mjhy koi shauq nii kisi ka mazaaq udany kamaine poetry ki bat kab ki
maine to apni bat ki thi
mjhy koi shauq nii kisi ka mazaaq udany kamaine poetry ki bat kab ki
maine to apni bat ki thi
hahahaha meri tu or be bhut c addatien hain agar kisi ko pasand hai tu main kya krun es sy dushmani khatm nhe hoge hunhdekho ek bat muje boht achi lagti hai
or wohi bat ap bar bar meri khushi ke lye karti rehti ho
to jiski khushi ka itna khayal rakha jata hai
woh dushman kaise hoa?[DOUBLEPOST=1360778226][/DOUBLEPOST]
maine poetry ki bat kab ki
maine to apni bat ki thi
mjhy koi shauq nii kisi ka mazaaq udany ka
wah wah boht bara karnama kr lya apne aise shoq na paal kr
warna hum log to yahan ap jesi azeem hastiyon se mazaq urw
ane ke liye hi bethe hote haina
o b skta hy
aapko shauq o skty hyn aisy toh auron ko o nii skty kiya
XcuseMe ... main kab mazaaq kiya hy aapky saath???????????muje koi shoq nhi wo to ap old user ho islye bardasht b kr leta hon ap log
on ka mazaq
hi frndzzzzzzzz this is my poetry thori lambi hogayi lekin plz bardasht kr lenaDil Pochta Hai Ay Musalman BataTere Lahu Ka Ab Woh Ubaal KahanJab Raggon Main Laaway Ki SuratLahu Tumhaara Dourta ThaJab Teri Shuja'at Ka QissaDushman Ki Zuban pe Hota ThaSarr Dharr Se Alag Gir Jaata ThaPer Zulm Ke Aagay Na Jhukta ThaOr Tanha Saf e Dushman Main Ghus KerTu Allah Hu Akbar Kehta ThaKaise Imaan Se Alag Hoa JihaadOr Kho Gaya josh O Jalaal KahanDil Pochta Hai Ay Musalman BataTere Lahu Ka AB Woh Ubaal KahanKisi Aankh Se Koi Aanso Kya GiraPhaans Tere Dil Main Thi ChubiJab Tees Kisi Ke Bhi Thi UthiTakleef Thi Tere Chehre Se JhalkiJab Saat Samandar Paar Bhi KOiKisi Zulm Ki Aag Main Jalta ThaHo Ke Lazzaton Se Be Parwahh TuAllah Ki Raah Main Nikalta ThaKaise Lahu Ko Tu Ne Kya SafaidDil Main Uthte Ab WOh Wabaal KahanDil Pochta Hai Ay Musalman BataTere Lahu Ka Ab Woh Ubaal KahanHaan Aj Bhi Tere Sheher Pe ChayaWehshaton Ka Saaya HaiHaan Aaj Bhi Koi Ghar Se NiklaWapis Na Lout Ke Aaya HaiHaan Aaj Bhi Mamta Ki Cheekhon NeAsmaan Ko Hilaya HaiHaan Aaj Bhi Do Nannhe Haaton NeApne Baba Ko Dafnaya HaiLaathi Ke Bina Na Chal Sakte Burhe NeJawan Laashe Ko Uthaya HaiHaan Aj Bhi Ek Behen Ne Aanchal MainKitne Aansoun Ko Chupayaa HaiOr Aaj Bhi Tu Ne Karwat LetiGherat Ko Behlaya HaiKaise Ho Gaya Tu Itna BehasDil Main Chubte Ab Sawal KahanDil Pochta Hai Ay Musalman BataTere Lahu Ka Ab Woh Ubaal Kahan..[DOUBLEPOST=1360775723][/DOUBLEPOST]yr poetry se oper wala msg maine kisi or thread main likhna tha ghalti se yahan type hogaya plz mods delete this
[DOUBLEPOST=1360779691][/DOUBLEPOST]thanksss alot chiragh broooooooXcuseMe ... main kab mazaaq kiya hy aapky saath???????????
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Oo hello .. kab hua yeh sb ????? main koi mazaq nii udaya u ka khud mann kr raa hy MAZAAQ BANNY KA so can't help itriddle wale thread main nhi uraya tha mera mazaq.?kher abi main tablet pc se online hun isliye lar nhi sakta coz know har jaonga jb pc se aon tab ana tum
jb pc se aonga na tb anaOo hello .. kab hua yeh sb ????? main koi mazaq nii udaya u ka khud mann kr raa hy MAZAAQ BANNY KA so can't help it
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thanknice buhat hi achi likhi hai aur ye na ho ap ki poetry awartd ly ury best of luck @DuFFer
hi frndzzzzzzzz this is my poetry thori lambi hogayi lekin plz bardasht kr lenaDil Pochta Hai Ay Musalman BataTere Lahu Ka Ab Woh Ubaal KahanJab Raggon Main Laaway Ki SuratLahu Tumhaara Dourta ThaJab Teri Shuja'at Ka QissaDushman Ki Zuban pe Hota ThaSarr Dharr Se Alag Gir Jaata ThaPer Zulm Ke Aagay Na Jhukta ThaOr Tanha Saf e Dushman Main Ghus KerTu Allah Hu Akbar Kehta ThaKaise Imaan Se Alag Hoa JihaadOr Kho Gaya josh O Jalaal KahanDil Pochta Hai Ay Musalman BataTere Lahu Ka AB Woh Ubaal KahanKisi Aankh Se Koi Aanso Kya GiraPhaans Tere Dil Main Thi ChubiJab Tees Kisi Ke Bhi Thi UthiTakleef Thi Tere Chehre Se JhalkiJab Saat Samandar Paar Bhi KOiKisi Zulm Ki Aag Main Jalta ThaHo Ke Lazzaton Se Be Parwahh TuAllah Ki Raah Main Nikalta ThaKaise Lahu Ko Tu Ne Kya SafaidDil Main Uthte Ab WOh Wabaal KahanDil Pochta Hai Ay Musalman BataTere Lahu Ka Ab Woh Ubaal KahanHaan Aj Bhi Tere Sheher Pe ChayaWehshaton Ka Saaya HaiHaan Aaj Bhi Koi Ghar Se NiklaWapis Na Lout Ke Aaya HaiHaan Aaj Bhi Mamta Ki Cheekhon NeAsmaan Ko Hilaya HaiHaan Aaj Bhi Do Nannhe Haaton NeApne Baba Ko Dafnaya HaiLaathi Ke Bina Na Chal Sakte Burhe NeJawan Laashe Ko Uthaya HaiHaan Aj Bhi Ek Behen Ne Aanchal MainKitne Aansoun Ko Chupayaa HaiOr Aaj Bhi Tu Ne Karwat LetiGherat Ko Behlaya HaiKaise Ho Gaya Tu Itna BehasDil Main Chubte Ab Sawal KahanDil Pochta Hai Ay Musalman BataTere Lahu Ka Ab Woh Ubaal Kahan..
speechless!hi frndzzzzzzzz this is my poetry thori lambi hogayi lekin plz bardasht kr lenaDil Pochta Hai Ay Musalman BataTere Lahu Ka Ab Woh Ubaal KahanJab Raggon Main Laaway Ki SuratLahu Tumhaara Dourta ThaJab Teri Shuja'at Ka QissaDushman Ki Zuban pe Hota ThaSarr Dharr Se Alag Gir Jaata ThaPer Zulm Ke Aagay Na Jhukta ThaOr Tanha Saf e Dushman Main Ghus KerTu Allah Hu Akbar Kehta ThaKaise Imaan Se Alag Hoa JihaadOr Kho Gaya josh O Jalaal KahanDil Pochta Hai Ay Musalman BataTere Lahu Ka AB Woh Ubaal KahanKisi Aankh Se Koi Aanso Kya GiraPhaans Tere Dil Main Thi ChubiJab Tees Kisi Ke Bhi Thi UthiTakleef Thi Tere Chehre Se JhalkiJab Saat Samandar Paar Bhi KOiKisi Zulm Ki Aag Main Jalta ThaHo Ke Lazzaton Se Be Parwahh TuAllah Ki Raah Main Nikalta ThaKaise Lahu Ko Tu Ne Kya SafaidDil Main Uthte Ab WOh Wabaal KahanDil Pochta Hai Ay Musalman BataTere Lahu Ka Ab Woh Ubaal KahanHaan Aj Bhi Tere Sheher Pe ChayaWehshaton Ka Saaya HaiHaan Aaj Bhi Koi Ghar Se NiklaWapis Na Lout Ke Aaya HaiHaan Aaj Bhi Mamta Ki Cheekhon NeAsmaan Ko Hilaya HaiHaan Aaj Bhi Do Nannhe Haaton NeApne Baba Ko Dafnaya HaiLaathi Ke Bina Na Chal Sakte Burhe NeJawan Laashe Ko Uthaya HaiHaan Aj Bhi Ek Behen Ne Aanchal MainKitne Aansoun Ko Chupayaa HaiOr Aaj Bhi Tu Ne Karwat LetiGherat Ko Behlaya HaiKaise Ho Gaya Tu Itna BehasDil Main Chubte Ab Sawal KahanDil Pochta Hai Ay Musalman BataTere Lahu Ka Ab Woh Ubaal Kahan..[DOUBLEPOST=1360775723][/DOUBLEPOST]yr poetry se oper wala msg maine kisi or thread main likhna tha ghalti se yahan type hogaya plz mods delete this
thank u so much hoor han inshAllah ab krunga share ab u ne or chiragh bro ne b like ki naspeechless!
zabardast thoughts,,bohat umda likha
aap itni achi poetry karte hain to share b karte rha karain!
gud Luck
Awwwwwwwjin logon ko main acha nhi lgta un logon ko tag krne ka maza hi alag hota hai kher thank u so much rahath jee u ne me ki poetry like ki[DOUBLEPOST=1360777585][/DOUBLEPOST]@rockerxx @Shailina @Miss_Khan @sabha_khan40 @Rubi
[DOUBLEPOST=1360815675][/DOUBLEPOST]kher meri poetry ki tareef nhi ki shayed apne abi tk plzz jaldi se tareed kren muje numbers chahiye zyada se zyadaAwwwwwww
kisne kaha ke u nai ache lagte..
tumhari harketen nai pasand bas..