Assalamoalaikum wrwb TM
mai abhi apni 50% sharing share kar raha hoo apke saath...abhi maine poetry ko final touch bhi dena hai..woh mai inshaAllah sehri mei donga...filhal jo maine cake banaya hai PAKISTAN ke lie..woh yeh raha..umeed hai apko pasand aega..mai inshaAllah poetry 6 hrs baad share karonga...intezar karyega...sorry for being delay
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And Here is my poetry..Koi to ho jo thame taqdeerein omam
ke yeh pardes mei khuwar hai
Koi nahi jo himmat barhaye
ab khoshish hi bekaar hai
Jawaanon ke hosle zameen se hai parst
kuch nahi hosakta ab inki vichar hai
Is bar jo khiza ae is desh mei
koi nahi janta ke kesi thi aur kia bahaar hai
Taleem kia thi, kia hai aur kyon hai
ab naye nasal ko isse kia saroqaar hai
Sab kehte hein ke badle ge halaat hamare
par kisi ko bhi nahi inka intezar hai
Reare ki haddi jo tooti is mulk ki
bechara ab chalne se bhi lachaar hai
ahan...kiya baat hy![thumbs up :-bd :-bd](/styles/default/xenforo/smilies/more/yahoo/113.gif)
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gud luck...!!!!
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cake khudi banaya
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gud luck...!!!!