Live Wid RR - Prince Farry

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Prince-Farry

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and also 1 thing..apne mujhe 24 hrs ka time diya hai..to mai jab chahoon editing karwa sakta hon...edit ka option mere paas chala gaya to ismei mera to kasoor nai na{(angry)}
 
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Okay farry ka last round ka result ha:




2% is lie coz is se b better likh saktay thay...

Still Congrats Farry:)

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RR..1% kato sirf...i em serious...maine agar vm nia kiya hota size par to pher katna make sense hai..
 
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~Prince-Farry~ said:
and also 1 thing..apne mujhe 24 hrs ka time diya hai..to mai jab chahoon editing karwa sakta hon...edit ka option mere paas chala gaya to ismei mera to kasoor nai na{(angry)}
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main ne tumhari lines k marks nai minus kie.. coz may check kia ha wo 3 lines ki he poetry ha.. i guess is se better ho sakta tha...
 
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RedRose64 said:


baki sab k to 3 , 4% minus kie hain marks is round may.. per tumharay just 2% coz khud se poetry likhi.. per is se b better likh saktay thay tum...
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han to pher abhi apni post kyon edit ki u ne...agar 2% likhna tha pehle to pehle hi post mei likhti na...yeh ajeeb hai...
i know meripoetry itnibhi achi nai...i accept it..but jab ap post karo to post par atleast result ko edit na karo
 
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~Prince-Farry~ said:
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Round 4

Assalamoalaikum wrwb

Jesa ke mujhe kaha gaya hai ke mai apne dil ki baat 3 lines mei 3 members ke lie izhar karoon.....to maine khud ki abhi tooti pooti sharayna andaaz mei anjaam di hai....umeed hai ap ko pasand ayegi
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App ki shafkat hamesha mere dil ko Sirate Mustakeem ki roshni dikhati hey.
App ki nasiyet hameesha mujey akle-saleem se roshna kerti hey.
App ki mahrbaaani tapti dhoop main chaaoon ka ehssaas hey.

DEDICATED TO ~HOORAIN~ SIS

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Chale jab kathun rastoon mai to mila koi app jaisa bhai.
Rastey ki thakaan or manzel ki justujo app jaise bhai se mill ker bohet kum hoi.
App jab bi door hote ho zindagi bohet mayoos or adoori lagti hey.

DEDICATED TO ~SAVIOU~ (NASIR BHAI)-
currently not active but will be active soon inshaAllah
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App ki shaesta guftugu kanoon main shehed jaisa rus ghoolti hey
App ke shukhsiyet paani main thertey hoye kunwal ke phool jaisi hey
Jo dekhney mai khobseret or mahrabaani ki tarha nazuk or halki phulki hey

DEDICATED TO ~BAHAAR~
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Hmmm MashAllah Saviou k bare mei jho aapne likha buss voh sab samajh aye and buhut acha likha unhe padhna chahye ek bar k unke ghair hazri mei ab bhi kafi members unhe yaad kerte hain... :)

Hoorain k bare mei bhi acha likha aapne per akle-saleem ka matlab??

u tu mere urdu bhi koi khaas nai
aur Bahar k bare mei jho likha uskay ek line mei thora hassi aye :| voh yeh k aapke shaista baaten kanoon mei shahad jaisa rus gholti hain :D dont know why...
else ache koshish the aapki I hope RR ko aapki mahnut dekh ker marks dene chahye because aapki koshish dekh rahi hain...:)
 
Prince-Farry

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RedRose64 said:
okay farry now apna 3 dayz Live Wid RR k sath guzar k ap ko kaisa laga.. short may ending words likhiye phir is thread ko close kar doon...
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shuru mei mujhe laga ke pata nai kaise kaise task karne ko milegein...coz maine intro wala thread sahi se parha tak nai tha..
but since senior member hon to ismei participate bhi karlia..aur participate karke alhamdulilah result ki jesi umeed ki thi..woh bhi samne hai...
besides...mai sab ko thanks karna chahta hon jinho ne mujhe idhar akar support kiya aur mere hard work ko appreciate kiya...naam nai loonga coz dey know woh kon hein..
and lastly, bht maza aya...thanks for your time..and thanks everyone for being so kind...
may Allah swt bless all of you..AMEEN
 
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Prince-Farry

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RedRose64 said:
or haaaaan finally Red Rose ap ne mughhse lay he lia.. soon apk showcase may red rose show ho jayga..:)
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woh to maine lena hi tha....teen saal maine falto mei nai guzare hein idhar.../:)
dekhte hein kab tak yeh rose murjhata nai...
 
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