hahah tauba hay kinne kachu maasar hoapka bhai hun apke naqhse par chalunga na
ji my tayyar hu ap signal du phir duadna shuru
hahah tauba hay kinne kachu maasar hoapka bhai hun apke naqhse par chalunga na
ji my tayyar hu ap signal du phir duadna shuru
ye kachu maasar ki honda ehahah tauba hay kinne kachu maasar ho
shukria bhaaiBhout khoub Poetry hai
kia haal hi mery gaon ka
pipal ki thandi chhaon ka
sharmili shokh nighahon ka,
un naz bhari adaon ka
o story bhi achi hai read ker k feel hota hai k gaon my hon dil kerta hai k 2, 4 months k lee gaon chutian bitany chala jaon
TOpppppppppp secret
array nhi yr wo to mazaqan kaha tha apki story to maine puri read ki hai yaqin nhi to story ke beech main se kuch b poch lomatlab ap sirf ek line par ke comment karte hu
bade bhai ap bul rahe hu tu apki baat par yaqeen hyarray nhi yr wo to mazaqan kaha tha apki story to maine puri read ki hai yaqin nhi to story ke beech main se kuch b poch lo
shukria g du chunke rakha tha ek fit hui tu wahi share kia[DOUBLEPOST=1347183716][/DOUBLEPOST]walaikumsalamwaah nazam toh bahut chun k nikali ae shyd aur kahani b bahut achi aebest of luck !
shukria g apki b achi hy thuri lambi hy[DOUBLEPOST=1347183790][/DOUBLEPOST]oye hoye muslim paa g to chopay rustam niklay.....
nice story muslim...best of luck chotay bacchay
bht shukria bhaaiwonderful....., muslim bhai..
mashaAllah bohat behtreen andaaz maen aapne gaun ki manzar kashi ki hai
well done
bht shukriaZaberdast...! Mash'Allah bohat acha likha hay.
Aap ne shyed First Time Koi urdu Tahreer likhi hay. Shairy bohat ache lagi kyun ke us main Gaon k Traditional Atmosphere ko biyan kia giya hay..! aur Tasveer ke Manzar Kashi bohat ache ke hay sabhe Manazir ko Catch kia hay..! Admirable Effort.
Best of Luck...!
zaruru parna bhaai[DOUBLEPOST=1347184101][/DOUBLEPOST]Wa'alaikumussalaam wrwb bro...
itni lambi...fursat mei parh ke comment karonga inshaAllah..
All the best
aap yaqeen ko shak me badalre :confused:choro yr apko to already yaqin haina mujh pe
phir zar0rat hi kya beech ki story sunane ki
or ap apni oper wali bat se mukar rhezaruru parna bhaai[DOUBLEPOST=1347184101][/DOUBLEPOST]
aap yaqeen ko shak me badalre :confused:
ji pic par hi tu manzarkashi ki hy kiu apko ny lagta kia?Kia aapne gaun k pic k mutabiq kahani likhe hain ?
jab koi apne gaon jata hain tu bht enjoy karta hain aur waha k logo mehman nawazi b bht ache se karte hain
aapko b chuttio me apne gaun jana chahiye
anyways bht pyari kahani ti parh kar bht acha laga
bhaai mukar tu ny raha but phir bhi insaan huor ap apni oper wali bat se mukar rhe
shukria bhaai[DOUBLEPOST=1347184498][/DOUBLEPOST]Good Try and beautiful story
Best of Luck
hehe g bhaaihan to main b insan hi hon bhool b sakta hon parhi hoi baaten
shukria bhaiWalekum Assalam wrwb Bohot zabardast
Masha'ALLAH Muslim Bhai aapne bohot achi tarah se manzar nigaari ko pesh kiya hai
All d Best
shukria bhai chuti si koshish ku pasand krne k lie aur hausla afzai k liebohit hi acha likha hay bhai ap nay or gher bethy bethy gaaon ki yadain taza ker di ,, or sub ko bachpan main wapis ley gaiy kuch time kay liy ,, thanx,, bhai jaan ,
janab bohit hi achi koshish hay or mujy ap ki nazam bohit hi achi lagi,, aainda bhi likhty rehain bohit power hay ap kay qalam main,,shukria bhai chuti si koshish ku pasand krne k lie aur hausla afzai k lie
bht shukriajanab bohit hi achi koshish hay or mujy ap ki nazam bohit hi achi lagi,, aainda bhi likhty rehain bohit power hay ap kay qalam main,,
shukriaBohut acha likha hai
Bhai se bohut kisse sune hain waqai village ki to har bat he suhni lati hai waise mai kabhi nhi gai but jane ka bohut shoq hai.
kiya kerain perdese main ,, time nikalana bera hi mushkal hota hay ,, phir bhi ,kabhi kabhi online aaing,bht shukria
bhaai tahreer tu my ne khud likhi hy but nazm my ne chun k share kia hy
ap bht din baad aye hu shayd busy hunge[DOUBLEPOST=1347213243][/DOUBLEPOST]
shukria
my gaya hun gaun aur shahar se usku bht behtar bi paya hun aur idar saudi me b my koi bade shahar me ny hun balke ye b ek gaun ya phir town keh sakte ap