yeh baat sahi nai haim, climax dene k lie Sabah maidan mei athe hai afraas tu kubse koshish ker raha hai kahani ko ek rukh dene ki lekin climax serf saba jaise talented author desakte hai eslie fahadd ne Sabah se eltejaa kiya k ab es kashtay ko paar lagado...
Aik Kahan Sab Ki Zubani(team A) Final Task!
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or jese hi hira apna sar dewaar per marti hai dewaar toot ker chakna choor hojati hai lekin hira ke sar ko kuch b nhi hota
ek bholi bhali se ladki the ghao ki jho shaher aye the ankho mei ek sapna liye aur....
ek line likh ke send krdo gi to b kahani banti jaigi pagl
fahad ne ghusse main sabah ko samjhaya.........
hira ki khushi dakh kar fahad se raha nahi gaya or ansoo ka na kahatam hone wala silsilaaa start ho gaya
rote rote fahad ko bhook lagi to afra ne kaha kha le beta mong phalihira ki khushi dakh kar fahad se raha nahi gaya or ansoo ka na kahatam hone wala silsilaaa start ho gaya
sabah ko majbooran kahani kahe lines mei likh ker samajhne peregi kio ek line mei likh ker fahadd ko baat samajh nai athe hai...
uska yeh sapna pura hone se pehle khtam hogaya
or usne koi naya sapna dekhna shoro krdya
lekin fahad ne sabah ko btaya ke fahad ko samjhane ke lye fahad yahan hoga hi nhi apne bs afrah ko samjahana hai isliye ek hi line main likhen lekin sabah...............
Phir hona kya tha , lakin us ne himmat nahi harilekin usay kiya pata tha shaher mei aker sapnay jortay nai thot the hai
to uska sapna b shishe ki tarha toot gaya or....lekin usay kiya pata tha shaher mei aker sapnay jortay nai thot the hai
sabah sochti hai jab fahadd yaha hugi he nai tu unhe kiya masla hai k 1 line ki kahani ho ya 2 line ki aapnay kaam se kaam rakhe fahad usay warning de sabah ne...
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