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SHOAIB Bhai waqai me aap bohot behtareen writer ho meri maano ek book lik daalo, kamyab hoge zaroor...
Bohot hi achi tarah se aapne is Picture me Mubni story likhi hai bhai..Masha'ALLAH:):)
oyeee hoyeeee inni tareef .... :x[DOUBLEPOST=1341424415][/DOUBLEPOST]
Nahi ziada lambi nhi hai waqai Shoaib mujhy to pata he nhi tha tum bhi itna acha likh sakte ho {}{43r5
yeah to mujhe bhi nahi pata tha:-|
 
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Aaj bhi Farah ne subah uth ke nashta kea aur aa ke wahin sehan mai derwazey ki chookhat pe beth gayi aur us ki hamjooli Chiroun ne ussey aa ghaira aur ussey sarey jahan ke qisse aur kahani sunane lag gayi per sabah aaj bhi un ko dana daal ke kahin khooo si gayi thee, Jaisey woh iss waqt kissi aur he jahan mai ho.... woh youn he hamesha sey khoi khoi rehne wali larki bilkul nahi thee... balkeh us ki shoookhi aur khush mizaji to us ki saheeliou mai bohat mashoor thee, Aur her koi us se mil ke bohat khush hota. us ki aadat he aisi theee woh sub se bohat pyar aur ehteraam sey he milti. Woh hamesha kaha kerti yaar Yeah Zindagi bohat choothi hai khushian saameetne ke lea, to iss ko gham ke kaanton mai uljhaaaaney ka kya faida.

Woh apni zindagi ke 19 Khusgawar Saal purey ker chuki theee iklooti beti hone ki wajah se ghar mai usey bohat pyar milta aur us ki her khawish ko poooora kerna apni zindagi ka maqsad samajhney waley Abu theey aur maa ke rooop mai best friend thee us ki jo keh uss se bohat pyar kerti thee jo keh her maa he apni bachon se kerti hai. Per Farah ki ami ko Farah ki zyada he fikar lagi rehti theee woh zara si bhi college se lait ho jati to us ki maa usey isssi darwaazey ki chookhat pe bethi hoi inteezar mai milti aur aatey he ussey be ikhtiyar galey se laga laiti aur Farah maa ke aansoo saaf kertey hoyee poochti amee aap ro rahi ho to woh kehti arey nahi betaaa payaz kaat rahi thee naa, kuch dair pehley us ki wajah se pani nikal raha hai aankhon sey.... to woh dono he hans perti aur kuch dair pehle ki pareshan maa apne beeti ko deekhtey he jaise her gham bhool jati....

Youn he achey khaasey din guzar rahe thee keh Farah ki zindagi mai ek tooofan saa aaya jo us ki zindagi ki khushi aur us ki hansi ko jaise apne saath he lai urra. Howa kuch youn ke sub ko pasand aane wali farah ko aik larka pasand aa gaya jo ke us ka cousin tha aur us ke Chachooo ka bara betaa Faisal thaa, Faisal aik 25 saal ka wajeh naujwaan tha jo ke MBA kerne ke baad apne abu Khawer Hussain ke sath un ke business mai shamil ho gaya, woh log islamabad mai rehtey the , Faisal bhi Farah ko pasand kerta thaa aur Pasand ka izhaar bhi pehle Faisal ki taraf se he howa thaa Faisal ne apni ami ko bataya apni pasand ka aur us ki ami ne Khawar Hussain se baat ki to jaisey Khawer Hussain ko to apni mun chahi khushi bin maange mil gayi ho, woh khushi khushi agley he din Karachi apne bhai Dilawer Hussain ke ghar apni begam ke sath pohanch gaye aur Farah ka haath maang lea aur Dilawer bhi bohat khush hoye per unhooo ne beti ki razamandi ki baat samney rakhi aur kaha Farah ka faisala he Final ho ga. Aur Farah ki ami ne Farah se Faisal ke rishtey ke barey mai baat ki to Jaisey Farah ke dil mai ladoo pooth parey hon aur gulabi chehrey ke sath us ne asbaat mai ser hilla dea. kyon keh woh to bohat pehley se he Faisal ko dil he dil mai bohat chahti thee aur ussey us waqt apni qismat pe bohat rashk aa raha thaaa... keh Allah ne uss ke dil ke malik ko bin maange us se milwa dea. aur iss tarah dono ke dermiyan mangetar ka rishta qaim ker dea gaya aur Farah ki khushian to jaisey doo baaala ho gae hon, woh to un dinno jaisey hawaoun mai urr rahi ho, wo akser faisal se phone pe baat kerti thee aur ek doosrey se apne dil ki baaten share kea kertey the... per un ki qismat mai yeah khusian bohat kum arsey ke lea aae theen

Dono families he iss rishtey se bohat khush theee aur Aik Saal baad un ki shadi ki date bhi fix ker di gayi theee aur mangni ke panch maheeney guzar gaye the aur un ki shadi ki tayri urooj pe theee aur Faisal apni ami ke saath Karachi aaya howa thaa kyon keh Faisal ki ami ka khayal thaaa keh Jewellery aur Dresses ki shopping to farah ke sath he hogi jo Woh apni bahoo ke lea banwa rahi thee . aur un logon ki shopping jab complete hoi to wapsi ki tyari honey lagi aur woh din aaa gaya 20th April 2012 jis din ne Farah ki uss sey sub khushian cheen li.... Faisal aur us ki ami ke saath Farah ke abu bhi apne bhai se milney Islamabad jaa rahe theee aur Faisal ne Bhoja Air Line ki flight # B4-213 ki ticket kerwa li aur sham ko woh log hansi khushi Islamabad ke lea rawana hoye.... per woh ho gaya jo kisi ke wehmo guman mai bhi nahi thaa ... Plane Crash ho gaya... aur sub log jo iss flight mai the sub khatam ho gae....


Farah ki dunya he lut gayi aur us ki ami to yeah gham berdasht naa ker saki aur woh bhi Farah ko besahara chooorh ke apne shohar ke pass chali gayi aur Farah ko to yaqeen he nahi aa raha thaa sub pee woh to maan he nahi rahi theee aur jab us ko yaqeen aaya to woh bilkul sun ho ke reh gayi aik aansoo bhi naa tapka us ki aankh se woh naa to kisi se kuch bolti thee aur naa he rooti thee .... woh to bus us derwazey ki taraf deekhti rehti jis sey Faisal aur us ke Abu jaatey hoye ussey alwida keh rahe theee.... ussey lagta thaa aaj bhi abu aaen ge aur kahen ge arey bitya rani yeah sub jhoot boltey hain mai to yahan he tumharey pass tumhe choorh ke kahan jaa sakta hon bhala mai.... aur Faisal aaye ga aur kahe ga keh Arey mai ne tumhara sari zindagi ke lea thama hai tumhe chorh ke janey ke lea nahi.... aur uski ami kahen ge are farah uthoo kya haal bana lea hain tum ne chaloo uthoo khana khaa looo.... Per koi nahi aaya kyon keh woh log to wahan jaa chukhe jahan se koi laut ke nahi aaya....

Faisal ke abu bhi Karachi aa gaye theee un pe bhi ghamooon ke paahar tootey thee per woh apne bhai ki lakhtey jigar aur apne bete ki pasand aur apni pyari bahteeji ke lea Karachi aaye thee unhey deekh ke Farah un se lipat ke bohat roooyi aur bohat baar behoosh hoi aur jaisey he hosh aata phir roney lagti theee aur Khawer Hussain se us ki yeah halat deekhi nahi jati thee unho ne Farah se kaha keh chalo Farah mere saath Islamabad chalooo mai yahan tumhe akeela nahi chooorh sakta. per Farah apna ghar chorney pe tyar nahi theee woh apne abu apni ami aur faisal ko jahan akhri baar deekha us ghar ko chorney ke lea tyar naa theeee.... aur Majbooran Farah ke chachoo ne he haar maan li aur apni bhateeji ke pass he rehney lagey aur apna business bhi kuch arsey mai karachi transfer ker lea ... aur Farah ne bhi khud ko kafi hud tuk sanbhaal lea tha aur aub woh shadi nahi kerna chahti thee... us ne ek school start kea aur wahan pe he khud ko waqf ker dea...


Aaj bhi Farah subah uth ke namaz perh ke yahan chokhat pe beth jati hai aur un dino ki yaadon mai gum ho jati hai jab ussey dunya mai apni zaat sub sey zyada khush naseeb lagti thee… aur ussey aaj bhi intezar hai apne Ami Abu aur apni mohabbat faisal ka….


The End

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very touching story and beautifully written har aik chez itne ache se
explain kiya hai i must say aap bht ache writer ban sakte the keep it up
 
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very touching story and beautifully written har aik chez itne ache se
explain kiya hai i must say aap bht ache writer ban sakte the keep it up
hmmm thanks alot.... mujhe umeed nahi the tum comment kero gi ... mujhe laga mai tumhe mana nahi paya ... abhi bhi naraz ho tum... per tumhare comment daikh ke boaht acha laga ... thank you so much emaaan :)
 

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hmmm thanks alot.... mujhe umeed nahi the tum comment kero gi ... mujhe laga mai tumhe mana nahi paya ... abhi bhi naraz ho tum... per tumhare comment daikh ke boaht acha laga ... thank you so much emaaan :)
nhi mai naraz nhi hon shuru mai kafi bura laga tha but hojata hai dilpe nhi rakhni chahiye koi bhi baat
 
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Aaj bhi Farah ne subah uth ke nashta kea aur aa ke wahin sehan mai derwazey ki chookhat pe beth gayi aur us ki hamjooli Chiroun ne ussey aa ghaira aur ussey sarey jahan ke qisse aur kahani sunane lag gayi per sabah aaj bhi un ko dana daal ke kahin khooo si gayi thee, Jaisey woh iss waqt kissi aur he jahan mai ho.... woh youn he hamesha sey khoi khoi rehne wali larki bilkul nahi thee... balkeh us ki shoookhi aur khush mizaji to us ki saheeliou mai bohat mashoor thee, Aur her koi us se mil ke bohat khush hota. us ki aadat he aisi theee woh sub se bohat pyar aur ehteraam sey he milti. Woh hamesha kaha kerti yaar Yeah Zindagi bohat choothi hai khushian saameetne ke lea, to iss ko gham ke kaanton mai uljhaaaaney ka kya faida.

Woh apni zindagi ke 19 Khusgawar Saal purey ker chuki theee iklooti beti hone ki wajah se ghar mai usey bohat pyar milta aur us ki her khawish ko poooora kerna apni zindagi ka maqsad samajhney waley Abu theey aur maa ke rooop mai best friend thee us ki jo keh uss se bohat pyar kerti thee jo keh her maa he apni bachon se kerti hai. Per Farah ki ami ko Farah ki zyada he fikar lagi rehti theee woh zara si bhi college se lait ho jati to us ki maa usey isssi darwaazey ki chookhat pe bethi hoi inteezar mai milti aur aatey he ussey be ikhtiyar galey se laga laiti aur Farah maa ke aansoo saaf kertey hoyee poochti amee aap ro rahi ho to woh kehti arey nahi betaaa payaz kaat rahi thee naa, kuch dair pehley us ki wajah se pani nikal raha hai aankhon sey.... to woh dono he hans perti aur kuch dair pehle ki pareshan maa apne beeti ko deekhtey he jaise her gham bhool jati....

Youn he achey khaasey din guzar rahe thee keh Farah ki zindagi mai ek tooofan saa aaya jo us ki zindagi ki khushi aur us ki hansi ko jaise apne saath he lai urra. Howa kuch youn ke sub ko pasand aane wali farah ko aik larka pasand aa gaya jo ke us ka cousin tha aur us ke Chachooo ka bara betaa Faisal thaa, Faisal aik 25 saal ka wajeh naujwaan tha jo ke MBA kerne ke baad apne abu Khawer Hussain ke sath un ke business mai shamil ho gaya, woh log islamabad mai rehtey the , Faisal bhi Farah ko pasand kerta thaa aur Pasand ka izhaar bhi pehle Faisal ki taraf se he howa thaa Faisal ne apni ami ko bataya apni pasand ka aur us ki ami ne Khawar Hussain se baat ki to jaisey Khawer Hussain ko to apni mun chahi khushi bin maange mil gayi ho, woh khushi khushi agley he din Karachi apne bhai Dilawer Hussain ke ghar apni begam ke sath pohanch gaye aur Farah ka haath maang lea aur Dilawer bhi bohat khush hoye per unhooo ne beti ki razamandi ki baat samney rakhi aur kaha Farah ka faisala he Final ho ga. Aur Farah ki ami ne Farah se Faisal ke rishtey ke barey mai baat ki to Jaisey Farah ke dil mai ladoo pooth parey hon aur gulabi chehrey ke sath us ne asbaat mai ser hilla dea. kyon keh woh to bohat pehley se he Faisal ko dil he dil mai bohat chahti thee aur ussey us waqt apni qismat pe bohat rashk aa raha thaaa... keh Allah ne uss ke dil ke malik ko bin maange us se milwa dea. aur iss tarah dono ke dermiyan mangetar ka rishta qaim ker dea gaya aur Farah ki khushian to jaisey doo baaala ho gae hon, woh to un dinno jaisey hawaoun mai urr rahi ho, wo akser faisal se phone pe baat kerti thee aur ek doosrey se apne dil ki baaten share kea kertey the... per un ki qismat mai yeah khusian bohat kum arsey ke lea aae theen

Dono families he iss rishtey se bohat khush theee aur Aik Saal baad un ki shadi ki date bhi fix ker di gayi theee aur mangni ke panch maheeney guzar gaye the aur un ki shadi ki tayri urooj pe theee aur Faisal apni ami ke saath Karachi aaya howa thaa kyon keh Faisal ki ami ka khayal thaaa keh Jewellery aur Dresses ki shopping to farah ke sath he hogi jo Woh apni bahoo ke lea banwa rahi thee . aur un logon ki shopping jab complete hoi to wapsi ki tyari honey lagi aur woh din aaa gaya 20th April 2012 jis din ne Farah ki uss sey sub khushian cheen li.... Faisal aur us ki ami ke saath Farah ke abu bhi apne bhai se milney Islamabad jaa rahe theee aur Faisal ne Bhoja Air Line ki flight # B4-213 ki ticket kerwa li aur sham ko woh log hansi khushi Islamabad ke lea rawana hoye.... per woh ho gaya jo kisi ke wehmo guman mai bhi nahi thaa ... Plane Crash ho gaya... aur sub log jo iss flight mai the sub khatam ho gae....


Farah ki dunya he lut gayi aur us ki ami to yeah gham berdasht naa ker saki aur woh bhi Farah ko besahara chooorh ke apne shohar ke pass chali gayi aur Farah ko to yaqeen he nahi aa raha thaa sub pee woh to maan he nahi rahi theee aur jab us ko yaqeen aaya to woh bilkul sun ho ke reh gayi aik aansoo bhi naa tapka us ki aankh se woh naa to kisi se kuch bolti thee aur naa he rooti thee .... woh to bus us derwazey ki taraf deekhti rehti jis sey Faisal aur us ke Abu jaatey hoye ussey alwida keh rahe theee.... ussey lagta thaa aaj bhi abu aaen ge aur kahen ge arey bitya rani yeah sub jhoot boltey hain mai to yahan he tumharey pass tumhe choorh ke kahan jaa sakta hon bhala mai.... aur Faisal aaye ga aur kahe ga keh Arey mai ne tumhara sari zindagi ke lea thama hai tumhe chorh ke janey ke lea nahi.... aur uski ami kahen ge are farah uthoo kya haal bana lea hain tum ne chaloo uthoo khana khaa looo.... Per koi nahi aaya kyon keh woh log to wahan jaa chukhe jahan se koi laut ke nahi aaya....

Faisal ke abu bhi Karachi aa gaye theee un pe bhi ghamooon ke paahar tootey thee per woh apne bhai ki lakhtey jigar aur apne bete ki pasand aur apni pyari bahteeji ke lea Karachi aaye thee unhey deekh ke Farah un se lipat ke bohat roooyi aur bohat baar behoosh hoi aur jaisey he hosh aata phir roney lagti theee aur Khawer Hussain se us ki yeah halat deekhi nahi jati thee unho ne Farah se kaha keh chalo Farah mere saath Islamabad chalooo mai yahan tumhe akeela nahi chooorh sakta. per Farah apna ghar chorney pe tyar nahi theee woh apne abu apni ami aur faisal ko jahan akhri baar deekha us ghar ko chorney ke lea tyar naa theeee.... aur Majbooran Farah ke chachoo ne he haar maan li aur apni bhateeji ke pass he rehney lagey aur apna business bhi kuch arsey mai karachi transfer ker lea ... aur Farah ne bhi khud ko kafi hud tuk sanbhaal lea tha aur aub woh shadi nahi kerna chahti thee... us ne ek school start kea aur wahan pe he khud ko waqf ker dea...


Aaj bhi Farah subah uth ke namaz perh ke yahan chokhat pe beth jati hai aur un dino ki yaadon mai gum ho jati hai jab ussey dunya mai apni zaat sub sey zyada khush naseeb lagti thee… aur ussey aaj bhi intezar hai apne Ami Abu aur apni mohabbat faisal ka….


The End

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Buhat achi tehreer Shoaib, mai'n ney puri tehreer perhi
buhat achi kawish hey iski tareef na kerna ziyadti hogi
likhtey raha kro,
hamaisha khush aur salamet raho
Ameen
 
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oyeeee annu meri story perh ke comment dai rahi ho ya fir mai pistol nikaloun fir....:mad:
parh leti hon:s:p ap ise alag thread pe post karte
 

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Aaj bhi Farah ne subah uth ke nashta kea aur aa ke wahin sehan mai derwazey ki chookhat pe beth gayi aur us ki hamjooli Chiroun ne ussey aa ghaira aur ussey sarey jahan ke qisse aur kahani sunane lag gayi per Farah aaj bhi un ko dana daal ke kahin khooo si gayi thee, Jaisey woh iss waqt kissi aur he jahan mai ho.... woh youn he hamesha sey khoi khoi rehne wali larki bilkul nahi thee... balkeh us ki shoookhi aur khush mizaji to us ki saheeliou mai bohat mashoor thee, Aur her koi us se mil ke bohat khush hota. us ki aadat he aisi theee woh sub se bohat pyar aur ehteraam sey he milti. Woh hamesha kaha kerti yaar Yeah Zindagi bohat choothi hai khushian saameetne ke lea, to iss ko gham ke kaanton mai uljhaaaaney ka kya faida.

Woh apni zindagi ke 19 Khusgawar Saal purey ker chuki theee iklooti beti hone ki wajah se ghar mai usey bohat pyar milta aur us ki her khawish ko poooora kerna apni zindagi ka maqsad samajhney waley Abu theey aur maa ke rooop mai best friend thee us ki jo keh uss se bohat pyar kerti thee jo keh her maa he apni bachon se kerti hai. Per Farah ki ami ko Farah ki zyada he fikar lagi rehti theee woh zara si bhi college se lait ho jati to us ki maa usey isssi darwaazey ki chookhat pe bethi hoi inteezar mai milti aur aatey he ussey be ikhtiyar galey se laga laiti aur Farah maa ke aansoo saaf kertey hoyee poochti amee aap ro rahi ho to woh kehti arey nahi betaaa payaz kaat rahi thee naa, kuch dair pehley us ki wajah se pani nikal raha hai aankhon sey.... to woh dono he hans perti aur kuch dair pehle ki pareshan maa apne beeti ko deekhtey he jaise her gham bhool jati....

Youn he achey khaasey din guzar rahe thee keh Farah ki zindagi mai ek tooofan saa aaya jo us ki zindagi ki khushi aur us ki hansi ko jaise apne saath he lai urra. Howa kuch youn ke sub ko pasand aane wali farah ko aik larka pasand aa gaya jo ke us ka cousin tha aur us ke Chachooo ka bara betaa Faisal thaa, Faisal aik 25 saal ka wajeh naujwaan tha jo ke MBA kerne ke baad apne abu Khawer Hussain ke sath un ke business mai shamil ho gaya, woh log islamabad mai rehtey the , Faisal bhi Farah ko pasand kerta thaa aur Pasand ka izhaar bhi pehle Faisal ki taraf se he howa thaa Faisal ne apni ami ko bataya apni pasand ka aur us ki ami ne Khawar Hussain se baat ki to jaisey Khawer Hussain ko to apni mun chahi khushi bin maange mil gayi ho, woh khushi khushi agley he din Karachi apne bhai Dilawer Hussain ke ghar apni begam ke sath pohanch gaye aur Farah ka haath maang lea aur Dilawer bhi bohat khush hoye per unhooo ne beti ki razamandi ki baat samney rakhi aur kaha Farah ka faisala he Final ho ga. Aur Farah ki ami ne Farah se Faisal ke rishtey ke barey mai baat ki to Jaisey Farah ke dil mai ladoo pooth parey hon aur gulabi chehrey ke sath us ne asbaat mai ser hilla dea. kyon keh woh to bohat pehley se he Faisal ko dil he dil mai bohat chahti thee aur ussey us waqt apni qismat pe bohat rashk aa raha thaaa... keh Allah ne uss ke dil ke malik ko bin maange us se milwa dea. aur iss tarah dono ke dermiyan mangetar ka rishta qaim ker dea gaya aur Farah ki khushian to jaisey doo baaala ho gae hon, woh to un dinno jaisey hawaoun mai urr rahi ho, wo akser faisal se phone pe baat kerti thee aur ek doosrey se apne dil ki baaten share kea kertey the... per un ki qismat mai yeah khusian bohat kum arsey ke lea aae theen

Dono families he iss rishtey se bohat khush theee aur Aik Saal baad un ki shadi ki date bhi fix ker di gayi theee aur mangni ke panch maheeney guzar gaye the aur un ki shadi ki tayri urooj pe theee aur Faisal apni ami ke saath Karachi aaya howa thaa kyon keh Faisal ki ami ka khayal thaaa keh Jewellery aur Dresses ki shopping to farah ke sath he hogi jo Woh apni bahoo ke lea banwa rahi thee . aur un logon ki shopping jab complete hoi to wapsi ki tyari honey lagi aur woh din aaa gaya 20th April 2012 jis din ne Farah ki uss sey sub khushian cheen li.... Faisal aur us ki ami ke saath Farah ke abu bhi apne bhai se milney Islamabad jaa rahe theee aur Faisal ne Bhoja Air Line ki flight # B4-213 ki ticket kerwa li aur sham ko woh log hansi khushi Islamabad ke lea rawana hoye.... per woh ho gaya jo kisi ke wehmo guman mai bhi nahi thaa ... Plane Crash ho gaya... aur sub log jo iss flight mai the sub khatam ho gae....


Farah ki dunya he lut gayi aur us ki ami to yeah gham berdasht naa ker saki aur woh bhi Farah ko besahara chooorh ke apne shohar ke pass chali gayi aur Farah ko to yaqeen he nahi aa raha thaa sub pee woh to maan he nahi rahi theee aur jab us ko yaqeen aaya to woh bilkul sun ho ke reh gayi aik aansoo bhi naa tapka us ki aankh se woh naa to kisi se kuch bolti thee aur naa he rooti thee .... woh to bus us derwazey ki taraf deekhti rehti jis sey Faisal aur us ke Abu jaatey hoye ussey alwida keh rahe theee.... ussey lagta thaa aaj bhi abu aaen ge aur kahen ge arey bitya rani yeah sub jhoot boltey hain mai to yahan he tumharey pass tumhe choorh ke kahan jaa sakta hon bhala mai.... aur Faisal aaye ga aur kahe ga keh Arey mai ne tumhara sari zindagi ke lea thama hai tumhe chorh ke janey ke lea nahi.... aur uski ami kahen ge are farah uthoo kya haal bana lea hain tum ne chaloo uthoo khana khaa looo.... Per koi nahi aaya kyon keh woh log to wahan jaa chukhe jahan se koi laut ke nahi aaya....

Faisal ke abu bhi Karachi aa gaye theee un pe bhi ghamooon ke paahar tootey thee per woh apne bhai ki lakhtey jigar aur apne bete ki pasand aur apni pyari bahteeji ke lea Karachi aaye thee unhey deekh ke Farah un se lipat ke bohat roooyi aur bohat baar behoosh hoi aur jaisey he hosh aata phir roney lagti theee aur Khawer Hussain se us ki yeah halat deekhi nahi jati thee unho ne Farah se kaha keh chalo Farah mere saath Islamabad chalooo mai yahan tumhe akeela nahi chooorh sakta. per Farah apna ghar chorney pe tyar nahi theee woh apne abu apni ami aur faisal ko jahan akhri baar deekha us ghar ko chorney ke lea tyar naa theeee.... aur Majbooran Farah ke chachoo ne he haar maan li aur apni bhateeji ke pass he rehney lagey aur apna business bhi kuch arsey mai karachi transfer ker lea ... aur Farah ne bhi khud ko kafi hud tuk sanbhaal lea tha aur aub woh shadi nahi kerna chahti thee... us ne ek school start kea aur wahan pe he khud ko waqf ker dea...


Aaj bhi Farah subah uth ke namaz perh ke yahan chokhat pe beth jati hai aur un dino ki yaadon mai gum ho jati hai jab ussey dunya mai apni zaat sub sey zyada khush naseeb lagti thee… aur ussey aaj bhi intezar hai apne Ami Abu aur apni mohabbat faisal ka….


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Shb bhaya rula diya aap ne to {(cray)}
itni si pic pe itne zabardast background ko bta k bohat pyari story bnayi aur is image se relate ki :-bd
too gud shb bhaya ,,proud of u :p
 
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Shb bhaya rula diya aap ne to {(cray)}
itni si pic pe itne zabardast background ko bta k bohat pyari story bnayi aur is image se relate ki :-bd
too gud shb bhaya ,,proud of u :p
hahahahaha maan gayi naa hansaney waley rula bhi saktey hain :p
 
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Aaj bhi Farah ne subah uth ke nashta kea aur aa ke wahin sehan mai derwazey ki chookhat pe beth gayi aur us ki hamjooli Chiroun ne ussey aa ghaira aur ussey sarey jahan ke qisse aur kahani sunane lag gayi per Farah aaj bhi un ko dana daal ke kahin khooo si gayi thee, Jaisey woh iss waqt kissi aur he jahan mai ho.... woh youn he hamesha sey khoi khoi rehne wali larki bilkul nahi thee... balkeh us ki shoookhi aur khush mizaji to us ki saheeliou mai bohat mashoor thee, Aur her koi us se mil ke bohat khush hota. us ki aadat he aisi theee woh sub se bohat pyar aur ehteraam sey he milti. Woh hamesha kaha kerti yaar Yeah Zindagi bohat choothi hai khushian saameetne ke lea, to iss ko gham ke kaanton mai uljhaaaaney ka kya faida.

Woh apni zindagi ke 19 Khusgawar Saal purey ker chuki theee iklooti beti hone ki wajah se ghar mai usey bohat pyar milta aur us ki her khawish ko poooora kerna apni zindagi ka maqsad samajhney waley Abu theey aur maa ke rooop mai best friend thee us ki jo keh uss se bohat pyar kerti thee jo keh her maa he apni bachon se kerti hai. Per Farah ki ami ko Farah ki zyada he fikar lagi rehti theee woh zara si bhi college se lait ho jati to us ki maa usey isssi darwaazey ki chookhat pe bethi hoi inteezar mai milti aur aatey he ussey be ikhtiyar galey se laga laiti aur Farah maa ke aansoo saaf kertey hoyee poochti amee aap ro rahi ho to woh kehti arey nahi betaaa payaz kaat rahi thee naa, kuch dair pehley us ki wajah se pani nikal raha hai aankhon sey.... to woh dono he hans perti aur kuch dair pehle ki pareshan maa apne beeti ko deekhtey he jaise her gham bhool jati....

Youn he achey khaasey din guzar rahe thee keh Farah ki zindagi mai ek tooofan saa aaya jo us ki zindagi ki khushi aur us ki hansi ko jaise apne saath he lai urra. Howa kuch youn ke sub ko pasand aane wali farah ko aik larka pasand aa gaya jo ke us ka cousin tha aur us ke Chachooo ka bara betaa Faisal thaa, Faisal aik 25 saal ka wajeh naujwaan tha jo ke MBA kerne ke baad apne abu Khawer Hussain ke sath un ke business mai shamil ho gaya, woh log islamabad mai rehtey the , Faisal bhi Farah ko pasand kerta thaa aur Pasand ka izhaar bhi pehle Faisal ki taraf se he howa thaa Faisal ne apni ami ko bataya apni pasand ka aur us ki ami ne Khawar Hussain se baat ki to jaisey Khawer Hussain ko to apni mun chahi khushi bin maange mil gayi ho, woh khushi khushi agley he din Karachi apne bhai Dilawer Hussain ke ghar apni begam ke sath pohanch gaye aur Farah ka haath maang lea aur Dilawer bhi bohat khush hoye per unhooo ne beti ki razamandi ki baat samney rakhi aur kaha Farah ka faisala he Final ho ga. Aur Farah ki ami ne Farah se Faisal ke rishtey ke barey mai baat ki to Jaisey Farah ke dil mai ladoo pooth parey hon aur gulabi chehrey ke sath us ne asbaat mai ser hilla dea. kyon keh woh to bohat pehley se he Faisal ko dil he dil mai bohat chahti thee aur ussey us waqt apni qismat pe bohat rashk aa raha thaaa... keh Allah ne uss ke dil ke malik ko bin maange us se milwa dea. aur iss tarah dono ke dermiyan mangetar ka rishta qaim ker dea gaya aur Farah ki khushian to jaisey doo baaala ho gae hon, woh to un dinno jaisey hawaoun mai urr rahi ho, wo akser faisal se phone pe baat kerti thee aur ek doosrey se apne dil ki baaten share kea kertey the... per un ki qismat mai yeah khusian bohat kum arsey ke lea aae theen

Dono families he iss rishtey se bohat khush theee aur Aik Saal baad un ki shadi ki date bhi fix ker di gayi theee aur mangni ke panch maheeney guzar gaye the aur un ki shadi ki tayri urooj pe theee aur Faisal apni ami ke saath Karachi aaya howa thaa kyon keh Faisal ki ami ka khayal thaaa keh Jewellery aur Dresses ki shopping to farah ke sath he hogi jo Woh apni bahoo ke lea banwa rahi thee . aur un logon ki shopping jab complete hoi to wapsi ki tyari honey lagi aur woh din aaa gaya 20th April 2012 jis din ne Farah ki uss sey sub khushian cheen li.... Faisal aur us ki ami ke saath Farah ke abu bhi apne bhai se milney Islamabad jaa rahe theee aur Faisal ne Bhoja Air Line ki flight # B4-213 ki ticket kerwa li aur sham ko woh log hansi khushi Islamabad ke lea rawana hoye.... per woh ho gaya jo kisi ke wehmo guman mai bhi nahi thaa ... Plane Crash ho gaya... aur sub log jo iss flight mai the sub khatam ho gae....


Farah ki dunya he lut gayi aur us ki ami to yeah gham berdasht naa ker saki aur woh bhi Farah ko besahara chooorh ke apne shohar ke pass chali gayi aur Farah ko to yaqeen he nahi aa raha thaa sub pee woh to maan he nahi rahi theee aur jab us ko yaqeen aaya to woh bilkul sun ho ke reh gayi aik aansoo bhi naa tapka us ki aankh se woh naa to kisi se kuch bolti thee aur naa he rooti thee .... woh to bus us derwazey ki taraf deekhti rehti jis sey Faisal aur us ke Abu jaatey hoye ussey alwida keh rahe theee.... ussey lagta thaa aaj bhi abu aaen ge aur kahen ge arey bitya rani yeah sub jhoot boltey hain mai to yahan he tumharey pass tumhe choorh ke kahan jaa sakta hon bhala mai.... aur Faisal aaye ga aur kahe ga keh Arey mai ne tumhara sari zindagi ke lea thama hai tumhe chorh ke janey ke lea nahi.... aur uski ami kahen ge are farah uthoo kya haal bana lea hain tum ne chaloo uthoo khana khaa looo.... Per koi nahi aaya kyon keh woh log to wahan jaa chukhe jahan se koi laut ke nahi aaya....

Faisal ke abu bhi Karachi aa gaye theee un pe bhi ghamooon ke paahar tootey thee per woh apne bhai ki lakhtey jigar aur apne bete ki pasand aur apni pyari bahteeji ke lea Karachi aaye thee unhey deekh ke Farah un se lipat ke bohat roooyi aur bohat baar behoosh hoi aur jaisey he hosh aata phir roney lagti theee aur Khawer Hussain se us ki yeah halat deekhi nahi jati thee unho ne Farah se kaha keh chalo Farah mere saath Islamabad chalooo mai yahan tumhe akeela nahi chooorh sakta. per Farah apna ghar chorney pe tyar nahi theee woh apne abu apni ami aur faisal ko jahan akhri baar deekha us ghar ko chorney ke lea tyar naa theeee.... aur Majbooran Farah ke chachoo ne he haar maan li aur apni bhateeji ke pass he rehney lagey aur apna business bhi kuch arsey mai karachi transfer ker lea ... aur Farah ne bhi khud ko kafi hud tuk sanbhaal lea tha aur aub woh shadi nahi kerna chahti thee... us ne ek school start kea aur wahan pe he khud ko waqf ker dea...


Aaj bhi Farah subah uth ke namaz perh ke yahan chokhat pe beth jati hai aur un dino ki yaadon mai gum ho jati hai jab ussey dunya mai apni zaat sub sey zyada khush naseeb lagti thee… aur ussey aaj bhi intezar hai apne Ami Abu aur apni mohabbat faisal ka….


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waaah kia kahan likhi hay..................:x :x :x
sach main maza aa gia kahani parh k......kaheen kaheen rona b aa rhaa tha par mainy control kr lia:(

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waaah kia kahan likhi hay..................:x :x :x
sach main maza aa gia kahani parh k......kaheen kaheen rona b aa rhaa tha par mainy control kr lia:(

thanx 4 sharing SHB:)
ufffffffff control ker lea ronaa chahiye thaa naaa akhir tumhe rulaney ko to likhi thee naaa :( abhi tum ro gi to mere dukh ka andaaza ho ga naa keh jab nahi aati ho tum to kaisa udaas hota hai dil.... :s[DOUBLEPOST=1341470954][/DOUBLEPOST]
g ye to main hamesha se maanti hun :)
bohat acha likha :-bd
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ufffffffff control ker lea ronaa chahiye thaa naaa akhir tumhe rulaney ko to likhi thee naaa :( abhi tum ro gi to mere dukh ka andaaza ho ga naa keh jab nahi aati ho tum to kaisa udaas hota hai dil.... :s[DOUBLEPOST=1341470954][/DOUBLEPOST]
Thanks :x
achaa....to tum mujhy rolaa chahty ho.........:(
agar main rony lg gaye na tay fer cgup koi nai hona:p
 
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