koi baat nahi behna abhi to apne parh liya aur pasand bhi kiya bohot shukriyaWalikum salam wrwb
amazing such a nice poetry
mashallah bohot hi acha lekhti hai aap
os time main nahe ti but abi to ho
thank you so much for this beautiful poetry to share with us
mashaAllah bahot umda likha aapne janab shukriya for sharingAssalamu Alaykum Wrwb
doston kaise hian aap sab inshaAllah theek honge
ye nazm hamne ek saal pehle contest k liye likhe the lekin wo contest ka kuch result aaya hi nahi
bahre haal is contest me hissa lene aur poetry likhne k liye hame sana ne kaafi huasla diya tha aur hamne unhi k liye ye nazm bhi likhe the aur unhi ko dedicate bhi kiye the
to phir se apke samne ye nazm hazir e khidmat hai
http://www.tafrehmela.com/tms-contest/130513-your-own-poetry-contest-3.html
Ankhon me kayi khwahishen kayi khwabon ko sameti hai wo
Har Nayee subah nayee hasraten leke uthti hai wo
Apni hi duniya me gumsum khoyee rehti hai
kabhi hasti to kabhi roti to kabhi khush hoti hai wo
dekh kar isko har koi deewana war kehta hai
mere khwabon mere khayalon ki tabeer hai wo
Sheeshe ka dil liye in pattharon ki basti me
Har ek ka zakhm liye chup chaap sehti hai wo
Na kisi ka dard kisi k liye na kisi k liye hai pyar yahan
Deta har koi zakhmon pe zakhm har ek ka tuta sansar yahan
Har koi yahan deta hai yahan taleem e masawat
Hain insano ki shakl me darinde sare,har koi khonkhwar yahan
Na bachon pe shafaqqat na badon ki izzat
Taalim to aala hai lekin aqlaq kahan
Iss bharii duniya me sab paraye hain yahan
Na mera hai koi yehi kehti hai wo
Is basti se door khawabaon ki nagri me
Khwahishon ke shajr tale, Hasraton ke bagiche me
Kisi Ajnabi k intezar mein hai wo umeedwaar
Jo kare khushion ki barsat jo de dher sara pyar
Nasir duago hai uski hasrat ho puri khwab hon sache
Mile jahan ki har khushi jiski taalib hai wo
summa AameenUmdaaaaaaaaaaah poetry
i can neva forget ur poetry az a great gift for me
Shukran chaagh uncle
stay blessed n happy alwayz
Nasir duago hai uski hasrat ho puri khwab hon sache
Mile jahan ki har khushi jiski taalib hai wo
Ameen
same thing
Bohat KhOob..!
Last pOetry ki terah yah bhi Bohat acha likha aap nay MagEr Aak Jagha main Comfuse hO gie hOn.
Na kisi ka dard kisi k liye na kisi k liye hai pyar yahan
Deta har koi zakhmon pe zakhm har ek ka tuta sansar yahan
Har koi yahan deta hai yahan taleem e masawat
Hain insano ki shakl me darinde sare,har koi khonkhwar yahan
Na bachon pe shafaqqat na badon ki izzat
Taalim to aala hai lekin aqlaq kahan
Yah shair Yahan Fit nahi hOtay..! cuz baat hO rahe hay Larki ki, us k KhuwabOn aur majboryon Ki. Laken Majbori ko aap nay Social point of view se Likh dia hay. mUjhay Yahan aisa laga JaisE society K kise Bigrtay Pehlu ko pOintout kia hay.
Baqi Jahan "woh woh" hay wOh bOhat acha likha. lolzzz
Keep it Up.
Sure InshALLAH
summa Aameen
shukriya ki koi baat nahi mohtarma
bas khush rahen aur hamare liye bhi dua karte rahen
wOh tu main samjh gie ThE K Larki ki MajboryOn sE related hi Likha gya hay But is sE start se Jo tasalsul shUro hua wOrds n Feelings wOh tOut gya aur ak dum se aisay Laga Jaise agay New Topic pE baat shUro ho gIe hay.
bohot bohot shukriya mohtarma
ye ek saal se zyada hogaya likh kar to tab kya tha dimagh me theek se yaad nahi
lekin yahan par ek ladki ke khwabon par hi baat ho rahi hai aur uske ird gird hone wale cheezon par bhi nazar dali gayi hai jaise khud ghar ka mahol kabhi aisa hota hai ke kisi ke dil me kisi k liye pyar nahi dikhta aur insan se khud ko dareendgi ki taraf lejate hain aur yehi se muashre ka bigad bhi shuru hota hai to ek tarah se ye ek ladki ke khwab uske hasrat aur uski khwahishon se jude cheezen hi lagi hame
aur apne is par itna gaur kiya hame bohot khsuhi huyi
aage bhi tashee karte rahen hamari
jazakallah
wOh tu main samjh gie ThE K Larki ki MajboryOn sE related hi Likha gya hay But is sE start se Jo tasalsul shUro hua wOrds n Feelings wOh tOut gya aur ak dum se aisay Laga Jaise agay New Topic pE baat shUro ho gIe hay.
Anyways Aap nay bOhat acha likha aisay hi Likhtay rahain.