Aapka Manzar Apaki Kahani(23rd Dec 2012)!

[Hoorain]

Assalam o ALaikum​

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Jis tara aksar manazir daikh k shayri dimagh may aati hay aur barmala insan koi na koi Shaer parhta hay..​

Issi tara kuch log aik manzar pe poori kahani tarteeb daine ka hunar bhi rakhte hain..yahan har hafte aik image diya jaayega us pe sab ko Kuch na Kuch likhna hoga par kahani ki soorat may hona chahiye jo ussi manzar k mutabiq ho....(ye bilkul aisa hoga k aik jaamid image may apne alfaz se aise dikhana hay k parhne waale k dimagh may wo manzar harkat karey ,,​

jis k alfaz ziada pur asar hon gaye aur parh k ziada maza aayega wohi us week ka winner hoga/gi)​

AUr susti ya nakhrey dikhane ki koi zarurat nhi ​

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image pe aap kuch bhi likh sakte hain apni marzi se,, chahey to tanz-o-mazah ho ya sanjeeda sab chalega....​

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Ye rha ab ka manzar is pe aapko story bnanai hay!​

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RULES:​

1. Manzar likhne se pehle uska Mozu (title)bhi bnayain gaye,,, Mozu jitna pur kashish ho manzar utna hi jaandar lagega... ​

2, poori kahani sirf Urdu(language not font) may ho....​

3. Kahani submit karwane ki last date 5th January 2013 hay INSHAALLAH!​

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4. Sab apni apni kahani issi thread may share karain gaye aur apni khanai k saath Ye image bhi post karain gaye!​

• jiski kahani n title ziada achi hogi unhe award diya jaayega with a lot of appreciation

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MAzeed details and references k liye ye visit karain​

http://www.tafrehmela.com/threads/aapka-manzar-aapki-kahani-3-march-2012-to-10-march-2012.189028/​

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GUD Luck ​

@syeda aftima​

 

[Hoorain]

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[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Wa'alaikumussalaam ummmmm nice contest
will try to remove my susti for participating

 

[Hoorain]

Wa'alaikumussalaam ummmmm nice contest
will try to remove my susti for participating

zarurr INSHAALLAH!
weekly contest hay har week hoga ab susti khatam akr hi dain to acha hay

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

zarurr INSHAALLAH!
weekly contest hay har week hoga ab susti khatam akr hi dain to acha hay

C,mon har hafte ye to zulm hai meri susti per

 

[Hoorain]

C,mon har hafte ye to zulm hai meri susti per

wo to hay
youth ko chust hona chahiye

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

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Assalaamu alaikum TM doston mujhe kahani​

likhna to nahin aata lekin aaj @hoorain behna ke​

lagae thread aur diye huwe manzar per mere likhne​

ka dil huwa so as a writer mujhe likhna to nahin aaya​

magar Hoorain behna ki dosti me hum ne koshish kar li ​

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umeed hai ke INSHA'ALLAH pasand aayega agar​

pasand kam hi aaya to INSHA'ALLAH eik achha pegham​

subhi ko naseeb hoga here it is​

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Mere Kitaab mere saathi​

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Apne bare bhai se behes karta Fawwad bol raha hai ke​

dekhen bhai jan jin ashkhaas ka aap tazkira kar rahe hain​

bila shuba wo baaqi muamlaat me theek hongen lekin nazariya e ISLAM​

unka bilkul bhi theek nahin​

Jawwad: chote miyan agar is tarah se karne lage to tumhen​

aaj ki tareekh mein koi bhi aisa aalim nahin milega jisme ayeb na ho​

ayeb to har bande mein hota hai​

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ji pyare bhai bilkul sahi farmaya lekin hum unke ayeb ko sahi​

keh kar unke gunahgaari ka hissa kyun banen ??​

hum unke sahi cheez ko sahi ghalat ko ghalat maan kar baat ko​

theek tarah samajh sakte hain naa !!​

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tum to mujh se is tarah baat kar rahe ho jese tumhare paas ilm ka​

khazana hai aur tumhen sub pata hai kab kahan sahi aur ghalat hai​

nahin bhai ilm ka khazana hai to nahin per waada hai INSHA'ALLAH kisi din​

itna ilm zaroor hoga..ke apne kahe huwe ko be ayeb kutub se saabit kar sakun​

haan haan jab aisa karoge tab baat karengen mujhe to khushi hogi tumhare taraqqi se​

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Fawwad wo insaan jo kabhi ghalti karta aur bachna chahta to use​

ghar me sabaq milta ke jo ghalat hai wo ghalat hai​

lekin junhi uski umer barhti gaiy so usne jaana ke ye sabaq​

dena aur is per amal karna har koi bachpan tak hi mehdood rakhta hai​

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use apne ird gird eik bhi aisa shakhs nahin mila jiske soch se wo sehmat ho​

yehi nuqta wajah bani uske kitaab parhne tehreer likhne ghazal likhne ki​

use kitaabon mein eik aisi dunya mili jise wo insaanon mein dhoondta tha​

jab wo kitaabon ki dunya mein magan huwa so aise lagne laga ab kisi ke​

aage bhi sach kehna asaan hai per wo is baat se bekhabar tha ke​

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Jahan me sabab e ghuflat se dilon me chahat nahin rehti​

insaan ko apne KHUDA se bhi mohabbat nahin rehti​

hai is qadar jhoot phela aaj ki dunya mein Chiragh​

humare darmyan haqeeqat bhi haqeeqat nahin rehti​

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pas wo alag alag kutub se hasil kiye gaye ilm ki bunyad per eik fatwe​

ke gharz se apne masjid ke aalim ke paas gaya so use aalim ne taal diya​

jiski wajah use baad me pata chali ke ye fatwa unke maslak ke khilaf chala jaata​

wo heirati huwa ke " Mazhab " aaj tak suna hai jiske mutaliq fatwa maanga mene​

ab ye maslak kya shay hai ?? phir us ne socha​

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hai bach paaya jo dayar e kutub se​

nahin jahan mein aisa raaz koi​

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ab Fawwad ne apne jawaani ke daur hi me apni khudi ko apne imaan ko​

nazar o amal e bad e dunya se bachaane ke liye kutub ka sahara liya​

eik din wo betha apne ghar pe bola mein soch raha hoon ISLAM ke muazu per​

khud se koi kitab likhun..​

itne me uske abbu ji bole achha likh lena achhi baat hogi lekin pehle ye to bataao​

ISLAM ke IMAM E A'AZAM koun the ??​

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Fawwad bina ek lamhe ke intizar ke bol para ALLAH ke pyare nabi alaehe salam​

to uske abbu bole ji ji wo to hain magar Imam Abu Hanifa Imam Malik Imam Hanbal​

Imam Shafaiy RAHEMULLAH alaehem me se afzal koun se the ??​

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Fawwad kuch waqt sochne ke baad..abbu ji jahaan tak mera ilm hai chaaron aaiyma e karam​

eik barabar the in alfaaz se behes barhti gaiy aur ta aakhir uske abbu ji bole​

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ae meri khabees aulad kya tu ghair muqallid ban betha hai ??​

Fawwad ji abbu agar mere haq bolne parhne samajhne likhne ko aap ghair muqallid​

ka naam dete ho to theek hai wagarna mein hanafi bhi hun maliki bhi hun shafaiy bhi hun hanbali bhi hun​

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Fawwad ke ghar walon ne jab ye dekha ke Fawwad ke rehen sehen khaane peene hatta ke​

namaz ke tareeqe mein bohot bari tabdeeli aa chuki hai use ghar waalon ne use samjhana chaha ke​

aap ye harkaten chorh do aur pehle ki tarah ban jaao wo bola​

hargiz nahin mere azeezon balke aap loug ye syasi tehreek ka saath aur eik Imam ko​

thaam kar rakhna chorh do Fawwad ki haqparasti uske ghar waalon ke nazar mein zidd thi​

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eik aisi zidd jo ilaaqe bhar mein uske ghar waalon ko badnaam kar sakti thi theek is hi soch se​

wo Fawwad ko apne ghar se nikaal kar eik aur shehr rawana kar dete hain us shehr mein​

uske abbu ji ke door ke rishtedaar the jo intihaiy buzarg ho chuke the aur unhen ghar ke kaam kaaj ke liye​

eik Fawwad jese bande ki zarurat thi ab Fawwad unke ghar apne aise doston ke saath pohncha jo ke​

un do buzargaan ki bachi kuchi zindagi mein bhi bari tabdeeli laaya unhen din raat​

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tarz e du'a se le kar namaaz tak ke liye alag alag duaaen batata rehta Fawwad..Fawwad ke​

ilm o meher se wo bhi bare khush the eik din huwa youn ke us buzarg ki shareek e hayat​

ka shadeed bimari ke sabab intiqaal huwa ab ye ghar us buzarg ko saanp ki tarah dasne laga​

aur tanhaiy use uski maut se badtar lagne lagi yahaan Fawwad ne mukammal saath dene ki koshish ki​

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aur us buzarg ki khidmat me apna khoob waqt lagaya shab o rouz use waqiyaat sunata raha uski khidmat karta raha​

wo bhi Fawwad ko eik humraz shakhsiyat jaante huwe bol pare ke mere bhi 3 bache hain​

do suraj jese bete aur eik chaand si beti per unke waliden ka saath unhen tab tak raas raha​

jab tak unke waliden ne unhen parhaya aur kama kar khilaya​

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phir kuch syasi doston ke wajeh se syasat ka hissa eik bhai ko kya mila usne us hi ghar me​

apni behen biha di Fawwad unki baat kaat'te huwe kya ye sub aapki raza mandi se huwa ??​

raza mandi to darkinar bete mujhe ilm tak na tha mein apni shareek e hayat ke saath​

gaanv gaya huwa tha wahaan mere behnowi shadeed bimar the unki ayadat ko​

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laut kar dekha ke jamhuri syasat ke jis paleet daldal se mein apne bachon ko​

bachaana chahta tha us daldal ko shehed ka neher jaante huwe mere bache​

usme bare shouq se kood pare..Fawwad:aur aapka doosra beta ??​

jab mene unpe zour diya ke mein in corrupt tehreekon ke khilaf hoon tum bhi​

ye kaam chorh do to bara beta bola yehi tehreek mujhe eik bangla aur car de chuki hai​

jinme aapke bakwas se door me rehne ja raha hoon aur chote ne bhi uske saath haami bhari​

meri bad bakhti thi jo mujhe aise aulaad naseeb huwe​

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badbakht aap nahin aap to sahih raah per hone ka shukr ada karen​

bad bakht to aapke aulaad hain jinhen HAQ dikh to raha hai magar DULAT se kam​

jaante hain use​

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buzarg ko sahara dete huwe Fawwad ne ye kalimat kahe phir kamre se nikal kar​

dubara apne kitaabon ke janib gaya aur khud ko bolne laga​

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ek bhi insan aisa na mila zindagi mein​

ho jis ki khushi HAQ ke bulandi mein​

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aaj Fawwad shadeed sadme mein tha kyunke jese afsaane kahani usne parhe sune the​

aaj unki haqeeqat mein us ne deikh liya use ye yaqeen ho gaya ke jahan haq per hone ke​

sabab uske ghar walon ne use chhora aur yahan in buzarg ke aal ne inhen chhora​

younhi haq per hone waalon ke khilaf hi hona hai aksariyat ko ab wo buzarg iski​

shaadi ki baat karta to ye bolta ke mujhe intizar hai eik haqparast hasti ka​

warna meri ye zindagi mein apne in azeez dost kitaabon ke naam karta hoon​

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ab panjgaana namaz aur QURAN ki tilawat ke baad din raat​

kitaaben parhna bana kaam Fawwad ka​

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rehta hai jo har nigaah se hijaabon mein​

har wo raaz dikh jaata hai kitaabon mein​

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Fawwad ki tarah ALLAH humen bhi na insaafi​

jaahil hukmuraanon ki pairvi buraaiy nafarmaani​

be adabi haq ki khilaf warzi taqleed se bachaaye hidayat e haq​

naseeb farmaae Aameen​

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aur phir chaahe dunya ka har fard humaare khilaf hi kyun na ho jaaye hum​

HAQ ko naa chhoren Aameen​

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[Qawareer]

Wa'alaikum Assalam
ahan...dil'chasp...!

inhsaAllah..mai b koshish kron gi kuch likhne ki..

 

[فہد]

hmmmmmmmmmm kafi interesting story hai

 

[saviou]

Wa Alaykum Assalam Wrwb
weekly ek nayi kahani

 

[Rubi]

Walaikumsalam​

hmmmm​

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walaikumsalam​

hmmm acha likha hy bro ​

mainne beech beech mein se prha ...lambi thi naw bahut dont mind plx ​

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@hoorain @hoorain wrdx limit b honi chahiye thi nii? ​

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Assalaamu alaikum TM doston mujhe kahani​

likhna to nahin aata lekin aaj @hoorain behna ke​

lagae thread aur diye huwe manzar per mere likhne​

ka dil huwa so as a writer mujhe likhna to nahin aaya​

magar Hoorain behna ki dosti me hum ne koshish kar li ​

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umeed hai ke INSHA'ALLAH pasand aayega agar​

pasand kam hi aaya to INSHA'ALLAH eik achha pegham​

subhi ko naseeb hoga here it is​

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​

Mere Kitaab mere saathi​

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​

Apne bare bhai se behes karta Fawwad bol raha hai ke​

dekhen bhai jan jin ashkhaas ka aap tazkira kar rahe hain​

bila shuba wo baaqi muamlaat me theek hongen lekin nazariya e ISLAM​

unka bilkul bhi theek nahin​

Jawwad: chote miyan agar is tarah se karne lage to tumhen​

aaj ki tareekh mein koi bhi aisa aalim nahin milega jisme ayeb na ho​

ayeb to har bande mein hota hai​

​

ji pyare bhai bilkul sahi farmaya lekin hum unke ayeb ko sahi​

keh kar unke gunahgaari ka hissa kyun banen ??​

hum unke sahi cheez ko sahi ghalat ko ghalat maan kar baat ko​

theek tarah samajh sakte hain naa !!​

​

tum to mujh se is tarah baat kar rahe ho jese tumhare paas ilm ka​

khazana hai aur tumhen sub pata hai kab kahan sahi aur ghalat hai​

nahin bhai ilm ka khazana hai to nahin per waada hai INSHA'ALLAH kisi din​

itna ilm zaroor hoga..ke apne kahe huwe ko be ayeb kutub se saabit kar sakun​

haan haan jab aisa karoge tab baat karengen mujhe to khushi hogi tumhare taraqqi se​

​

Fawwad wo insaan jo kabhi ghalti karta aur bachna chahta to use​

ghar me sabaq milta ke jo ghalat hai wo ghalat hai​

lekin junhi uski umer barhti gaiy so usne jaana ke ye sabaq​

dena aur is per amal karna har koi bachpan tak hi mehdood rakhta hai​

​

use apne ird gird eik bhi aisa shakhs nahin mila jiske soch se wo sehmat ho​

yehi nuqta wajah bani uske kitaab parhne tehreer likhne ghazal likhne ki​

use kitaabon mein eik aisi dunya mili jise wo insaanon mein dhoondta tha​

jab wo kitaabon ki dunya mein magan huwa so aise lagne laga ab kisi ke​

aage bhi sach kehna asaan hai per wo is baat se bekhabar tha ke​

​

Jahan me sabab e ghuflat se dilon me chahat nahin rehti​

insaan ko apne KHUDA se bhi mohabbat nahin rehti​

hai is qadar jhoot phela aaj ki dunya mein Chiragh​

humare darmyan haqeeqat bhi haqeeqat nahin rehti​

​

pas wo alag alag kutub se hasil kiye gaye ilm ki bunyad per eik fatwe​

ke gharz se apne masjid ke aalim ke paas gaya so use aalim ne taal diya​

jiski wajah use baad me pata chali ke ye fatwa unke maslak ke khilaf chala jaata​

wo heirati huwa ke " Mazhab " aaj tak suna hai jiske mutaliq fatwa maanga mene​

ab ye maslak kya shay hai ?? phir us ne socha​

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hai bach paaya jo dayar e kutub se​

nahin jahan mein aisa raaz koi​

​

ab Fawwad ne apne jawaani ke daur hi me apni khudi ko apne imaan ko​

nazar o amal e bad e dunya se bachaane ke liye kutub ka sahara liya​

eik din wo betha apne ghar pe bola mein soch raha hoon ISLAM ke muazu per​

khud se koi kitab likhun..​

itne me uske abbu ji bole achha likh lena achhi baat hogi lekin pehle ye to bataao​

ISLAM ke IMAM E A'AZAM koun the ??​

​

Fawwad bina ek lamhe ke intizar ke bol para ALLAH ke pyare nabi alaehe salam​

to uske abbu bole ji ji wo to hain magar Imam Abu Hanifa Imam Malik Imam Hanbal​

Imam Shafaiy RAHEMULLAH alaehem me se afzal koun se the ??​

​

Fawwad kuch waqt sochne ke baad..abbu ji jahaan tak mera ilm hai chaaron aaiyma e karam​

eik barabar the in alfaaz se behes barhti gaiy aur ta aakhir uske abbu ji bole​

​

ae meri khabees aulad kya tu ghair muqallid ban betha hai ??​

Fawwad ji abbu agar mere haq bolne parhne samajhne likhne ko aap ghair muqallid​

ka naam dete ho to theek hai wagarna mein hanafi bhi hun maliki bhi hun shafaiy bhi hun hanbali bhi hun​

​

Fawwad ke ghar walon ne jab ye dekha ke Fawwad ke rehen sehen khaane peene hatta ke​

namaz ke tareeqe mein bohot bari tabdeeli aa chuki hai use ghar waalon ne use samjhana chaha ke​

aap ye harkaten chorh do aur pehle ki tarah ban jaao wo bola​

hargiz nahin mere azeezon balke aap loug ye syasi tehreek ka saath aur eik Imam ko​

thaam kar rakhna chorh do Fawwad ki haqparasti uske ghar waalon ke nazar mein zidd thi​

​

eik aisi zidd jo ilaaqe bhar mein uske ghar waalon ko badnaam kar sakti thi theek is hi soch se​

wo Fawwad ko apne ghar se nikaal kar eik aur shehr rawana kar dete hain us shehr mein​

uske abbu ji ke door ke rishtedaar the jo intihaiy buzarg ho chuke the aur unhen ghar ke kaam kaaj ke liye​

eik Fawwad jese bande ki zarurat thi ab Fawwad unke ghar apne aise doston ke saath pohncha jo ke​

un do buzargaan ki bachi kuchi zindagi mein bhi bari tabdeeli laaya unhen din raat​

​

tarz e du'a se le kar namaaz tak ke liye alag alag duaaen batata rehta Fawwad..Fawwad ke​

ilm o meher se wo bhi bare khush the eik din huwa youn ke us buzarg ki shareek e hayat​

ka shadeed bimari ke sabab intiqaal huwa ab ye ghar us buzarg ko saanp ki tarah dasne laga​

aur tanhaiy use uski maut se badtar lagne lagi yahaan Fawwad ne mukammal saath dene ki koshish ki​

​

aur us buzarg ki khidmat me apna khoob waqt lagaya shab o rouz use waqiyaat sunata raha uski khidmat karta raha​

wo bhi Fawwad ko eik humraz shakhsiyat jaante huwe bol pare ke mere bhi 3 bache hain​

do suraj jese bete aur eik chaand si beti per unke waliden ka saath unhen tab tak raas raha​

jab tak unke waliden ne unhen parhaya aur kama kar khilaya​

​

phir kuch syasi doston ke wajeh se syasat ka hissa eik bhai ko kya mila usne us hi ghar me​

apni behen biha di Fawwad unki baat kaat'te huwe kya ye sub aapki raza mandi se huwa ??​

raza mandi to darkinar bete mujhe ilm tak na tha mein apni shareek e hayat ke saath​

gaanv gaya huwa tha wahaan mere behnowi shadeed bimar the unki ayadat ko​

​

laut kar dekha ke jamhuri syasat ke jis paleet daldal se mein apne bachon ko​

bachaana chahta tha us daldal ko shehed ka neher jaante huwe mere bache​

usme bare shouq se kood pare..Fawwad:aur aapka doosra beta ??​

jab mene unpe zour diya ke mein in corrupt tehreekon ke khilaf hoon tum bhi​

ye kaam chorh do to bara beta bola yehi tehreek mujhe eik bangla aur car de chuki hai​

jinme aapke bakwas se door me rehne ja raha hoon aur chote ne bhi uske saath haami bhari​

meri bad bakhti thi jo mujhe aise aulaad naseeb huwe​

​

badbakht aap nahin aap to sahih raah per hone ka shukr ada karen​

bad bakht to aapke aulaad hain jinhen HAQ dikh to raha hai magar DULAT se kam​

jaante hain use​

​

buzarg ko sahara dete huwe Fawwad ne ye kalimat kahe phir kamre se nikal kar​

dubara apne kitaabon ke janib gaya aur khud ko bolne laga​

​

ek bhi insan aisa na mila zindagi mein​

ho jis ki khushi HAQ ke bulandi mein​

​

aaj Fawwad shadeed sadme mein tha kyunke jese afsaane kahani usne parhe sune the​

aaj unki haqeeqat mein us ne deikh liya use ye yaqeen ho gaya ke jahan haq per hone ke​

sabab uske ghar walon ne use chhora aur yahan in buzarg ke aal ne inhen chhora​

younhi haq per hone waalon ke khilaf hi hona hai aksariyat ko ab wo buzarg iski​

shaadi ki baat karta to ye bolta ke mujhe intizar hai eik haqparast hasti ka​

warna meri ye zindagi mein apne in azeez dost kitaabon ke naam karta hoon​

​

ab panjgaana namaz aur QURAN ki tilawat ke baad din raat​

kitaaben parhna bana kaam Fawwad ka​

​

rehta hai jo har nigaah se hijaabon mein​

har wo raaz dikh jaata hai kitaabon mein​

​

Fawwad ki tarah ALLAH humen bhi na insaafi​

jaahil hukmuraanon ki pairvi buraaiy nafarmaani​

be adabi haq ki khilaf warzi taqleed se bachaaye hidayat e haq​

naseeb farmaae Aameen​

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aur phir chaahe dunya ka har fard humaare khilaf hi kyun na ho jaaye hum​

HAQ ko naa chhoren Aameen​

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@zoonia @Bela @Shizuka @faari @Fahadd @Prince_Farry @Innocent Cat @Naughty Cat @Qawareer @Dawn​

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[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Hunhhh @Rubi and @saviou kahani per comments to
diye hi nahin

 

[Rubi]

Hunhhh @Rubi and @saviou kahani per comments to
diye hi nahin

diya toh mainne
achi likhi hy
Best Of Luck

 

[Lost Passenger]

Assalam o ALaikum​

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Jis tara aksar manazir daikh k shayri dimagh may aati hay aur barmala insan koi na koi Shaer parhta hay..​

Issi tara kuch log aik manzar pe poori kahani tarteeb daine ka hunar bhi rakhte hain..yahan har hafte aik image diya jaayega us pe sab ko Kuch na Kuch likhna hoga par kahani ki soorat may hona chahiye jo ussi manzar k mutabiq ho....(ye bilkul aisa hoga k aik jaamid image may apne alfaz se aise dikhana hay k parhne waale k dimagh may wo manzar harkat karey ,,​

jis k alfaz ziada pur asar hon gaye aur parh k ziada maza aayega wohi us week ka winner hoga/gi)​

AUr susti ya nakhrey dikhane ki koi zarurat nhi ​

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image pe aap kuch bhi likh sakte hain apni marzi se,, chahey to tanz-o-mazah ho ya sanjeeda sab chalega....​

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Ye rha ab ka manzar is pe aapko story bnanai hay!​

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RULES:​

1. Manzar likhne se pehle uska Mozu (title)bhi bnayain gaye,,, Mozu jitna pur kashish ho manzar utna hi jaandar lagega... ​

2, poori kahani sirf Urdu(language not font) may ho....​

3. Kahani submit karwane ki last date 5th January 2013 hay INSHAALLAH!​

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4. Sab apni apni kahani issi thread may share karain gaye aur apni khanai k saath Ye image bhi post karain gaye!​

• jiski kahani n title ziada achi hogi unhe award diya jaayega with a lot of appreciation

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MAzeed details and references k liye ye visit karain​

http://www.tafrehmela.com/threads/aapka-manzar-aapki-kahani-3-march-2012-to-10-march-2012.189028/​

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GU Luck ​

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Buhat achi thread aur silsika hoorain, laikin afsos keh maloom nahi'n kyoo'n aajkal bilkul mood hi nahi'n likhney ka aakhri tehreer jo share ki wo bhi koi tehreer nahi'n bus aisey hi samander kinarey baith ker jo dil mai'n aaya likh dala, phir bhi koshish kroo'n ga, apni duaoo'n mai'n apney bhai ko shamil kerna na bholna,Allah tumhai'n hamaisha khush aur salamet rakhey,
Ameen

 

[saviou]

Hunhhh @Rubi and @saviou kahani per comments to
diye hi nahin

parh ke denge jee in sha Allah

 

[Hoorain]

Buhat achi thread aur silsika hoorain, laikin afsos keh maloom nahi'n kyoo'n aajkal bilkul mood hi nahi'n likhney ka aakhri tehreer jo share ki wo bhi koi tehreer nahi'n bus aisey hi samander kinarey baith ker jo dil mai'n aaya likh dala, phir bhi koshish kroo'n ga, apni duaoo'n mai'n apney bhai ko shamil kerna na bholna,Allah tumhai'n hamaisha khush aur salamet rakhey,
Ameen

SUM AAMEEN
we'll be honored to have ur sharing here!
INSHAALALH zarur koshish kariyega
Stay BLessed

par apa k mood ko kia hua?

 

[Lost Passenger]

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Assalaamu alaikum TM doston mujhe kahani​

likhna to nahin aata lekin aaj @hoorain behna ke​

lagae thread aur diye huwe manzar per mere likhne​

ka dil huwa so as a writer mujhe likhna to nahin aaya​

magar Hoorain behna ki dosti me hum ne koshish kar li ​

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umeed hai ke INSHA'ALLAH pasand aayega agar​

pasand kam hi aaya to INSHA'ALLAH eik achha pegham​

subhi ko naseeb hoga here it is​

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Mere Kitaab mere saathi​

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Apne bare bhai se behes karta Fawwad bol raha hai ke​

dekhen bhai jan jin ashkhaas ka aap tazkira kar rahe hain​

bila shuba wo baaqi muamlaat me theek hongen lekin nazariya e ISLAM​

unka bilkul bhi theek nahin​

Jawwad: chote miyan agar is tarah se karne lage to tumhen​

aaj ki tareekh mein koi bhi aisa aalim nahin milega jisme ayeb na ho​

ayeb to har bande mein hota hai​

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ji pyare bhai bilkul sahi farmaya lekin hum unke ayeb ko sahi​

keh kar unke gunahgaari ka hissa kyun banen ??​

hum unke sahi cheez ko sahi ghalat ko ghalat maan kar baat ko​

theek tarah samajh sakte hain naa !!​

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tum to mujh se is tarah baat kar rahe ho jese tumhare paas ilm ka​

khazana hai aur tumhen sub pata hai kab kahan sahi aur ghalat hai​

nahin bhai ilm ka khazana hai to nahin per waada hai INSHA'ALLAH kisi din​

itna ilm zaroor hoga..ke apne kahe huwe ko be ayeb kutub se saabit kar sakun​

haan haan jab aisa karoge tab baat karengen mujhe to khushi hogi tumhare taraqqi se​

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Fawwad wo insaan jo kabhi ghalti karta aur bachna chahta to use​

ghar me sabaq milta ke jo ghalat hai wo ghalat hai​

lekin junhi uski umer barhti gaiy so usne jaana ke ye sabaq​

dena aur is per amal karna har koi bachpan tak hi mehdood rakhta hai​

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use apne ird gird eik bhi aisa shakhs nahin mila jiske soch se wo sehmat ho​

yehi nuqta wajah bani uske kitaab parhne tehreer likhne ghazal likhne ki​

use kitaabon mein eik aisi dunya mili jise wo insaanon mein dhoondta tha​

jab wo kitaabon ki dunya mein magan huwa so aise lagne laga ab kisi ke​

aage bhi sach kehna asaan hai per wo is baat se bekhabar tha ke​

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Jahan me sabab e ghuflat se dilon me chahat nahin rehti​

insaan ko apne KHUDA se bhi mohabbat nahin rehti​

hai is qadar jhoot phela aaj ki dunya mein Chiragh​

humare darmyan haqeeqat bhi haqeeqat nahin rehti​

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pas wo alag alag kutub se hasil kiye gaye ilm ki bunyad per eik fatwe​

ke gharz se apne masjid ke aalim ke paas gaya so use aalim ne taal diya​

jiski wajah use baad me pata chali ke ye fatwa unke maslak ke khilaf chala jaata​

wo heirati huwa ke " Mazhab " aaj tak suna hai jiske mutaliq fatwa maanga mene​

ab ye maslak kya shay hai ?? phir us ne socha​

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hai bach paaya jo dayar e kutub se​

nahin jahan mein aisa raaz koi​

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ab Fawwad ne apne jawaani ke daur hi me apni khudi ko apne imaan ko​

nazar o amal e bad e dunya se bachaane ke liye kutub ka sahara liya​

eik din wo betha apne ghar pe bola mein soch raha hoon ISLAM ke muazu per​

khud se koi kitab likhun..​

itne me uske abbu ji bole achha likh lena achhi baat hogi lekin pehle ye to bataao​

ISLAM ke IMAM E A'AZAM koun the ??​

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Fawwad bina ek lamhe ke intizar ke bol para ALLAH ke pyare nabi alaehe salam​

to uske abbu bole ji ji wo to hain magar Imam Abu Hanifa Imam Malik Imam Hanbal​

Imam Shafaiy RAHEMULLAH alaehem me se afzal koun se the ??​

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Fawwad kuch waqt sochne ke baad..abbu ji jahaan tak mera ilm hai chaaron aaiyma e karam​

eik barabar the in alfaaz se behes barhti gaiy aur ta aakhir uske abbu ji bole​

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ae meri khabees aulad kya tu ghair muqallid ban betha hai ??​

Fawwad ji abbu agar mere haq bolne parhne samajhne likhne ko aap ghair muqallid​

ka naam dete ho to theek hai wagarna mein hanafi bhi hun maliki bhi hun shafaiy bhi hun hanbali bhi hun​

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Fawwad ke ghar walon ne jab ye dekha ke Fawwad ke rehen sehen khaane peene hatta ke​

namaz ke tareeqe mein bohot bari tabdeeli aa chuki hai use ghar waalon ne use samjhana chaha ke​

aap ye harkaten chorh do aur pehle ki tarah ban jaao wo bola​

hargiz nahin mere azeezon balke aap loug ye syasi tehreek ka saath aur eik Imam ko​

thaam kar rakhna chorh do Fawwad ki haqparasti uske ghar waalon ke nazar mein zidd thi​

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eik aisi zidd jo ilaaqe bhar mein uske ghar waalon ko badnaam kar sakti thi theek is hi soch se​

wo Fawwad ko apne ghar se nikaal kar eik aur shehr rawana kar dete hain us shehr mein​

uske abbu ji ke door ke rishtedaar the jo intihaiy buzarg ho chuke the aur unhen ghar ke kaam kaaj ke liye​

eik Fawwad jese bande ki zarurat thi ab Fawwad unke ghar apne aise doston ke saath pohncha jo ke​

un do buzargaan ki bachi kuchi zindagi mein bhi bari tabdeeli laaya unhen din raat​

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tarz e du'a se le kar namaaz tak ke liye alag alag duaaen batata rehta Fawwad..Fawwad ke​

ilm o meher se wo bhi bare khush the eik din huwa youn ke us buzarg ki shareek e hayat​

ka shadeed bimari ke sabab intiqaal huwa ab ye ghar us buzarg ko saanp ki tarah dasne laga​

aur tanhaiy use uski maut se badtar lagne lagi yahaan Fawwad ne mukammal saath dene ki koshish ki​

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aur us buzarg ki khidmat me apna khoob waqt lagaya shab o rouz use waqiyaat sunata raha uski khidmat karta raha​

wo bhi Fawwad ko eik humraz shakhsiyat jaante huwe bol pare ke mere bhi 3 bache hain​

do suraj jese bete aur eik chaand si beti per unke waliden ka saath unhen tab tak raas raha​

jab tak unke waliden ne unhen parhaya aur kama kar khilaya​

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phir kuch syasi doston ke wajeh se syasat ka hissa eik bhai ko kya mila usne us hi ghar me​

apni behen biha di Fawwad unki baat kaat'te huwe kya ye sub aapki raza mandi se huwa ??​

raza mandi to darkinar bete mujhe ilm tak na tha mein apni shareek e hayat ke saath​

gaanv gaya huwa tha wahaan mere behnowi shadeed bimar the unki ayadat ko​

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laut kar dekha ke jamhuri syasat ke jis paleet daldal se mein apne bachon ko​

bachaana chahta tha us daldal ko shehed ka neher jaante huwe mere bache​

usme bare shouq se kood pare..Fawwad:aur aapka doosra beta ??​

jab mene unpe zour diya ke mein in corrupt tehreekon ke khilaf hoon tum bhi​

ye kaam chorh do to bara beta bola yehi tehreek mujhe eik bangla aur car de chuki hai​

jinme aapke bakwas se door me rehne ja raha hoon aur chote ne bhi uske saath haami bhari​

meri bad bakhti thi jo mujhe aise aulaad naseeb huwe​

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badbakht aap nahin aap to sahih raah per hone ka shukr ada karen​

bad bakht to aapke aulaad hain jinhen HAQ dikh to raha hai magar DULAT se kam​

jaante hain use​

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buzarg ko sahara dete huwe Fawwad ne ye kalimat kahe phir kamre se nikal kar​

dubara apne kitaabon ke janib gaya aur khud ko bolne laga​

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ek bhi insan aisa na mila zindagi mein​

ho jis ki khushi HAQ ke bulandi mein​

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aaj Fawwad shadeed sadme mein tha kyunke jese afsaane kahani usne parhe sune the​

aaj unki haqeeqat mein us ne deikh liya use ye yaqeen ho gaya ke jahan haq per hone ke​

sabab uske ghar walon ne use chhora aur yahan in buzarg ke aal ne inhen chhora​

younhi haq per hone waalon ke khilaf hi hona hai aksariyat ko ab wo buzarg iski​

shaadi ki baat karta to ye bolta ke mujhe intizar hai eik haqparast hasti ka​

warna meri ye zindagi mein apne in azeez dost kitaabon ke naam karta hoon​

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ab panjgaana namaz aur QURAN ki tilawat ke baad din raat​

kitaaben parhna bana kaam Fawwad ka​

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rehta hai jo har nigaah se hijaabon mein​

har wo raaz dikh jaata hai kitaabon mein​

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Fawwad ki tarah ALLAH humen bhi na insaafi​

jaahil hukmuraanon ki pairvi buraaiy nafarmaani​

be adabi haq ki khilaf warzi taqleed se bachaaye hidayat e haq​

naseeb farmaae Aameen​

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aur phir chaahe dunya ka har fard humaare khilaf hi kyun na ho jaaye hum​

HAQ ko naa chhoren Aameen​

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@zoonia @Bela @Shizuka @faari @Fahadd @Prince_Farry @Innocent Cat @Naughty Cat @Qawareer @Dawn​

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Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, Buhat achi kawish hey mairey bhai, likhtey raha kroaur hamarey liye share kertey raha kro,Allah tumhai'n kamyab fermaye aur hamaisha khush aur salamet rakhey,Ameen

 

[Nadaan_Shazie]

hmmmmm nice very interesting story

 

[Lost Passenger]

SUM AAMEEN
we'll be honored to have ur sharing here!
INSHAALALH zarur koshish kariyega
Stay BLessed

par apa k mood ko kia hua?

Kooi khas nahi'n bus kuch logoo'n sey aisi taklief zaror ponhchi hey jis sey mujhey buhat dukh huwa hey aur jub kabhi aisa hota hey tu phir mujhey kuch waqt lagta hey khud ko sambhalney key liye.

 

[Hoorain]

Kooi khas nahi'n bus kuch logoo'n sey aisi taklief zaror ponhchi hey jis sey mujhey buhat dukh huwa hey aur jub kabhi aisa hota hey tu phir mujhey kuch waqt lagta hey khud ko sambhalney key liye.

hmm ALLAH tala apaki madad farmayain AAMEEN