Yeh Dard K Tukray Hain Ashaar Nahi Saghar (contest)

[Shiraz-Khan]

Assalaamo-3laekum wrwb...

Tu g ye dard k tukron ka silsila... aagay barhatey hein... aaj ki kefiat ya halat hey.... "FARAMOSHI"

Note: Word ka laana zarori nae hey... zaeyqa zaror ana chahiye...

ik e.g. dey detey hein...

without word..
Bhool jana usay mushkil to nahi hai lakin
kaam asaaN bhi hum se kahaN hotay hain

with word...
zindgaani jis ko kehtay haiN faramoshi hai yeh
Khvab hai, ghaflat hai,sar-masti hai, be-hoshi hai yeh



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[shehr-e-tanhayi]

wah aj ka task kia h ..........

30 November tak ka task hai yeh... yahan roz aik new word ya situation di jaey gi jis par zyada se zyada sher arz karne hain... doosron kay.... un par marks milen gay... jeetne walay ko award milay ga.

aaj ka new word aa gaya... ab us par sher likhiay.

 

[Ahmad-Hasan]

30 November tak ka task hai yeh... yahan roz aik new word ya situation di jaey gi jis par zyada se zyada sher arz karne hain... doosron kay.... un par marks milen gay... jeetne walay ko award milay ga.

wo to smj a gai aj ka word pch raha hn

 

[shehr-e-tanhayi]

wo to smj a gai aj ka word pch raha hn

Abhi Shiraz Khan ne diya to hai word..... 3 step uuper dekhne ki zehmat kijiay na....

 

[Ahmad-Hasan]

Assalaamo-3laekum wrwb...

Tu g ye dard k tukron ka silsila... aagay barhatey hein... aaj ki kefiat ya halat hey.... "FARAMOSHI"

Note: Word ka laana zarori nae hey... zaeyqa zaror ana chahiye...

ik e.g. dey detey hein...

without word..
Bhool jana usay mushkil to nahi hai lakin
kaam asaaN bhi hum se kahaN hotay hain

with word...
zindgaani jis ko kehtay haiN faramoshi hai yeh
Khvab hai, ghaflat hai,sar-masti hai, be-hoshi hai yeh



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Sahil pay kharay ho tumhain kya gham , chalay jana
Sahil pay kharay ho tumhain kya gham , chalay jana
Main doob raha hoon , abhi duba to naheen hoon

Main doob raha hoon , abhi duba to naheen hoon
Aye wada faramosh , main tujhsa to naheen hoon
Har Zulm tera yaad hai , bhula to naheen hoon
Har Zulm tera yaad hai , bhula to naheen hoon
Aye wada faramoosh , main tujhsa to naheen hoon

Chup chaap sahi maslehatan , waqt kay hathoon
Chup chaap sahi maslehatan , waqt kay hathoon
Majboor sahi, waqt se hara to naheen hoon
Majboor sahi, waqt se hara to naheen hoon
Ae wada faramoosh , main tujhsa to naheen hoon

Muztar kyon mujhay dekhta rehta hai zamana
Deewana sahi, un ka tamasha toh naheen hoon
Deewana sahi, un ka tamasha toh naheen hoon

Aye wada faramoosh , main tujhsa to naheen hoon
Har Zulm tera yaad hai , bhula to naheen hoon
Har Zulm tera yaad hai , bhula to naheen hoon
Har zulm...
Har zulm...
Har zulm...
my fvt .. @shehr-e-tanhayi @Shiraz-Khan

 

[shehr-e-tanhayi]

@Ahmad-Hasan bahot zabardast.
yaad rakhiay ga k yeh contest hai..... jitne zyada ashaar post kartay jaayen gay, utnay zyada marks milen gay.
poori ghazal likhna zaroori nahi hai.
iss word ya situation k zyada se zyada sher post kijiay alag alag reply mein.

 

[Ahmad-Hasan]

@Ahmad-Hasan bahot zabardast.
yaad rakhiay ga k yeh contest hai..... jitne zyada ashaar post kartay jaayen gay, utnay zyada marks milen gay.
poori ghazal likhna zaroori nahi hai.
iss word ya situation k zyada se zyada sher post kijiay alag alag reply mein.

Ab kar ke faramosh to na shaad karo ge,
Per hum jo na hon ge to bohat yaad karo ge.

 

[Ahmad-Hasan]

jo sb kch mahu kr dy dil se
wo nasha kch zaida kr lia kia...........

 

[saviou]

Kya kami rakkhi thi doosti nibhaney mai humney,
Ki ek ajnabee ke liye kerdiya tumney paraya humey!

@Shiraz-Khan @shehr-e-tanhayi

 

[Ahmad-Hasan]

بند باہر سے میری ذات کا در ہے مجھ میں.."
میں نہیں خود میں ، یہ اک عام خبر ہے مجھ میں..

 

[Ahmad-Hasan]

ek hi apna milny wala tha
esa bichra k phr mila e nhi

 

[khalid_khan]

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Aslaam O Allaykum
palkeiN nam rehne lageiN, dil wehshatoN se bhara ho, jaise bisaat-e-jaaN pe azaab se utar aaey hoN. Beqarari chalknay ko beqarar ho to dil chahta hai k kisi bhi tarah iss meiN bhari ghutan baahir niklay.
Kuch log aisay meiN maar DhaaRh par bhi utar aatay haiN lakin baa-zouq log inn baatoN se duur bhagtay haiN aur woh apnay jazbaat ko sirf aur sirf alfaaz ki soorat biyaan kartay haiN. Rooh ki gehraiyoN se niklay yeh alfaaz suchay motiyoN ki tarah aik laRi meiN piroay jaayeN to beqarari k yeh jazbaat sher ki soorat dhal jatay haiN. jaisa k SAAGAR SADIQUI baray karb se keh gay haiN

yeh dard k Tukray haiN , ashaar nahi SAGAR
Hum kaanch k dhaagay meiN zakhmoN ko pirotay haiN

Khush naseeb hotay haiN woh log jo apnay jazbaat, ehsasaat, seene meiN shor machatay junoon ko alfaaz meiN dhaal lete haiN to dard kuch kam ho jata hai ya yooN kahiay k uski shiddat ka ehsaas kuch had tak kam ho jata hai. SHAKEEB JALALI kehtay haiN

Ek hashar sa bapa tha mere dil mein ay SHAKEEB
kholi jo khiRkiyaN to zara shor ghaT gaya

Iss thread mein karna yeh hai k hum rozana aik kaifiyat ya halat dein gay jis par aap ne zyada se zyada ashaar post karne haiN. Yeh kaifiyat ya halat kisi khaas lafz ki soorat bhi ho sakti hai .. to aap k ashaar mein woh alfaaz aanay zaroori haiN. jitna guR utna meetha... jitnay ashaar, utnay number.
Aaj ki kaifiyat ya halat hai
masrofiyat
iss lafz ka sher mein aana zaroori nahi hai.
braaey mehrbani agar aap kisi ko TAG kareN to lambi si list laganay ki zarorat nahi hai. Sirf dilchaspi lene walay chand members ko hi tag kijiay.
Award kisay milay ga..... is ka faisla aakhir mein ho ga. 30 November tak yeh Thread chalay ga.
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Samenj nhi aa rha ki kiya likhu
Qubul-e- jurm karte hai,tere kadmo me gir kar............Saza-e- moot manzoor ""sahib""Teri judai nahi............

 

[DiLkash]

very nice

 

[shehr-e-tanhayi]

very nice

THANK U

 

[DiLkash]

THANK U

yar sher ni bnta na or kuch yad bi nahi arha tha

 

[shehr-e-tanhayi]

yar sher ni bnta na or kuch yad bi nahi arha tha

sher banana nahi hai....... kisi ka bhi likha ho.... ab to new word a gaya hai FARAMOSHI... us k baray likhna hai

 

[DiLkash]

sher banana nahi hai....... kisi ka bhi likha ho.... ab to new word a gaya hai FARAMOSHI... us k baray likhna hai

ok

 

[shehr-e-tanhayi]

ok

shuruu ho jaaiay shabash

 

[Fantasy]

Assalaamo-3laekum wrwb...

Tu g ye dard k tukron ka silsila... aagay barhatey hein... aaj ki kefiat ya halat hey.... "FARAMOSHI"

Note: Word ka laana zarori nae hey... zaeyqa zaror ana chahiye...

ik e.g. dey detey hein...

without word..
Bhool jana usay mushkil to nahi hai lakin
kaam asaaN bhi hum se kahaN hotay hain

with word...
zindgaani jis ko kehtay haiN faramoshi hai yeh
Khvab hai, ghaflat hai,sar-masti hai, be-hoshi hai yeh



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wabasta meti yad se kuch talkhiyan b the
acha kia jo mujh ko faramosh ker diya

 

[Fantasy]

yad kr k mjhy takleef he hoti ho gi
ik qisa hunpurana sa bhula dy mujh ko