Tm's Poet Competition December 2013

[Fantasy]

thanx 4 d info dear.......................

u come come

 

[Mahen]

u he bata rhi thi mods ko pata chal jata hy oar sarla mod e hy na

nahi yawl post edit ka humy pata nhi chlta delete ki hoie ka pata chalta

 

[Fantasy]

nahi yawl post edit ka humy pata nhi chlta delete ki hoie ka pata chalta

ahaaaan OK acha kiya bta diya

btw meri poetry pe comment e mar do acha sa

 

[LaaraibLikhaari]

main bas space dena chaahti thi...................
khair yeh tagg q nahi ho raha.....................?

 

[Mahen]

ye rhi meri sharing ​

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guzishta 20 salun sy​

december yunhi he aata tha​

k apny saath dhundh oar kuher ki chadar b lata tha​

jisy wo meri ankhun per ​

yun kas k bandh deta tha​

nazer kuch b na ata tha​

(k dhundhlaye huy manzer)​

kahani oar hoti thi​

nazer ko oar dikhta tha​

barf k zarrun k peechy​

sachai dab c jati thi​

mager is bar December ka​

kahun... ehsaan jana hy​

k ab ki baar aya hy​

sunehri dhoop laya hy​

k jis k samny her shakhs ka chehra chamakta hy​

sabhi suchaai khulti hy​

sabhi manzer sulajhty haen​

k jesy khwab sy niklaen ​

to sary raz khulty haen​

December ny to ab ki bar esi kr di chalaki ​

na koi kuhr ankhun pe ​

na dhundh c ho jami baqi . . .​

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(written by me)​

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@Hoorain @Sarlaa_Siddaqui @Mahen @Star24 @S_ChiragH @attiya​

wowwwwww kia bat hai kato u ki bhot acha likha hai
keep it up dearu

 

[Fantasy]

wowwwwww kia bat hai kato u ki bhot acha likha hai
keep it up dearu

thankoooo

 

[Fantasy]

main bas space dena chaahti thi...................
khair yeh tagg q nahi ho raha.....................?

pata nhi

 

[LaaraibLikhaari]

jeet ka ailaan kab hoga janab..................?
aaj raat ya kal raat tak...................

 

[Hoorain]

tou yaha kon sa pata chlta k edit ki ya nahi

ye kai ho rha hay

 

[Hoorain]

jeet ka ailaan kab hoga janab..................?
aaj raat ya kal raat tak...................

aik 2 din baad

 

[Hoorain]

main bas space dena chaahti thi...................
khair yeh tagg q nahi ho raha.....................?

@ type karain n without space member name
like @LaaraibLikhaari

 

[Hoorain]

ye rhi meri sharing ​

​

guzishta 20 salun sy​

december yunhi he aata tha​

k apny saath dhundh oar kuher ki chadar b lata tha​

jisy wo meri ankhun per ​

yun kas k bandh deta tha​

nazer kuch b na ata tha​

(k dhundhlaye huy manzer)​

kahani oar hoti thi​

nazer ko oar dikhta tha​

barf k zarrun k peechy​

sachai dab c jati thi​

mager is bar December ka​

kahun... ehsaan jana hy​

k ab ki baar aya hy​

sunehri dhoop laya hy​

k jis k samny her shakhs ka chehra chamakta hy​

sabhi suchaai khulti hy​

sabhi manzer sulajhty haen​

k jesy khwab sy niklaen ​

to sary raz khulty haen​

December ny to ab ki bar esi kr di chalaki ​

na koi kuhr ankhun pe ​

na dhundh c ho jami baqi . . .​

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(written by me)​

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@Hoorain @Sarlaa_Siddaqui @Mahen @Star24 @S_ChiragH @attiya​

wowwww cha agai ho bmw
beautiful
bohat khusburat concept,,,dhundh aur dhoop ka

 

[Hoorain]

hey btw everyone apni apni sharing TM Poets sec may b post karain
@Kit_Kat @Chaya @Guriya_Rani @laaraiblikhari

 

[Hoorain]

walikumasaalam
hmm nice topic
lakin mai to bas chori karti hn itna time nhi hota mind bhi use karoo

chornni

 

[Hoorain]

here is my sharing ​

mujhy yaad ata hai wo december ka mahina ​

wo pagal si larki ka halka sa muskrana ​

uska muskra kar palken jhukana ​

mera tarap tarap kar mar jana ​

mera har dard usko dekh kar bhool jana ​

uska mujh se roth jana ​

or phir mera usko mana ​

uska mujh se door jana or​

lout kar mere paas a jana​

mujhy behad yaad ata hai ​

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Ye Barish Ye Sard Hawa Ye Hijr Ka Aalm​

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Jahan Par Rait K Zarray Sitaray Hain​

Najanay kis December main ​

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Tumhen Milne ko aana hai​

mujhy yaad ata hai wo december ka mahina​

wo pagal si larki ka halka sa muskrana ​

@Sarlaa_Siddaqui @Chaya @Hoorain @Star24 @Pari @Mahen​

bohat khoob

 

[Hoorain]

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دسمبر کی یہ سردی اور تیری یاد آئ ہے​

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مرے سر پر تری یادوں نے پھر چادر اڑھائی ہے​

مرے یخ بستہ رخساروں پہ گرتے گرم یہ آنسوں​

دسمبرمیں بھی یادوں نے تری آتش جلائی ہے​

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bohat khusburat lines

 

[Fantasy]

hey btw everyone apni apni sharing TM Poets sec may b post karain
@Kit_Kat @Chaya @Guriya_Rani @laaraiblikhari

kr di hy

 

[Fantasy]

wowwww cha agai ho bmw
beautiful
bohat khusburat concept,,,dhundh aur dhoop ka

yup... dhund mae loag pehchany nhi jaty na dhoop me saaf dikhta hy

btw thankooo

 

[Hoorain]

yup... dhund mae loag pehchany nhi jaty na dhoop me saaf dikhta hy

btw thankooo

yup bohat nicely use kiye aap ne words
hidden talent
likhti rha karo i like ur thinking

 

[Fantasy]

yup bohat nicely use kiye aap ne words
hidden talent
likhti rha karo i like ur thinking

thankoooo