek dum choonk jata hai or kehta hai kiyaaaaaa.........


Waqaiii


Anum kehti hai zada bache na banu tum ko bhi andaza hoga k yeh aese hi hamesha tumhari side nahi leti .


Saad kehta hai jese tum asad ki leti ho yeh sun kar samreen ke face pe bhi smile ajati hai or saad kehta hai mujhe nahi maloom tha samreen mere barey mai aesa soochti hai mai tu hamesha is ko apna best friend samjhta thaa lakin agar yeh aesa chahti hai ke hum hamesha sath rahey tu is se achi or kiya bat ho sakti hai mai bhi sam k sath hamesha rehna pasand karunga


Yeh sunn kar samreen apne dono hath apne moun per rakh kar tango pe sar rakh leti hai anum ek zor daar awaz mai yesssssssss kehti hai .. Or kehti hai mubarak ho my new love bird samreen khushi se muskura rahi hoti hai. Or ek dum se chup sa mahool ban jata hai. Samreen ka ghar bhi a chuka hota hai samreen dono ko bye kehte hue ghar jati hai


Or muskurate hue door bell bajati hai samreen ki ammi door kholti hai or samreen ko dekh kar pochti hain hogai party samreen jis ke dil mai ek alag hi party chal rahi hoti hai or bhot smily andaz mai kehti hai jeee.


huriya atee hai sab detail poochti hai. Samreen saad wali bat k ilawa sab detail batati hai


Or jald sone ka keh kar bed pe apni new life k barey mai soochna shoro kardeti hai. Ab us ko is bat ka intezar hota hai ke kab subha ho or woh anum se sab discuss karey or yeh soochtey soochtey woh so jati hai .


agley din bhot khushgawar mood k sath uthti hai or khud ko bhot khas khas mehsoos karti hai


Aese hi ghar ke kam wagera karte or dosre kam karte hue sham hojati hai or har telephone ki bell bajne mai ek khushi hoti k shayad anum ki call ho or woh online aney ka kahey per cli pe number dekh kar us ka intezar or taweel hojataa woh khud ko pehle se tayar rakhne k lia online hojati hai


Tu us ko saad online milta hai us ka intezar ek dum khushi mai badal jata hai jab woh saad k offline msg dekhti hai or porey parhne se pehle yahoo pe reply karti hai takey woh kahin offline na ho jaey thori dair bad anum bhi online ajati hai or teeno rat ki party ko lay kar khoob bat karte hain or dosri taraf saad or samreen pvt chat mai alag bat kar rahe hote hain apne relation ko lay kar k ghar mai bata dia jae ya nahi.


Samreen saad se poochti hai ke mai huriya ko bata dun relation ke barey mai saad kehta hai jesa tum ko theek lagey or phr bolta hai us ko abhi kam se jana hai baqi bat bad mai karein gey detail mai samreen bhot sari wishes k sath saad ko bye karti hai or phr apni pori tawaja anum pe dalti hai or us se discuss karti hai k us ko kiya karna chaiyeh or kiya nahi.


Anum kehti hai tum khud huriya ko bata do . Us ko agar kisi or se pata chala tu us ka tu phr maloom hai na or agar woh agree hue tu ghar mai bat karne k lia help karey gi samreen kehti hai anum ko k haan idea tu acha hai mai akele mai us se bat karungi.


samreen moka dekh kar huriya ko sab bata deti hai.


Huriya tu pehle sab sunti hai or pht kehti hai k abhi kisi ko kuch mat batana ghar mai result ane k bad batana warna agar result mai kuch masla hua tu sari wajah isi ko banei gay samreen advice sun kar huriya ko galey laga leti hai or thankss kehti bhot ache andaz mai. Or phr is tarha week mai kafi din saad or samreen ki bat hoti or kafi din nahi ho patee


Or samreen ka result ata hai or woh a grade k sath 10 standrd pass karti hai us ki ammi khush hoti hain or dono se poochti k kiya inam chaiyeh huriya or samreen ammi ko alag kamrey mai ly kar jatey hain bhot requestly andaz mai ek bat batane ko kehte hain or promiss karwate hain ke na gussa karein gi or na kisi ko batein gi or phr saad k barey mai bata deti hain or un ki marzi maloom karti hain.


"samreen or huriya bilkul dosto ki tarha apni ammui ke sath rehti hain , samreen k father zada ter mulk se bahar rehte hein islia 3no bacho ko wohi paalti hain or bhot friendly ho kar un ke sath rehti hain ."


Saad ka bachpan se samreen k ghar ana jana tha .unho ne dekha hua tha saad ko islia zada objection nhi hua samreen ki life mai ek alag hi khushi si agai thi. Sab kuch itni asani se complete ho raha tha jis ka us ko bhi andaza nahi thaa ek taraf tu woh kisi k lia bhot khas banne ja rahi thi or dosra us ki family us ki khushi se razi they.


Ahista ahista sab ko maloom hone laga samreen ki pasand ka saad ko bachpan se janne ki wajah se kisi ko objection nahi hua isi doran saad apne dosto mai bhot zada busy hone lag gaya or phr week mai ek hi din bat hoti thi samreen ki .woh bhi samreen k bhot sarey sawalo ka do teen line ka jawab detaa thaa samreen kafi mahino se us ke aese behave ki wajah se pershan rehne lagi thi.


Or anum us ko samjhti thi ke woh apne new dosto k sath busy hotaa hoga, timming match nahi hopati hongi islia nahi bat ho pati hogi lakin jis ko intezar hota hai woh yeh sab samjhne se qasir hota ha ek din fone pe bat hotey hue samreen anum k samne roo parti hai or kehti hai saad pehle aesa kabhi nahi karta tha per ab bhot hone laga hai agar mujh se koi ghalti hui hai tu mai maufi mangti ho lkin aesa na karey mere sath.


Anum samreen ko is halat mai dekh kar gusse mai ajati hai or asad ko call karti hai or asad ko kehti hai jese bhi ho saad se mere bat karwao lazmi.


do din bad saad asad ke ghar kisi kam se ata hai tu asad saad ki bat anum se karwata hai anum bhot gusse mai saad se poochti hai k tum yeh sab kar k kiya sabit kar rahey ho k tum bhot busy insan ho or baqi sari duniya farigh hai. Woh larki tumhare lia itni pershan hai or tumhare zara sa time nahi k us ko reply kar saku.


Saad kehta hai mai ne nahi kaha us ko wait karne ko or pershan hone ko . Or mai itna farigh nahi ke har time online reh kar bat karun mere apni bhi life hai . Or mujhe apni iife k barey mai soochne ka haq hai.


anum kehti hai or woh jo tumhara roz intezar karti hai us kaa kiyaa ?


saad kehta hai us ko bolo mat kiaa karey mera intezar . Mujh se yeh sab relation nhi rakha jataa . Mujhe life mai bhot kuch karna hai or in chezo k bare mai soochne ka time nahi us ko agar mere sath rehna hai tu as a friend reh sakti hai is se zada ki umeed nahi rakhey mujh se.


" saad ka aesa behave islia hota hai q k woh jin dosto mai ab shamil hua hai woh log kafi rich or well standard log hain. Samreen ek sedhi sadhi larki thi . Or look mai bhi zada modern nahi thi . Or saad jin logo mai ab shamil hua hai waha us ki female friend look mai kafi modern hain.islia saad apne us fesle ko apnane se mukar raha hota hai or future ka bahana kar ke samreen se jaan chutwana chatah takey us ke new dosto ko samreen or us ke affair na pata chal sakey "


Saad anum se kehta hai woh jo kuch hua woh bhool jaye woh jo kuch hua jald bazi mai hua or humara bachpana tha. Achey dost ban kar reh lay agar rehna hai tu anum yeh sun kar gusse mai fone rakh deti hai thori time bad asad ka dobara fone ata hai anum k pas or woh batata hai k saad ki aj kal new or high class logo k sath dosti hogai hai, islia us ko ab samreen us k type ki nahi lagti isi wajah se woh tum logo ko ignore kar raha tha.


Anum gusse mai asad ko bhi batein sunati hai ke tum sab larke ek jese hotey ho .etc etc.... Or fone rakh deti hai or kuch dair khamosh rehne k bad pershan hoti hai ke yeh sab woh samreen ko kese batae gi kuch din woh kuch nahi batati samreen ko phr ek din samreen k ghar ja kar us ko sab batati hai jis pe samreen apne ap ko bura bhala kehti hai ke woh thi hi nahi is kabil.


Iski wajah se us ne dost bhi kho dia.


Lakin us ko yeh andaza nahi tha ke saad ne waqti tor pe us se pyar kiaa or jab us se achi mil gai tu apne future ka bahana bana kar chor dia or phr kuch week isi tarha us ne rotey hue guzar diye isi doran samreen k bhai ne cable net lagwa lia jis ki speed pehle se taiz or full time internet ki saholat lakin samreen k lia yeh sab fazool sa lag raha thaa


Isi doran us ka college shoro hojata hai or woh college jane k bajae pvt admission lay leti hai or ghar mai zada waaqt guzarti hai or un ka group bhi divide hojata hai saad alag dostoo mai chala jata hai asad bhi pak se bahar chala jata hai group mai bas anum huriya or samreen bachtey hain


Is doran huriya ko koi tafreeh meela k chatroom ka batata hai huriya waha visit karti hai tu waha us ko new new contest or bhot si new maloomat ka pata chalta hai or bhot sey new logo se milne ka bhi moqa milta hai yeh us doran aesa chatroom hota jo badtamizi jesi chezo se fully secure hota hai or fake logo k chances na hone k braber hoteu hain ahista ahista huriya bhi contest, post wagera mai part leti hai


Or phr samreen ko bhi help karne k lia apne sath shamil kar leti hai or samreen ko bhi waha as a user enter karwa deti hai samreen jese jese tafreeh meela ki web use karti hai wese wese us ka dehan un porani bataon se hattana shoro hojata ha woh wese tu active part tu nhi leti lakin khamoshi se beth kar logo ki chat parthi hai ya phr user ki post pe rating deti hai or kabhi orkut pe koi poetry pasand ati tu us ko tm per share kardeti hai.




Next episode mai ap parhiye ga.. K kesa woh waqt hai samreen ki life mai jab woh sab pershania bhoool jati hai or kuch chata hota hai us ki life mai.





Regards
Bird-Of-Paradise

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Arre wahhh dilchasp hy zjada khushi ki baat ye hy k ye Copy Paste nhi hy...very gud :-bd
sirf aik do batain kehna chahugi
story may poori tra urdu use krain(kuch dialogues k siwa) alfaz thore aur unique istamal krain kuch chezon ko symbolize b krain n kuch thoughts ko quotes ya verses k sath waziya krain..kahani strong ho jayegi :)

Aik aur baat b puchugi aap is story may Anum ho, Huriya ho ya Samreen?:p[QUOTE="Bird-Of-Paradise, post

Kya haal hai sabka?? So here we go......

Talib E Ishq ki second episode share karny ja rahi hun hopefully apko pasand ayegi kindly do give your feedback :)

TALIB E ISHQ


Episode 2
[/CENTER]


Anum samreen ka hath pakar kar samreen ki tarf moun kar k kehti hai ab tum mujh pe chor do or saad se kehti lambi chori bat se simple yeh hai k samreen tum ko pasand karti hai or woh chahti hai ke sari life tumhare sath rahey islia woh kafi dino se tum ko lay kar perahan hai.. Q k tumhari us se bat nahi ho pa rahi thi


Saad ek dum choonk jata hai or kehta hai kiyaaaaaa.........


Waqaiii


Anum kehti hai zada bache na banu tum ko bhi andaza hoga k yeh aese hi hamesha tumhari side nahi leti .


Saad kehta hai jese tum asad ki leti ho yeh sun kar samreen ke face pe bhi smile ajati hai or saad kehta hai mujhe nahi maloom tha samreen mere barey mai aesa soochti hai mai tu hamesha is ko apna best friend samjhta thaa lakin agar yeh aesa chahti hai ke hum hamesha sath rahey tu is se achi or kiya bat ho sakti hai mai bhi sam k sath hamesha rehna pasand karunga


Yeh sunn kar samreen apne dono hath apne moun per rakh kar tango pe sar rakh leti hai anum ek zor daar awaz mai yesssssssss kehti hai .. Or kehti hai mubarak ho my new love bird samreen khushi se muskura rahi hoti hai. Or ek dum se chup sa mahool ban jata hai. Samreen ka ghar bhi a chuka hota hai samreen dono ko bye kehte hue ghar jati hai


Or muskurate hue door bell bajati hai samreen ki ammi door kholti hai or samreen ko dekh kar pochti hain hogai party samreen jis ke dil mai ek alag hi party chal rahi hoti hai or bhot smily andaz mai kehti hai jeee.


huriya atee hai sab detail poochti hai. Samreen saad wali bat k ilawa sab detail batati hai


Or jald sone ka keh kar bed pe apni new life k barey mai soochna shoro kardeti hai. Ab us ko is bat ka intezar hota hai ke kab subha ho or woh anum se sab discuss karey or yeh soochtey soochtey woh so jati hai .


agley din bhot khushgawar mood k sath uthti hai or khud ko bhot khas khas mehsoos karti hai


Aese hi ghar ke kam wagera karte or dosre kam karte hue sham hojati hai or har telephone ki bell bajne mai ek khushi hoti k shayad anum ki call ho or woh online aney ka kahey per cli pe number dekh kar us ka intezar or taweel hojataa woh khud ko pehle se tayar rakhne k lia online hojati hai


Tu us ko saad online milta hai us ka intezar ek dum khushi mai badal jata hai jab woh saad k offline msg dekhti hai or porey parhne se pehle yahoo pe reply karti hai takey woh kahin offline na ho jaey thori dair bad anum bhi online ajati hai or teeno rat ki party ko lay kar khoob bat karte hain or dosri taraf saad or samreen pvt chat mai alag bat kar rahe hote hain apne relation ko lay kar k ghar mai bata dia jae ya nahi.


Samreen saad se poochti hai ke mai huriya ko bata dun relation ke barey mai saad kehta hai jesa tum ko theek lagey or phr bolta hai us ko abhi kam se jana hai baqi bat bad mai karein gey detail mai samreen bhot sari wishes k sath saad ko bye karti hai or phr apni pori tawaja anum pe dalti hai or us se discuss karti hai k us ko kiya karna chaiyeh or kiya nahi.


Anum kehti hai tum khud huriya ko bata do . Us ko agar kisi or se pata chala tu us ka tu phr maloom hai na or agar woh agree hue tu ghar mai bat karne k lia help karey gi samreen kehti hai anum ko k haan idea tu acha hai mai akele mai us se bat karungi.


samreen moka dekh kar huriya ko sab bata deti hai.


Huriya tu pehle sab sunti hai or pht kehti hai k abhi kisi ko kuch mat batana ghar mai result ane k bad batana warna agar result mai kuch masla hua tu sari wajah isi ko banei gay samreen advice sun kar huriya ko galey laga leti hai or thankss kehti bhot ache andaz mai. Or phr is tarha week mai kafi din saad or samreen ki bat hoti or kafi din nahi ho patee


Or samreen ka result ata hai or woh a grade k sath 10 standrd pass karti hai us ki ammi khush hoti hain or dono se poochti k kiya inam chaiyeh huriya or samreen ammi ko alag kamrey mai ly kar jatey hain bhot requestly andaz mai ek bat batane ko kehte hain or promiss karwate hain ke na gussa karein gi or na kisi ko batein gi or phr saad k barey mai bata deti hain or un ki marzi maloom karti hain.


"samreen or huriya bilkul dosto ki tarha apni ammui ke sath rehti hain , samreen k father zada ter mulk se bahar rehte hein islia 3no bacho ko wohi paalti hain or bhot friendly ho kar un ke sath rehti hain ."


Saad ka bachpan se samreen k ghar ana jana tha .unho ne dekha hua tha saad ko islia zada objection nhi hua samreen ki life mai ek alag hi khushi si agai thi. Sab kuch itni asani se complete ho raha tha jis ka us ko bhi andaza nahi thaa ek taraf tu woh kisi k lia bhot khas banne ja rahi thi or dosra us ki family us ki khushi se razi they.


Ahista ahista sab ko maloom hone laga samreen ki pasand ka saad ko bachpan se janne ki wajah se kisi ko objection nahi hua isi doran saad apne dosto mai bhot zada busy hone lag gaya or phr week mai ek hi din bat hoti thi samreen ki .woh bhi samreen k bhot sarey sawalo ka do teen line ka jawab detaa thaa samreen kafi mahino se us ke aese behave ki wajah se pershan rehne lagi thi.


Or anum us ko samjhti thi ke woh apne new dosto k sath busy hotaa hoga, timming match nahi hopati hongi islia nahi bat ho pati hogi lakin jis ko intezar hota hai woh yeh sab samjhne se qasir hota ha ek din fone pe bat hotey hue samreen anum k samne roo parti hai or kehti hai saad pehle aesa kabhi nahi karta tha per ab bhot hone laga hai agar mujh se koi ghalti hui hai tu mai maufi mangti ho lkin aesa na karey mere sath.


Anum samreen ko is halat mai dekh kar gusse mai ajati hai or asad ko call karti hai or asad ko kehti hai jese bhi ho saad se mere bat karwao lazmi.


do din bad saad asad ke ghar kisi kam se ata hai tu asad saad ki bat anum se karwata hai anum bhot gusse mai saad se poochti hai k tum yeh sab kar k kiya sabit kar rahey ho k tum bhot busy insan ho or baqi sari duniya farigh hai. Woh larki tumhare lia itni pershan hai or tumhare zara sa time nahi k us ko reply kar saku.


Saad kehta hai mai ne nahi kaha us ko wait karne ko or pershan hone ko . Or mai itna farigh nahi ke har time online reh kar bat karun mere apni bhi life hai . Or mujhe apni iife k barey mai soochne ka haq hai.


anum kehti hai or woh jo tumhara roz intezar karti hai us kaa kiyaa ?


saad kehta hai us ko bolo mat kiaa karey mera intezar . Mujh se yeh sab relation nhi rakha jataa . Mujhe life mai bhot kuch karna hai or in chezo k bare mai soochne ka time nahi us ko agar mere sath rehna hai tu as a friend reh sakti hai is se zada ki umeed nahi rakhey mujh se.


" saad ka aesa behave islia hota hai q k woh jin dosto mai ab shamil hua hai woh log kafi rich or well standard log hain. Samreen ek sedhi sadhi larki thi . Or look mai bhi zada modern nahi thi . Or saad jin logo mai ab shamil hua hai waha us ki female friend look mai kafi modern hain.islia saad apne us fesle ko apnane se mukar raha hota hai or future ka bahana kar ke samreen se jaan chutwana chatah takey us ke new dosto ko samreen or us ke affair na pata chal sakey "


Saad anum se kehta hai woh jo kuch hua woh bhool jaye woh jo kuch hua jald bazi mai hua or humara bachpana tha. Achey dost ban kar reh lay agar rehna hai tu anum yeh sun kar gusse mai fone rakh deti hai thori time bad asad ka dobara fone ata hai anum k pas or woh batata hai k saad ki aj kal new or high class logo k sath dosti hogai hai, islia us ko ab samreen us k type ki nahi lagti isi wajah se woh tum logo ko ignore kar raha tha.


Anum gusse mai asad ko bhi batein sunati hai ke tum sab larke ek jese hotey ho .etc etc.... Or fone rakh deti hai or kuch dair khamosh rehne k bad pershan hoti hai ke yeh sab woh samreen ko kese batae gi kuch din woh kuch nahi batati samreen ko phr ek din samreen k ghar ja kar us ko sab batati hai jis pe samreen apne ap ko bura bhala kehti hai ke woh thi hi nahi is kabil.


Iski wajah se us ne dost bhi kho dia.


Lakin us ko yeh andaza nahi tha ke saad ne waqti tor pe us se pyar kiaa or jab us se achi mil gai tu apne future ka bahana bana kar chor dia or phr kuch week isi tarha us ne rotey hue guzar diye isi doran samreen k bhai ne cable net lagwa lia jis ki speed pehle se taiz or full time internet ki saholat lakin samreen k lia yeh sab fazool sa lag raha thaa


Isi doran us ka college shoro hojata hai or woh college jane k bajae pvt admission lay leti hai or ghar mai zada waaqt guzarti hai or un ka group bhi divide hojata hai saad alag dostoo mai chala jata hai asad bhi pak se bahar chala jata hai group mai bas anum huriya or samreen bachtey hain


Is doran huriya ko koi tafreeh meela k chatroom ka batata hai huriya waha visit karti hai tu waha us ko new new contest or bhot si new maloomat ka pata chalta hai or bhot sey new logo se milne ka bhi moqa milta hai yeh us doran aesa chatroom hota jo badtamizi jesi chezo se fully secure hota hai or fake logo k chances na hone k braber hoteu hain ahista ahista huriya bhi contest, post wagera mai part leti hai


Or phr samreen ko bhi help karne k lia apne sath shamil kar leti hai or samreen ko bhi waha as a user enter karwa deti hai samreen jese jese tafreeh meela ki web use karti hai wese wese us ka dehan un porani bataon se hattana shoro hojata ha woh wese tu active part tu nhi leti lakin khamoshi se beth kar logo ki chat parthi hai ya phr user ki post pe rating deti hai or kabhi orkut pe koi poetry pasand ati tu us ko tm per share kardeti hai.




Next episode mai ap parhiye ga.. K kesa woh waqt hai samreen ki life mai jab woh sab pershania bhoool jati hai or kuch chata hota hai us ki life mai.





Regards
Bird-Of-Paradise

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point to be noted apa @Bird-Of-Paradise mera bhi bta dena pljj :p
 

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Arre wahhh dilchasp hy zjada khushi ki baat ye hy k ye Copy Paste nhi hy...very gud :-bd
sirf aik do batain kehna chahugi
story may poori tra urdu use krain(kuch dialogues k siwa) alfaz thore aur unique istamal krain kuch chezon ko symbolize b krain n kuch thoughts ko quotes ya verses k sath waziya krain..kahani strong ho jayegi :)

Aik aur baat b puchugi aap is story may Anum ho, Huriya ho ya Samreen?:p[QUOTE="Bird-Of-Paradise, post

Kya haal hai sabka?? So here we go......

Talib E Ishq ki second episode share karny ja rahi hun hopefully apko pasand ayegi kindly do give your feedback :)

TALIB E ISHQ


Episode 2
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Anum samreen ka hath pakar kar samreen ki tarf moun kar k kehti hai ab tum mujh pe chor do or saad se kehti lambi chori bat se simple yeh hai k samreen tum ko pasand karti hai or woh chahti hai ke sari life tumhare sath rahey islia woh kafi dino se tum ko lay kar perahan hai.. Q k tumhari us se bat nahi ho pa rahi thi


Saad ek dum choonk jata hai or kehta hai kiyaaaaaa.........


Waqaiii


Anum kehti hai zada bache na banu tum ko bhi andaza hoga k yeh aese hi hamesha tumhari side nahi leti .


Saad kehta hai jese tum asad ki leti ho yeh sun kar samreen ke face pe bhi smile ajati hai or saad kehta hai mujhe nahi maloom tha samreen mere barey mai aesa soochti hai mai tu hamesha is ko apna best friend samjhta thaa lakin agar yeh aesa chahti hai ke hum hamesha sath rahey tu is se achi or kiya bat ho sakti hai mai bhi sam k sath hamesha rehna pasand karunga


Yeh sunn kar samreen apne dono hath apne moun per rakh kar tango pe sar rakh leti hai anum ek zor daar awaz mai yesssssssss kehti hai .. Or kehti hai mubarak ho my new love bird samreen khushi se muskura rahi hoti hai. Or ek dum se chup sa mahool ban jata hai. Samreen ka ghar bhi a chuka hota hai samreen dono ko bye kehte hue ghar jati hai


Or muskurate hue door bell bajati hai samreen ki ammi door kholti hai or samreen ko dekh kar pochti hain hogai party samreen jis ke dil mai ek alag hi party chal rahi hoti hai or bhot smily andaz mai kehti hai jeee.


huriya atee hai sab detail poochti hai. Samreen saad wali bat k ilawa sab detail batati hai


Or jald sone ka keh kar bed pe apni new life k barey mai soochna shoro kardeti hai. Ab us ko is bat ka intezar hota hai ke kab subha ho or woh anum se sab discuss karey or yeh soochtey soochtey woh so jati hai .


agley din bhot khushgawar mood k sath uthti hai or khud ko bhot khas khas mehsoos karti hai


Aese hi ghar ke kam wagera karte or dosre kam karte hue sham hojati hai or har telephone ki bell bajne mai ek khushi hoti k shayad anum ki call ho or woh online aney ka kahey per cli pe number dekh kar us ka intezar or taweel hojataa woh khud ko pehle se tayar rakhne k lia online hojati hai


Tu us ko saad online milta hai us ka intezar ek dum khushi mai badal jata hai jab woh saad k offline msg dekhti hai or porey parhne se pehle yahoo pe reply karti hai takey woh kahin offline na ho jaey thori dair bad anum bhi online ajati hai or teeno rat ki party ko lay kar khoob bat karte hain or dosri taraf saad or samreen pvt chat mai alag bat kar rahe hote hain apne relation ko lay kar k ghar mai bata dia jae ya nahi.


Samreen saad se poochti hai ke mai huriya ko bata dun relation ke barey mai saad kehta hai jesa tum ko theek lagey or phr bolta hai us ko abhi kam se jana hai baqi bat bad mai karein gey detail mai samreen bhot sari wishes k sath saad ko bye karti hai or phr apni pori tawaja anum pe dalti hai or us se discuss karti hai k us ko kiya karna chaiyeh or kiya nahi.


Anum kehti hai tum khud huriya ko bata do . Us ko agar kisi or se pata chala tu us ka tu phr maloom hai na or agar woh agree hue tu ghar mai bat karne k lia help karey gi samreen kehti hai anum ko k haan idea tu acha hai mai akele mai us se bat karungi.


samreen moka dekh kar huriya ko sab bata deti hai.


Huriya tu pehle sab sunti hai or pht kehti hai k abhi kisi ko kuch mat batana ghar mai result ane k bad batana warna agar result mai kuch masla hua tu sari wajah isi ko banei gay samreen advice sun kar huriya ko galey laga leti hai or thankss kehti bhot ache andaz mai. Or phr is tarha week mai kafi din saad or samreen ki bat hoti or kafi din nahi ho patee


Or samreen ka result ata hai or woh a grade k sath 10 standrd pass karti hai us ki ammi khush hoti hain or dono se poochti k kiya inam chaiyeh huriya or samreen ammi ko alag kamrey mai ly kar jatey hain bhot requestly andaz mai ek bat batane ko kehte hain or promiss karwate hain ke na gussa karein gi or na kisi ko batein gi or phr saad k barey mai bata deti hain or un ki marzi maloom karti hain.


"samreen or huriya bilkul dosto ki tarha apni ammui ke sath rehti hain , samreen k father zada ter mulk se bahar rehte hein islia 3no bacho ko wohi paalti hain or bhot friendly ho kar un ke sath rehti hain ."


Saad ka bachpan se samreen k ghar ana jana tha .unho ne dekha hua tha saad ko islia zada objection nhi hua samreen ki life mai ek alag hi khushi si agai thi. Sab kuch itni asani se complete ho raha tha jis ka us ko bhi andaza nahi thaa ek taraf tu woh kisi k lia bhot khas banne ja rahi thi or dosra us ki family us ki khushi se razi they.


Ahista ahista sab ko maloom hone laga samreen ki pasand ka saad ko bachpan se janne ki wajah se kisi ko objection nahi hua isi doran saad apne dosto mai bhot zada busy hone lag gaya or phr week mai ek hi din bat hoti thi samreen ki .woh bhi samreen k bhot sarey sawalo ka do teen line ka jawab detaa thaa samreen kafi mahino se us ke aese behave ki wajah se pershan rehne lagi thi.


Or anum us ko samjhti thi ke woh apne new dosto k sath busy hotaa hoga, timming match nahi hopati hongi islia nahi bat ho pati hogi lakin jis ko intezar hota hai woh yeh sab samjhne se qasir hota ha ek din fone pe bat hotey hue samreen anum k samne roo parti hai or kehti hai saad pehle aesa kabhi nahi karta tha per ab bhot hone laga hai agar mujh se koi ghalti hui hai tu mai maufi mangti ho lkin aesa na karey mere sath.


Anum samreen ko is halat mai dekh kar gusse mai ajati hai or asad ko call karti hai or asad ko kehti hai jese bhi ho saad se mere bat karwao lazmi.


do din bad saad asad ke ghar kisi kam se ata hai tu asad saad ki bat anum se karwata hai anum bhot gusse mai saad se poochti hai k tum yeh sab kar k kiya sabit kar rahey ho k tum bhot busy insan ho or baqi sari duniya farigh hai. Woh larki tumhare lia itni pershan hai or tumhare zara sa time nahi k us ko reply kar saku.


Saad kehta hai mai ne nahi kaha us ko wait karne ko or pershan hone ko . Or mai itna farigh nahi ke har time online reh kar bat karun mere apni bhi life hai . Or mujhe apni iife k barey mai soochne ka haq hai.


anum kehti hai or woh jo tumhara roz intezar karti hai us kaa kiyaa ?


saad kehta hai us ko bolo mat kiaa karey mera intezar . Mujh se yeh sab relation nhi rakha jataa . Mujhe life mai bhot kuch karna hai or in chezo k bare mai soochne ka time nahi us ko agar mere sath rehna hai tu as a friend reh sakti hai is se zada ki umeed nahi rakhey mujh se.


" saad ka aesa behave islia hota hai q k woh jin dosto mai ab shamil hua hai woh log kafi rich or well standard log hain. Samreen ek sedhi sadhi larki thi . Or look mai bhi zada modern nahi thi . Or saad jin logo mai ab shamil hua hai waha us ki female friend look mai kafi modern hain.islia saad apne us fesle ko apnane se mukar raha hota hai or future ka bahana kar ke samreen se jaan chutwana chatah takey us ke new dosto ko samreen or us ke affair na pata chal sakey "


Saad anum se kehta hai woh jo kuch hua woh bhool jaye woh jo kuch hua jald bazi mai hua or humara bachpana tha. Achey dost ban kar reh lay agar rehna hai tu anum yeh sun kar gusse mai fone rakh deti hai thori time bad asad ka dobara fone ata hai anum k pas or woh batata hai k saad ki aj kal new or high class logo k sath dosti hogai hai, islia us ko ab samreen us k type ki nahi lagti isi wajah se woh tum logo ko ignore kar raha tha.


Anum gusse mai asad ko bhi batein sunati hai ke tum sab larke ek jese hotey ho .etc etc.... Or fone rakh deti hai or kuch dair khamosh rehne k bad pershan hoti hai ke yeh sab woh samreen ko kese batae gi kuch din woh kuch nahi batati samreen ko phr ek din samreen k ghar ja kar us ko sab batati hai jis pe samreen apne ap ko bura bhala kehti hai ke woh thi hi nahi is kabil.


Iski wajah se us ne dost bhi kho dia.


Lakin us ko yeh andaza nahi tha ke saad ne waqti tor pe us se pyar kiaa or jab us se achi mil gai tu apne future ka bahana bana kar chor dia or phr kuch week isi tarha us ne rotey hue guzar diye isi doran samreen k bhai ne cable net lagwa lia jis ki speed pehle se taiz or full time internet ki saholat lakin samreen k lia yeh sab fazool sa lag raha thaa


Isi doran us ka college shoro hojata hai or woh college jane k bajae pvt admission lay leti hai or ghar mai zada waaqt guzarti hai or un ka group bhi divide hojata hai saad alag dostoo mai chala jata hai asad bhi pak se bahar chala jata hai group mai bas anum huriya or samreen bachtey hain


Is doran huriya ko koi tafreeh meela k chatroom ka batata hai huriya waha visit karti hai tu waha us ko new new contest or bhot si new maloomat ka pata chalta hai or bhot sey new logo se milne ka bhi moqa milta hai yeh us doran aesa chatroom hota jo badtamizi jesi chezo se fully secure hota hai or fake logo k chances na hone k braber hoteu hain ahista ahista huriya bhi contest, post wagera mai part leti hai


Or phr samreen ko bhi help karne k lia apne sath shamil kar leti hai or samreen ko bhi waha as a user enter karwa deti hai samreen jese jese tafreeh meela ki web use karti hai wese wese us ka dehan un porani bataon se hattana shoro hojata ha woh wese tu active part tu nhi leti lakin khamoshi se beth kar logo ki chat parthi hai ya phr user ki post pe rating deti hai or kabhi orkut pe koi poetry pasand ati tu us ko tm per share kardeti hai.




Next episode mai ap parhiye ga.. K kesa woh waqt hai samreen ki life mai jab woh sab pershania bhoool jati hai or kuch chata hota hai us ki life mai.





Regards
Bird-Of-Paradise

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Hahahahaha jee InshaAllah next episode I'll make sure Jo points app ney diye un ka khyal rakhongi....

Hahahahaha Jo marzi character dey dean :p
 
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