Kiya Khoya ... Kiya Paaya?

shehr-e-tanhayi

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Aslaam O Allaykum

2016 khatam honay ko hai to socha k kyun na guzrtay saal ki yaadoN ka piTaara khola jaaey aur kuch aisa kiya jaaey k jis se naa sirf humari yaad taaza ho sakay balkay hum usay yahaN sab k sath share bhi kar sakeiN kyunkay khushi banTnay se baRhti aur Ghum banTnay se kam hota hai.

To karna sirf yeh hai k aap ne 1 tehreer likhni hai jis mein 2016 mein kuch paanay ya khonay ko qalmband karna hai. Tehreer mein sirf maadi ashiyaa ka hi nahi , apnay ehsasaat k paanay ya khonay ka bhi zikar kiya ja sakta hai... gharzkay intkhaab aap ka apna hai k aap ki nazar mein paana ya khona kiya hai... humein to aap k alfaaz k chunaao se matlab hai aur aap ka andaaz e tehreer dekhnay k sath sath aap k khyalaat se waqfiyat bhi chahtay haiN.
Aik baat aur....
Sab hissa le saktay haiN Admins & Mods samait.... balkay sab k liay laazim hai hissa lena.
Inaam bhi milay ga aur award bhi (judge ka naam khufiya rakha gaya hai filhaal )
Last date 15 January 2017 hai.


السلام و علیکم
2016

ختم ہونے کو ہے تو سوچا کہ کیوں نہ گزرتے سال کی یادوں کا پٹارا کھولا جائے اور کچھ ایسا کیا جائے کہ جس
سے نہ صرف ہماری یاد تازہ ہو سکے بلکہ ہم اسے یہاں سب کے ساتھ شئیر بھی کر سکیں کیونکہ خوشی بانٹنے سے بڑھتی اور غم بانٹنے سے کم ہوتا ہے۔
تو کرنا صرف یہ ہے کہ آپ نے ایک تحریر لکھنی ہے جس میں گزرتے سال میں کچھ کھونے یا کچھ پانے کو قلمبند کرنا ہے۔ تحریر میں صرف مادی اشیا کا ہی نہیں ، اپنے احساسات کے پانے ےا کھونے کا بھی ذکر کیا جا سکتا ہے۔
غرضیکہ انتخاب آپ کا اپنا ہے کہ آپ کی نظر میں کھونا یا پانا کیا ہے۔ ہمیں تو آپ کے الفاظ کے چناو سے مطلب ہے اور آپ کا اندازِ تحریر دیکھنے کے ساتھ ساتھ آپ کے خیالات سے واقفیت بھی چاہتے ہیں۔
ایک بات اور
سب حصہ لے سکتے ہیں ایڈمنز اور موڈریٹرز سمیت۔۔۔۔ بلکہ سب کے لئے لازمی ہے حصہ لینا۔

انعام بھی ملے گا اور ایوارڈ بھی لیکن جج کا نام فی الحال خفیہ رکھا گیا ہے۔
آخری تاریخ 15 جنوری 2017 ہے۔

 
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shehr-e-tanhayi

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Untamed-Heart

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Wa alaikum Assalam @shehr-e-tanhayi sisoo :)

Abhi chand hi lamhaat pehly Mere Masoom sy Dil main apne bachkaana pan ko mehsoos karte hue aik khwahish ne janam liya tha keh be-Saropa guftagoo se Ahbaab e Tafreeh Mela ko barA'ngeekhta kiya jaye yeh khwahish pehly bhi uthi thi magar Ahbaab e Tafreeh Mela ki khush Qismati aarhay aati rahi :p

Magar agly hi lamhy Kiya paya, kiya Khoya ke unwaan se jaari hone wali is Larhi main Dil ki bharhaas nikaalne ka Moqa faraham kar ke Shehr e Tanhai ne meri behen hone ka haq ada kar dia :p

Ibtidaa-e-Laghwait kiya honi chahiye ? Maadi ya ghair maadi ashyaa par kis tarah moqoof kiya jaye ?
Gohar-e-Bakwaas ki ibtidaa kahaa'N se ki jaye pehly socha keh chand dosto'N ko likhne ka moqa diya jaye aur pher unki Gulafshaaniyo'N ko naqal kiya jaye pher khayal aaya keh

zubaan e Ghair se kiya sharh-e-aarzo karte

Dosro'N ke khayalat ko musta'aar lene sy behtar khud hi sar khapaya jaye :)

Meri is bakwas ko dar-khor-e-etenaa samajhte hue agar pasand kar ke mera girf ghera tang karne ki koshish karo to apne bachao ki munasibat se yaad rakhiye keh yeh meri ekhtiraa-e-zehen nahi balkeh media se hasil shuda maloomat hain aur yeh Haqeeqat afshaani zubaan e ghair ka karishma samjh kar mera daaman chorh diya jaye

Sab se pehly Watan e Azeez ke khazano'N ko khoya offshore companies ki shakal main
Deen e Muhammadi ko khoya Dunya ki Muhabbat main
Muhabbat e Jahaa'N ko khoya wasaail e barqi ashyaa
yeh samjhana zaroori samjhta hoon
Mere kehne ka matlab keh Jahaa'N mulaqaat zaroori thi ab Cell phone se apne meboob dostoN aur reshtedaro'N ki shaklain dekhne ko nahi milti
TV par tips dekhne ko tarjeeh de kar pur fazaa maqaam par jaa kar wakt bitana khoya
akhlaaqiaat ko khoya family ke darmiyaan be hayaai ki filmain dekh kar
Jazbaat e Jihaad ko khoya american khayalat, bayanaat or filmain dekh dekh kar
shagufta khayali o shaista goi ko khoya taleemat e Islaami se door reh kar
Insaaf ko khoya zubaan e gung ki waja se eteraaf e haqeeqat se chashamposhi kar ke
Wazeeristan ke mehboob awam ki muhabbato'N ko khoya american jhoot ka dandoora peet kar
Mulki salmiat ko khoya drone ki ijazat de kar apne watan ke masoom awam ko marwane ka licence de kar
zaeef Maa Baap ki khidmat ke mawaqe ke awqaat facebook ko de kar unki muhabbat ko khoya
sukoon e qalb ko khoya Quraan e Pak ki tilawat ko tark kar ke
hum ne to khoya hi khoya hai

paya to kiya paaya

Chooro'N or Lutairo'N ko paya agar hamari chorhi aur loot maar ko sanat ka darja diya jae to yeh dunya ki wahid field hogi jis main hum pehly number par hongy aur is shobay ki taraqqi ke imkanaat 101% roshan hain aur kaseer zar e mubadila hasil kiya ja sakta hai

Paaya to apne aap ko us maqaam par paya jahaa'N se chalne ki ibtidaa ki thi
Bijli paani gais ki ghair mojoodgi main khud ko pathar ke zamaane main paya
Husool e rizq ki talaash main insaano'N ka shikaar karte hue khud ko paya
Haqeeat se mu morhne or Lab e khamosh par apne anso'on ko raqs karte hue paya
Dast e Shafqat ko na paid paya
Guftaar e khalqat se dil e masoom ko rond'te hue paaya
haya ke bandhano'N ko sar e raah toot'ty hue paya
nigaaho'n ko behayaai ke manaazir se dast o grebaa'N paaya
khushiyo'N ko aag lagaty apno'N ko paaya

Allah ko Buhut qareeb paya mgr Allah ki Raza ko Khoya

Aakhir main Dua hai Rabb e Kareem apne Fazl o karam se Hum sab par apni Rehmato'N barkato'N or nemato'N ka nuzool farmaye aur hum se raazi ho jaye aur hamary sath rehem wala maamla farmaye Aameen
 

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Tehreer main Ghaltiyaa'N darj zail hain :p

1-Ibtidaa-e-Lughat kiya hona chahiye ?
2-Meri is bakwas ko dar-khor-e-etenaa samajhte hue agar pasand kar ke mere gird ghaira tang karne ki koshish

mazeed aap log parh kar zaroor bataiye
 

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Wa alaikum Assalam @shehr-e-tanhayi sisoo :)

Abhi chand hi lamhaat pehly Mere Masoom sy Dil main apne bachkaana pan ko mehsoos karte hue aik khwahish ne janam liya tha keh be-Saropa guftagoo se Ahbaab e Tafreeh Mela ko barA'ngeekhta kiya jaye yeh khwahish pehly bhi uthi thi magar Ahbaab e Tafreeh Mela ki khush Qismati aarhay aati rahi :p

Magar agly hi lamhy Kiya paya, kiya Khoya ke unwaan se jaari hone wali is Larhi main Dil ki bharhaas nikaalne ka Moqa faraham kar ke Shehr e Tanhai ne meri behen hone ka haq ada kar dia :p

Ibtidaa-e-Laghwait kiya honi chahiye ? Maadi ya ghair maadi ashyaa par kis tarah moqoof kiya jaye ?
Gohar-e-Bakwaas ki ibtidaa kahaa'N se ki jaye pehly socha keh chand dosto'N ko likhne ka moqa diya jaye aur pher unki Gulafshaaniyo'N ko naqal kiya jaye pher khayal aaya keh

zubaan e Ghair se kiya sharh-e-aarzo karte

Dosro'N ke khayalat ko musta'aar lene sy behtar khud hi sar khapaya jaye :)

Meri is bakwas ko dar-khor-e-etenaa samajhte hue agar pasand kar ke mera girf ghera tang karne ki koshish karo to apne bachao ki munasibat se yaad rakhiye keh yeh meri ekhtiraa-e-zehen nahi balkeh media se hasil shuda maloomat hain aur yeh Haqeeqat afshaani zubaan e ghair ka karishma samjh kar mera daaman chorh diya jaye

Sab se pehly Watan e Azeez ke khazano'N ko khoya offshore companies ki shakal main
Deen e Muhammadi ko khoya Dunya ki Muhabbat main
Muhabbat e Jahaa'N ko khoya wasaail e barqi ashyaa
yeh samjhana zaroori samjhta hoon
Mere kehne ka matlab keh Jahaa'N mulaqaat zaroori thi ab Cell phone se apne meboob dostoN aur reshtedaro'N ki shaklain dekhne ko nahi milti
TV par tips dekhne ko tarjeeh de kar pur fazaa maqaam par jaa kar wakt bitana khoya
akhlaaqiaat ko khoya family ke darmiyaan be hayaai ki filmain dekh kar
Jazbaat e Jihaad ko khoya american khayalat, bayanaat or filmain dekh dekh kar
shagufta khayali o shaista goi ko khoya taleemat e Islaami se door reh kar
Insaaf ko khoya zubaan e gung ki waja se eteraaf e haqeeqat se chashamposhi kar ke
Wazeeristan ke mehboob awam ki muhabbato'N ko khoya american jhoot ka dandoora peet kar
Mulki salmiat ko khoya drone ki ijazat de kar apne watan ke masoom awam ko marwane ka licence de kar
zaeef Maa Baap ki khidmat ke mawaqe ke awqaat facebook ko de kar unki muhabbat ko khoya
sukoon e qalb ko khoya Quraan e Pak ki tilawat ko tark kar ke
hum ne to khoya hi khoya hai

paya to kiya paaya

Chooro'N or Lutairo'N ko paya agar hamari chorhi aur loot maar ko sanat ka darja diya jae to yeh dunya ki wahid field hogi jis main hum pehly number par hongy aur is shobay ki taraqqi ke imkanaat 101% roshan hain aur kaseer zar e mubadila hasil kiya ja sakta hai

Paaya to apne aap ko us maqaam par paya jahaa'N se chalne ki ibtidaa ki thi
Bijli paani gais ki ghair mojoodgi main khud ko pathar ke zamaane main paya
Husool e rizq ki talaash main insaano'N ka shikaar karte hue khud ko paya
Haqeeat se mu morhne or Lab e khamosh par apne anso'on ko raqs karte hue paya
Dast e Shafqat ko na paid paya
Guftaar e khalqat se dil e masoom ko rond'te hue paaya
haya ke bandhano'N ko sar e raah toot'ty hue paya
nigaaho'n ko behayaai ke manaazir se dast o grebaa'N paaya
khushiyo'N ko aag lagaty apno'N ko paaya

Allah ko Buhut qareeb paya mgr Allah ki Raza ko Khoya

Aakhir main Dua hai Rabb e Kareem apne Fazl o karam se Hum sab par apni Rehmato'N barkato'N or nemato'N ka nuzool farmaye aur hum se raazi ho jaye aur hamary sath rehem wala maamla farmaye Aameen
Muttalib Bhai.. yeh to cheating hui naa hamare sath :(
aap aisey likhen gee to HUM bachy jo apna mud'aa biyaan karney k liye alfaaz ki talash me marey marey phir rahy hen aap ki is tehreer ke baad to apney chunaao par chanaab ka pani hi dal saken ge naa :(




Bahut aala tehreer he wese.. Khush rehiye :)
 

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Mujh jaisey tif e maktab ko aap jaisey urdu Dano ki terha apney alfaaz aur andaaz e biyaan par itni qudrat to nahi ke apni tehreer se aap ke dil ko choo sakon
magar kuch tooty phooty alfaaz paish e nazar hen.waseela nazam ko hi banaya ke ke muej yehi aata he :p.. pasand naa bhi aaen to daad zaroor dijiye gaa himmat dikhaney ke liye :p




@Don @RedRose64 @saviou @Shiraz-Khan @AnadiL @Bird-Of-Paradise @DiLkash @shehr-e-tanhayi
@Ahmad-Hasan @fahadhassan @Umm-e-ahmad
@Abidi @Aayat @Aina_ @Armaghankhan @Angel_A @Ajnabhi @-Anna- @*Arshia* @Aks_ @Aaidah @Aizaa
@amerzish_malik @Arz0o @Arzoomehak @Asheer @Atif-adi @Awadiya @Aaylaaaaa @Ayesha-Ali @Afnan_ @A7if @Aliean
@Adorable_Pari @Awesome_Sunny @Ajnabee_Hoon
@Babar-Azam @Blue-Black @Bela @Brilliant_Boy @Binte_Hawwa @bilal_ishaq_786 @baba-cakes @Banjara_
@chai-mein-biscuit @CuTe_HiNa @Cheeky @Charming_Deep @colgatepak @Catastrophe @Chai- mein-biscut
@Danee @Dua001 @DevilJin @Dua_ @Dreamy Boy @dur-e-shawar @diya. @DeMon- @Diya_noor @Dil-Wale @duaabatool
@Eshal-Hoor @errorsss @Elif @Faiz4lyf @Flower_Flora @Fizaali @Fatima- @France-Boy
@genuine @gullubat @gulfishan @Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh @Guriya_Rani
@huny @H@!der @H!N@ @Hoorain @hania7012 @HWJ @Haider_Mk @Haya_ @Hay-at
@Iceage-TM @i love sahabah @italianVirus @illusionist @Island_Jewel @ijazamin @imama
@junaid_ak47 @Justin_ @Jahanger @Just_Like_Roze @kaskar @Kavi @khalid_khan @koochi @KrazzzyBoy
@lovely_eyes @Lost Passenger @Lightman @LUBABA @LostSea @Lafanter
@Mano_Doll @Mahen @maanu115 @Mantasha_Zawaar @Manxil @Marah @Mas00m-DeVil @marib @Menaz @minaahil
@Meekaeel @MSC @Minal @mrX @MumS @Muhammad_Rehman_Sabir @Mawaa_Khan @Mazyona
@Nadaan_Shazie @Naila_Rubab @namaal @NamaL @Nikka_Raja @nighatnaseem21 @Noor_Afridi @nizamuddin @Noman-
@Ocean-of-love @onemanarmy @p3arl @Pari_Qrakh @Prince-Farry @Princess_Nisa @Princess_E @pakhtun @PrinCe_
@Raat ki Rani @raaz the secret @Rahath @Ramsha_Cat @Ramiz @RaPuNzLe @reality @REHAN_UK @Robina_Rainbow@rooja
@seemab_khan @Syeda-Hilya @sweet-c-chori @ShehrYaar @shailina @Shoaib_Nasir @Salman_ @S_M_Muneeb @Star24@sonofaziz
@shzd @Sunny_Rano @Silent_tear_hurt @sweet bhoot @silent_heart @Sanafatima @SairaRizwan @Sweeta@Shona619@La-Haasil
@soul_of_silence. @Stylo_Princess @SUMAIKA @soul_snatcher @sweet_lily @sweet_c_kuri @Shayana @Sahil_@MysTeri0uS @SadiaXtyle
@Toobi @Twinkle Queen @Tanha_Dil @Tariq Saeed @ujalaa @Umeed_Ki_Kiran @umeedz @unpredictable2 @Untamed-Heart
@Vasim @Wafa_Khan @wajahat_ahmad @X_w @yoursks @Yuxra
@Zia_Hayderi @zaryaab @Ziddi_anGel @zonii @Z-4-Zahid @zealous @Zaad @Zypher @Zahabia @Zulfishan
 

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A n3st!
MashaAllah!I m just speechless...Koi apne ehsasaat ko itni khubsurti SE itna briefly b biyan kr SKTA hy..Masterpiece indeed!
Thanx for sharing :)
Mujh jaisey tif e maktab ko aap jaisey urdu Dano ki terha apney alfaaz aur andaaz e biyaan par itni qudrat to nahi ke apni tehreer se aap ke dil ko choo sakon
magar kuch tooty phooty alfaaz paish e nazar hen.waseela nazam ko hi banaya ke ke muej yehi aata he :p.. pasand naa bhi aaen to daad zaroor dijiye gaa himmat dikhaney ke liye :p




@Don @RedRose64 @saviou @Shiraz-Khan @AnadiL @Bird-Of-Paradise @DiLkash @shehr-e-tanhayi
@Ahmad-Hasan @fahadhassan @Umm-e-ahmad
@Abidi @Aayat @Aina_ @Armaghankhan @Angel_A @Ajnabhi @-Anna- @*Arshia* @Aks_ @Aaidah @Aizaa
@amerzish_malik @Arz0o @Arzoomehak @Asheer @Atif-adi @Awadiya @Aaylaaaaa @Ayesha-Ali @Afnan_ @A7if @Aliean
@Adorable_Pari @Awesome_Sunny @Ajnabee_Hoon
@Babar-Azam @Blue-Black @Bela @Brilliant_Boy @Binte_Hawwa @bilal_ishaq_786 @baba-cakes @Banjara_
@chai-mein-biscuit @CuTe_HiNa @Cheeky @Charming_Deep @colgatepak @Catastrophe @Chai- mein-biscut
@Danee @Dua001 @DevilJin @Dua_ @Dreamy Boy @dur-e-shawar @diya. @DeMon- @Diya_noor @Dil-Wale @duaabatool
@Eshal-Hoor @errorsss @Elif @Faiz4lyf @Flower_Flora @Fizaali @Fatima- @France-Boy
@genuine @gullubat @gulfishan @Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh @Guriya_Rani
@huny @H@!der @H!N@ @Hoorain @hania7012 @HWJ @Haider_Mk @Haya_ @Hay-at
@Iceage-TM @i love sahabah @italianVirus @illusionist @Island_Jewel @ijazamin @imama
@junaid_ak47 @Justin_ @Jahanger @Just_Like_Roze @kaskar @Kavi @khalid_khan @koochi @KrazzzyBoy
@lovely_eyes @Lost Passenger @Lightman @LUBABA @LostSea @Lafanter
@Mano_Doll @Mahen @maanu115 @Mantasha_Zawaar @Manxil @Marah @Mas00m-DeVil @marib @Menaz @minaahil
@Meekaeel @MSC @Minal @mrX @MumS @Muhammad_Rehman_Sabir @Mawaa_Khan @Mazyona
@Nadaan_Shazie @Naila_Rubab @namaal @NamaL @Nikka_Raja @nighatnaseem21 @Noor_Afridi @nizamuddin @Noman-
@Ocean-of-love @onemanarmy @p3arl @Pari_Qrakh @Prince-Farry @Princess_Nisa @Princess_E @pakhtun @PrinCe_
@Raat ki Rani @raaz the secret @Rahath @Ramsha_Cat @Ramiz @RaPuNzLe @reality @REHAN_UK @Robina_Rainbow@rooja
@seemab_khan @Syeda-Hilya @sweet-c-chori @ShehrYaar @shailina @Shoaib_Nasir @Salman_ @S_M_Muneeb @Star24@sonofaziz
@shzd @Sunny_Rano @Silent_tear_hurt @sweet bhoot @silent_heart @Sanafatima @SairaRizwan @Sweeta@Shona619@La-Haasil
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Muttalib Bhai.. yeh to cheating hui naa hamare sath :(
aap aisey likhen gee to HUM bachy jo apna mud'aa biyaan karney k liye alfaaz ki talash me marey marey phir rahy hen aap ki is tehreer ke baad to apney chunaao par chanaab ka pani hi dal saken ge naa :(




Bahut aala tehreer he wese.. Khush rehiye :)
Bhai urdu seekhte seekhte pushto ko bhi khona parhega
na idher ke rahengy na udher ke rahengy kyun keh main janta hoon keh
aap ki lab kushaai se mera musakh'khar hi banne wala hai
mgr kuch seekhne keliye kuch khona parhta hai

Thanks bro
 

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Mujh jaisey tif e maktab ko aap jaisey urdu Dano ki terha apney alfaaz aur andaaz e biyaan par itni qudrat to nahi ke apni tehreer se aap ke dil ko choo sakon
magar kuch tooty phooty alfaaz paish e nazar hen.waseela nazam ko hi banaya ke ke muej yehi aata he :p.. pasand naa bhi aaen to daad zaroor dijiye gaa himmat dikhaney ke liye :p




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MashaAllah!I m just speechless...Koi apne ehsasaat ko itni khubsurti SE itna briefly b biyan kr SKTA hy..Masterpiece indeed!
Thanx for sharing :)
aap ke yeh alfaaz Print kar ek frame karwaney waly hen.. especially hum jaisey khoty sikkon ke liye :D
bahut Shukriyaa :D aisey hi peeth thapthapati rehiye gaa :D
 

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Masha Allah Buhut Khobsorati se Aap ne Poora Maidaan maar liya hai
Plzzzzzzz mujhe apni shagirdi main Qabool kejiye
aap se aur bhi kaafi tips lene hain
Shagirdi me lene ke hum qabil nahi hue .. TIPS aap ko jo chhye huin private me aa ke le lijiye gaa =))
 
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